Jason Rimbaud

Come on now, what's wrong with Ethan? He's a nice boy that just wants to be held.

What a great movie reference. I think I'll watch that tonight.

Knowing that you would be the first one to comment, I almost commented first out of spite. .

‘I’m sorry about the other night. I was a little drunk and feeling sorry for myself.’ That was the text Percy had woken up to. It was from Ethan. And he had yet to respond. He replayed the events over and over, and no matter how he analyzed it, he was embarrassed by his actions. The moment Ethan came into the stall, he should’ve stopped it right there. For sure when Ethan had pulled his dick out. Or at least when Ethan had kissed him. All of those would have been the perfect tim

I can see the jealousy dripping off your fingertips.

And I have less than that.

I'm pretty sure she said that in the comments last chapter...or am I making it up. I could be, I've been trolling her so much I forgot what is real and what I've made up. I'm sure she'll let me know which is which. But I think...oh my god...I have a great idea regarding April Fools. EDIT: First On Page One and First On Page Two. Booya

that is what they call two many too's.

Until the Alternante Universe version comes out and destroys all your fond memories of what a good story can be.

I noticed that too but I just chalked that up to Davin being a smartass. At least that was my take...cause anywhere Colt sits is the gay table.

Nope...I won't get pulled in. But I agree with your statement regarding this story we are reading so this comment is not off topic at all.

Even Lance thinks Joel on top of Jax was hot. So @Okiegrad you aren't alone anymore. I find it fitting that Joel ended up at the gay table by accident. Even when he's hiding he can't help but be attracted to the gays. What kind of teacher lets his students pick vegetables all class. He might be sexy to Joel but he's a shite teacher. So Jax decided to let bygones be bygones. Considering there is only one chapter left, that storyline was a bit of a let down. And before you get all antsy in your pantsy, I didn't mean like the story sucks or is written poorly. I can't be alone in wanting Jax & Joel to have one more wrestling match in that locker room, with towels or sans towels. This time Joel can find out that he really does like to ride things. "Hey Joel, roll your hips. Unlock your hips" And now he had two people coming to his birthday party. Which means next chapter Cody will be back in the picture. I guess we got messes on shower doors, wet undies, and Davin asking if he could fuck Joel, the only thing left on my bucket list is a threeway with Colt while riding the ATV's. Oh dear, Lacey, averted your eyes. Even more than last chapter, the saddness is creeping in with the knowledge maybe only one more week until we say goodbye to a wonderful story. (See everyone, like I promised last chapter)

Fun fact, Five very nearly was named Joel. But since I started reading Learned To Lie, I changed it.

Never say the quiet parts out loud. 😎

I love that you have faith in me, but I can barely write in the genre I am struggling with now. But in all seriousness, I can see it would be helpful putting more thought into how you tag your story. I think it's eight and it should be used wisely. Just like in real life, I pay someone to handle all my social media for my restaurant as I know my strengths and weaknesses. I need someone to handle those types of things for me. Or the very least get a bit more curious how things work. I just discovered a way to see top stories read in a certain date range three days ago. That sent me into a spiral so I control alt deleted that bit of information. I'm too competitive to really look at the lists and whose on them. When I get hyper focused on something I go all in. Just like with my restaurant, I have a 4.9 google rating after two years open. And yes that was bragging a bit but if I shift focus to this readership views, I fear I won't be honest in my writing as I strive to get on a list. For now I think I'll keep it as is, silly stories written for the husband. Though my goal for 2026 is to check out more stories, especially the vampire ones.

I really hope that this list was generated by using filters and someone didn't have to go one by one setting up all those links. Either way, wow, I never knew there were so many categories and genres. Note to Self: Don't start a story that begins in December and ends in january if you want to have a prayer for making any lists. Methinks I spend too much time trolling Krista and not enough time reading. The amount of vampire stories alone could keep me occupied for half a year.

I wonder how big he's gonna get that shit sandwich before he's finished.

Thank you. I had been playing looses with their connection and felt it was needed to start and tighten the strings as it were. But our silly little friends have plenty more mistakes in them I'm sure. The next chapter colors in more details about Ethan and who he is. We're in the back half of the story now, all the players save one have been put in motion towards their collision on Christmas Eve.

From the attention its getting, I hope its good, and proves to studios that good gay stories are worth the money. I shan't watch because of...you know...sports balls. But I hope its a continued success.

Number one, thank you for that!!!! I didn't even know if anyone picked up on that. And secondly, we are our own worst critics. People like what you do, get over it. .

However you feel about your own work, remember I am aspiring to get to your current level. Some of the stories you have written have stuck with me for weeks afterwards.

Did you peek at my finished chapters? . Thankfully, I decided to have him pass out. Trying to write/right that scene would have given me a heart attack. That's so unsafe. People stop doing that. And with your phone, just rawdog it like they do on airplane flights now. Sheesh.

I wish I had a friend. Even my husband says he's not my friend. I boldly ride on to El Dorado alone.

I think I have gone on record declaring that my characters are unreliable narrators. Percy and Five have already lied to everyone in the previous story. They've been lying to themselves this entire story. Maybe Ethan is the only one that isn't lying. Now that we are in the back half of the story, all the players start interacting more so we'll find out who is right/write. But yeah, he seems to be a lying piece of dung here.