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  1. LitLover

    Chapter 8

    I find those adults who answer a child's questions and don't make them feel like 'pests', are often remembered with great affection. Children are often brimming with curiosity and Merrick was no different. The difference is that Merrick's affection turned in to something more. The session under the tree did come to a screeching halt with Merrick's willingness to be bitten. 'Feeding from the source' is a very intimate act in this vampire world and Merrick offering that woke Jenson from the haze he was in. Thank you for another wonderful review. I appreciate it.
  2. I loved this, Tim. It was a beautiful tribute.
  3. LitLover

    Chapter 7

    Thank you for this wonderfully well thought out review. I can't really go in to Kel or what he means to Jenson, but I loved the thought you put in to their possible history. With Landin, I agree that the smaller opponent is usually not given due respect. In this case, Merrick already told Tei that Landin was very skilled. It's his fault for underestimating his opponent. A mistake he may not make again There were a lot of double entendres, but I agree... the "later" held a lot of promise. Thank you again for your great review. I appreciate it
  4. LitLover

    Chapter 6

    A wonderful agony... I like that For me, this is a relationship not to be rushed. There are things that have been hinted at that make Jenson reluctant to pursue a relationship with Merrick and some of those things will start to surface as they spend more time together. Thank you for your great review. I really appreciate it
  5. LitLover

    Chapter 9

    No, I don't think he would wait forever. It's fortunate that he is so proactive Thank you for the review and your support, Tim. I appreciate it.
  6. LitLover

    Chapter 5

    Thank you for picking the story back up again. I think it will take something extraordinary to break down the barriers that Jenson has built, but I think that Merrick is equally persistent. Thank you for you great review and your support. I appreciate it
  7. LitLover

    Chapter 9

    I think Audra did give her brother something to think about, now let's see what he decides to do with the information. About Kel... Jenson is going to have to figure out a way to tell that story. Thank you for your review and your support. I really appreciate it
  8. LitLover

    Chapter 9

    Thank you, Eagle. I like Audra too I'm pretty sure that Merrick has his climbing equipment at the ready (does that sound as bad as I think it did? ) Thank you for your review and your support. I really appreciate it.
  9. LitLover

    Chapter 9

    I think you're right about Jenson. It's one thing for him to deny sex, but how will he deal with the thought of losing love? Merrick is very good at keeping Jenson off balance. I think the month together will be good to give these two time to resolve some issues and get past Jenson's walls. Thank you so much for your support and for this great review. I truly appreciate both.
  10. LitLover

    Chapter 9

    Thank you Drew. I like Audra too. She loves her brother and enjoys keeping him on his toes. haha More about Kel is coming soon. I promise Thank you for your review and your support. I really appreciate it
  11. Such lovely imagery in this poem. The freedom of that swim, knowing society would frown on you would be exciting. The idea of a warm beautiful body with you doesn't hurt either
  12. LitLover

    Chapter 9

    I would imagine the world of dignitaries and diplomats is a relatively small one, no matter the species, so most people would at least be acquainted with one another, even if they weren't friends. The intent was to show how many generations could be working together in the same field in this vampire world. Thank you for the review and your support. I have no comment about your "no comment"
  13. LitLover

    Chapter 8

    Now, now. I swear this wasn't done with the intent to tease... it was just an interesting side effect. lol Thank you for your review and your support. I appreciate it
  14. LitLover

    Chapter 9

    Chapter 9 Jenson stood, staring at the door Connor Weir had just exited. Merrick was going on the mission to the Alecteran system with him? Of all of the things he thought he was going to hear when Connor walked down the stairs, that was the last thing he expected. “Well, it looks like we’re finally going on a mission together,” he said when he was finally able to find his voice. He felt the younger man’s hand on his shoulder. “I’m looking forward to it.” He turned to Merrick. “I’ll s
  15. LitLover

    Chapter 8

    Sorry, I'm not laughing at you... (pain?) I'm just happy that the story can garner that kind of reaction. Thank you for your scolding and your review, Tim. I truly appreciate it
  16. LitLover

    Chapter 8

    I am happy you like the tension between these two men. I feel a little mean for denying them for so long, but there are reasons. We`ll find out more about Jenson`s reasons in the next few chapters. Thank you for your review and your support. I really appreciate it
  17. LitLover

    Chapter 8

    I think Connor is an observant man who knows his son well. lol You'll find out more about Jenson's reasons for his reluctance in the next few chapters, but I agree with you... he is breaking down Thank you for your great review and all of your support. I appreciate it.
  18. LitLover

    Chapter 7

    Thank you, Def Merrick does seem to love double entendre lol We'll have to see if his persistence is stronger than Jenson's stubbornness. Thank you for your great review and your support. I appreciate it.
  19. The person that inspired these words is a very lucky man. I have nothing to say that will do these justice but they were simply beautiful.
  20. I really loved Nate's POV. He is such a sweet kid. His confusion over old crushes, new crushes, first kisses, friendships and betrayals was realistically done. It was so sweet to read how he processed the differences in his feelings towards Josh and Bodie. I think that even if Nate and Bodie decide they are better as friends they will be lifelong friends. The boxcutter section was hard to read, because of the research you know he had to do about how to use them properly and how he decided not to use the boxcutter because his mom hated the sight of blood. It was heartbreaking to know how prepared he actually was. As always you have done a wonderful job of getting in to someone's head and making us care even more for them. Nate and Bodie's interest in each other is so obvious to people watching them that I wonder what their reception will be like in school? Does Nate play hockey? Because if he does they would truly be K & Ms mini-mes lol Oh and Bodie's reaction when he looked and Michael and realized he was getting a sneak peak at what Nate was going to look like in a few years? Priceless!
  21. LitLover

    Chapter 8

    Yes, chances of very good of that. Jenson has his reasons for holding back, which you will hear more about in the next couple of chapters. Thank you for your review and for making me laugh this morning. I appreciate it
  22. LitLover

    Chapter 8

    They were so close this time, but I don't think Merrick would really want their first time to be in his parents back yard in broad daylight lol The month together is going to be interesting for both of them Thank you for your review and your support. I really appreciate it
  23. I'm so happy to catch up with this story again. I've missed it. Mark is a good dad. I wish I could say that Matthew has two good parents, but Jackie is being very selfish for some inexplicable reason. I wonder if there is more to her story than we realize?
  24. LitLover

    Chapter 8

    Jenson might be stubborn, but I think Merrick might actually have him beat in that department. lol I think the mission is going to be interesting to say the least. haha I can't thank you enough for all of your support and this great review. I appreciate it more than you can know.
  25. LitLover

    Chapter 8

    Thank you, Eagle I pleased you like this chapter. I believe you're right. Merrick usually seems to be the instigator, doesn't he. Thank you again for your review and your support. I appreciate it.
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