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  1. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    You're right, if Merrick had been killed J probably would have lost his mind and his concern for his own safety in his desire to avenge his death. The Senator is a question that Merrick might be able to shed some light on. Thank you for your review and your support, Dr.P
  2. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    J was a little tunnel visioned, but I think it was understandable. There is more waiting, but not for too long Thank you for the review and your support, tim.
  3. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    lol I didn't actually intend that to be a cliffie. I thought everyone would be happy to know that Merrick was waking up. There are a lot of questions to be answered and Merrick may have answers to some of them. Thank you for your review and your unwavering support, Gary I appreciate all of the time you spend helping me.
  4. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    Unfortunately, with the current innovations in space travel, by the time you got there it would all be over anyways. Jenson was pretty tunnel visioned, but I think it might be better now that he's seen for himself that Merrick is alive and well. Intrigue and back-stabbing do seem to happen a lot in politics don't they? Working hard on Chapter 27 now. The rough draft is done. I just have to look it over a few times before getting it to my fabulous editor. Thank you for your review and your support, B.
  5. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    Oh I have no doubt he'll get a kiss. lol Thank you for your review and your support, Puppi
  6. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    It's only a little cliffhanger... and it's a good one, right? Merrick is waking up Thanks for the review and following the story.
  7. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    Chapter 26 The flight to Alectera felt like the longest Jenson had ever taken. Every minute he was on the shuttle was a minute he wasn’t with Merrick. He needed to see for himself that Merrick was alive. Audra was upset when she was told about the shooting. She’d tried to insist on coming with him, but Jenson refused. There was no point in inciting the Alecterans further with the presence of a strong-willed female. The trip was going to be stressful enough without worrying if his siste
  8. LitLover

    Turn The Page

    I think it's everyone's hope that they will be remembered fondly. For artists and authors we hope our work will be thought of in the same way. I don't think you have anything to worry about. Your work has touched a lot of people and is held in the hearts and minds of many.
  9. LitLover

    Chapter 9

    So this isn't just about some wannabe Dom who doesn't listen to safe words? It could potentially be a murderer? If it is the same guy, he was pretty stupid to draw attention to himself the way he has. I still don't think Toby really knows what he's in for with that 'show' though.
  10. So the sexual content warning... maybe it should be a spontaneous combustion warning? Really, M & K's alone time is always wonderful, even if they're just hanging out on the couch watching tv. It's the emotional connection between them that gets to me. The love making is so hot because of how much each man wants the other to feel pleasure... to feel physically how much they love the other. Alone time is going to come at a premium very soon so they really need to enjoy all of the quiet moments they can get. The puppies... OMG I love the names! The reason behind the names was really touching and very Kendall. This happened when Kendall was still hiding his feelings, yet somehow Michael managed to do something so sweet and so loving (and I count taking care of a sick Kendall in this). It's really no wonder Kendall was carrying a torch for so long, I think most of your readers are half in love with him themselves . I can understand why the lilies would be special to him.
  11. Damn, Gary.. that was intense and amazing. You're probably used to people saying this, but it's no less true: You are the master of love scenes. The connection and love you're able to convey through words is wonderful. I love how playful Jared and Craig have become. From the 'Martha' comments to 'And you told me you’d be my bottom,' I was feeling the joy with them. And Craig might say he doesn't like being called Martha, but I think he secretly loves that Jared is able to tease him like that now. I think you should come to my place and help me redecorate. The house and decorating you've described sound beautiful. Their house is going to look like a home in no time. (ps I that Jared pushed the electronics back for Bailey. So much the dad )
  12. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    I don't think I'd want the Sheys out for me either. As for the Senator? You do make some good points. Thank you for your review and your support, Def
  13. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    Well he is going to bring him back. They may need to shackle each other to a bed to stop from getting hurt though
  14. There was certainly a lot of mutual teasing going on haha. The anticipation is going to make these two a little on edge but I think it'll be worth the wait for both of them. I adored the scene over breakfast. Michael is a sweet boy and I think he brings that additional unconditional love that Patrick needs. Peter does too, but Michael has accepted him as a step-parent. That can be a huge hurdle to overcome annnnnnd now I want pancakes.
  15. It would be tough for an Alpha to submit to anyone, especially a physically weaker human. The implications of Colt also being his mate are intriguing though. What happens to a wolf in JAR's MetaVerse when their mate dies?
  16. Mmm the whipped cream and Leo sound great It was sweet that Colt did that, but it did need the "special" gifts to make it more of a a Colt/JAR thing haha.
  17. LitLover

    MetaFanFIc Game

    haha that was hilarious! Sam and Isaac didn't know what hit them. It's fun to see them playful like that
  18. Yay! First like and first review I loved Jazz's attitude in this chapter. He's secure enough in himself to appreciate being admired. Having anyone, regardless if they're the same sex, find you attractive should be flattering. Rob was great, standing up to Chris and making sure the rest of the team was in agreement as well. I don't know if this will hold up after Rob and Jazz have left the school, but its a great start. I can't see the coach having a problem with what Rob did or said. he was standing up for a fellow player and he didn't resort to violence. he did very well. I also love that Rob didn't press to find out if Tobias was actually gay or not. In the end it doesn't matter, it was the perception got him bullied. Great job, Tim.
  19. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    Yeah, he's grumpy all right. I hope he remembers to keep his guard up as well. Things are going to get messier. Thank you for your review and your support, B.
  20. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    Well apparently there was a troop of Mounties and possibly a pitchfork brigade standing by (not to mention a really pissed off vampire in my head) if anything happened to M, so self-preservation may have been a contributing factor. haha J is pretty pissed off and will be looking for someone to punish for this. I would not want him (or any of the Sheys) angry with me. Thank you for all of your support and encouragement and for another great review, my friend.
  21. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    Haha yes they do seem to take turns getting hurt. Don't worry, some alone time is in the cards for these two. I've already been told it's long overdue for them. haha Thank you for your support and your review.
  22. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    There's going to be more details in the next chapter so I don't want to say much now. You do pose a lot of good questions though Thank you for your review and your support, Tim.
  23. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    'The toothsome one' I love that It is true though. lol I think there is going to be hell to pay regardless of what happens at this point. Both M and J have had something they loved hurt. Thank you for your review and your support, tim.
  24. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    No, I don't think Jorrah thought much about anything, besides hurting Jenson. Not a smart thing to do with the Shey family, apparently. Thank you, Drew, for another great review and all of your support.
  25. LitLover

    Moving On

    I'm really happy that Tait is feeling strong enough to start to move on with his life and stand up to Sean. Maybe he can start to rebuild his life now... with the support of people who care about him. I know he loved Leo, but I hope he doesn't get sucked back into a relationship with him. Leo is doing a wonderful thing for him, but I don't know if Leo would be truly ready to settle down, or if the regret he feels is tied to Tait being hurt. I can understand why Phil is reluctant to pursue anything with Tait. Tait is still recovering from a disastrous marriage. Taking on another relationship, where if it fails could ruin a friendship, would make a lot of people leery. I do hope they give a relationship a chance, but it's good that it looks like they're going to take their time.
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