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Happy Birthday, Reader!! Have a fantastic day
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I think adventure together is guaranteed. They both love the stars and having each other will make even the long journeys fun. Thank you for all of your review and your constant support, Def.
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Thank you, tim :8) I'm very happy you enjoyed the ride. Thank you for all of your reviews and your support.
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Thanks, Def. Jorrah was a troubled man. He went after Jenson because he thought J ruined his powerful future in the Terezin ruling family. He wanted Audra punished because she questioned his right to hate Jenson and not taking care of his son. I think it's good for him that he's dying. thank you for your review and your support, Def.
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The first year Jenson stayed close to home, but yes, the second year they did spend a lot of time apart. I suspect that was one of Audra's motivations for hiring M. She was probably tired of hearing her brother talk about him I'm pleased that you like how this ended. I do want to start a sequel at some point, but even if I don't I wanted everyone to know they were both in a good place. Thank you for your review and all of your support, Drew.
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lol thank you for this review, Drew. It really made my morning. I loved Merrick as a little boy. He was a sweet kid who was able to draw Jenson out when no one else really could. Thank you again for your review and all of your support, Drew.
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Thank you, Gary. It has been a long journey for these two, but they are definitely happy where they are now I love these guys and I do hope to revisit them again. Thank you for all of your support and your wonderful reviews. I love reading each of them.
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Thank you, Dugh. That's exactly what I was hoping for... an ending where you don't NEED a sequel, but I can do one down the road if I want, or if there is demand for one. thank you for your review and your support.
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Thank you, Dr.P. I'm very happy you enjoyed the story. I had a lot of fun writing it. Thank you for all of your reviews and your support.
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Thank you, B I do have a sequel planned, but I have another project I'm working on first. Thank you for your review and all of your support.
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lol I knew you'd notice that comment. I'm not sure if there are any surprises in the epilogue, but it does tie up some loose ends. A sequel is planned. but is on the back burner right now. Thank you for your review and your support, John.
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Thank you, tim. My goal was to create characters that people cared about and wanted to know more about. I'm happy you've enjoyed the where I took them.
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Thank you, Dugh. I'm really happy with how well the story has been received. I hope you like the epilogue
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Well the epilogue is up now, so we'll see if all of your questions were answered. Thank you for your review and your support, Puppi.
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Epilogue Merrick looked around the room at the faces of his new team. “That’s everything for now. Dismissed!” As one, the group rose and left the room, the buzz of conversation following them. Merrick smiled and grabbed his comm pad. “That went well,” an amused voice said from the door. Jenson was leaning against the wall, smiling at him. “It did.” Merrick grinned at his lover. “Hollis prepared them well, so the transition should go smoothly.” “I think the only issue you’re goi
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Thank you It's been great working on this story with you too. The time you spent editing and beta reading and all of your great suggestions have helped me to make this a story I'm very proud of.
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I hope the epilogue gives everyone the answers they want. Thank you for reading and for all of your wonderful reviews. I love reading them. The fact that you find the characters and story interesting are great compliments. Although they are fictional characters I wanted to create men that people would want to know more about. I appreciate your support and your review, Dr.P.
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I think Jorrah is a troubled man who saw his future as part of a powerful family, through his son, destroyed and blamed Jenson. Of course the office was christened. Merrick realized that Jenson needed to take his mind off of things, and neither one of them would be patient enough to get to a bed. I love that you can see the connection between them. It's more than just lust and sex... they're also each others' closest friend. Thank you for the great review, Drew. I hope you like the epilogue just as much
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Thank you, Onim I'm very happy you enjoyed the ride, so far.
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Chapter 12 Poetry prompt 15- Ode to Ra
LitLover commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 12 Poetry prompt 15- Ode to Ra
This makes me want to lie out on the grass or the dock at the cottage and feel the sun warm me to my bones. It may not cure, but it does soothe. It was a beautiful ode to a god that brings light into our lives. -
Chapter 28 Jenson stepped off of the ship, happy to be back on familiar soil. So much had happened in the last weeks. They’d lost so much on this mission… he looked towards the rover where Merrick was speaking to Sergeant Varallo and Connor Weir… but he’d also gained more than he’d thought possible. “Are you going straight to the compound?” his father asked, stopping beside him. “The Starjumper hasn’t arrived yet, but they’re in the sector.” The vampire turned to the senior Shey, whose
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Thanks, Def This is a little bittersweet for me too. I'm going to miss these guys, but I have a feeling they're not going to go away forever. Merrick and Jenson are together, finally. It has been a long time in coming, hasn't it? Thank you for the review and your support, Def.
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Chapter 10 Floating Toward Shore
LitLover commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Floating Toward Shore
I think their lives are coming together nicely. I love how Craig referred to the house as his home several times in this chapter. It wasn't just lip service (since he wasn't actually talking to anyone else) but his honest feeling about the place. Craig's design sense is amazing. I could imagine the renovations he was describing. I can see someday soon him joining Jared full time in his business... especially when word gets around how good they are as a team. Even Carly was behaving and acting like a human being. She has a lot to make up for, but she's taking some good baby steps in the right direction. I hope she keeps on that path This was a wonderful feel good chapter and put a smile on my face. Thank you. -
Chapter 8 For richer, for poorer
LitLover commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 8 For richer, for poorer
Their home and family is really starting to come together. And they actually got an intimate moment in there Im with Patrick... I thought it was kind of romantic for Peter to be so protective of Patrick's health, but at the same time not wanting him to wait for too long. Peter really is a sweetheart. I'm glad Patrick was honest with Peter about the money and why he wants to spend it on their home and Michael. I know Peter will likiely still have issues if Patrick tries to spend 'too much' on him, but I doubt Patrick will go overboard anyways. He just doesn't seem like the type. -
Chapter 11- Poetry prompt 5- In My Dottage
LitLover commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11- Poetry prompt 5- In My Dottage
Haha as I get older I agree more and more with this poem. Aging isn't necessarily painful, but it is achey. I think, though, that you could go up against a lot of much younger men and come out ahead
