Jason Rimbaud

Whew, I already did that in Frosted Hearts. .

@Lee Wilson already volunteered, so I nominate him.

So let's get this straight. You have another chapter for us? A short chapter, only 6600 words. And I've said it before and I'll say it again, odd numbers suck, always finish a story with an even number of chapters. And as your least favorite person, I shall make some demands or I shan't read your final chapter. 1. Do not admit, imply, or suggest which position Joel prefers. 2. Do not omit a song from Colt declaring his love for Davin. 3. Include a scene where one of your characters admits that saucy pizza is delicious. 4. Have one of your characters admit, to Joel, that you are influenced heavily by my silliness in regards to wet butts in undies. 5. Include a scene where trace's wife, catches Javin right after the act you won't describe for @Okiegrad If but one of these demands are not met, I shall never attempt to tie your shoelaces together, I shall not threaten to fly to your state and tell your husband all the secrets I know about you, and I shall never again offer to be your pet. The sports balls are in your court, the sake of the world is in your hands. Choose wisely.

Yeah @Jeff Burton you finished one story, why not start another one. Make Dolt a reality. Pretty proud of that one. Not gonna lie

*sighs deeply* Gavin is not a real person. Why can't you admit that's a great gag and give me credit that you didn't think of it and me in all my trollish behavior came up with something, including hot wings, that influences you. I desperately need to be validated Does anyone know how to create banners? I am in need of a new signature: The Sacred Knights Of Trolling Krista. Anyone help me out please. I pay in hot wings and other stuff I'm not allowed to mention on this site.

Don't give in, I need to get back to my own shit instead of enjoying yours. My entire yesterday was ruined because of you.

Why the drive by on me? I was innocent in that exchange!

I am sick of you denying my influence on your life and writing. This entire story has been you bashing pizza, hating on pizza, and them having pizza for every single meal. Then in the final chapter, hot wings. I'll ask @wildone if that was in the original in early 2025. *crosses fingers* For once and for all, there is no reason to be scared of her, I got you, I'll hold you gently until the bad lady goes away.

I do suck, not only at writing. By the way, if I still your comments and work them into a story, is that plagiarizing or homage? I'm asking for a friend.

I shall forge on a head. I won't comment on this story because...um...if you can't find something nice to say and all that. But the next chapter was fun and you were back on track. But since I only have a few more chapters, I will solider on. What else can you do? You killed his dog, his mother, the next thing has to be his father turns out to really be a piece of shit. *heres hoping*

I think we are all entertained in a fun loving way. And I think I said this already, but you are getting to relive a story you have forgotten. It's a win win,.

You need to dial that face back a notch. I had this idea way back in Chapter somewhere, I told you I was going to find another story to troll on. That we landed on this one, one of your first, was just the cherry. But you nearly wrote a SA scene with this one. And Derek was so irrational last chapter and then suddenly, he's sitting on Charlie's dick. Did you know at the party, Derek says he's not out to his parents and Charlie replies me too. And then in this chapter, Derek says he was kicked out for being limp wristed, your words not mine? And you had a shower scene and no mention of wet butts, I'm disgusted with you right now. And I told you Derek was the bottom.

Wow, this chapter was a bit much. I think I'm going to let that sit for a while and maybe I'll come back to it tomorrow.

All the stuff about Julie is pretty accurate. I might have embellished the rest...possibly.

At least your in bad company?

Okay, let's catch you up. Charlie is gay, addicted to Porn. His best friend is Julie, a nononsene girl who's outspoken, blunt, and borderlined assholeish. She delightful and there almost as a moral compass for Charlie and his porn addictive ways. She tells him when he's being stupid, and she is a great friend who may or may not have romantic feelings for him that are hidden. Derek, in love with his ex gym teacher, moves in with Charlie and since I don't remember where this comment is in regards to the story, might be a creeper. It's all wonderful and scandalous.

Are you saying I'm predictable Mr. The Dog?

There you go, I've taken many creative writing courses, online of course, been writing solidly for thirty years and I still suck. .

I just started incorporating those elements in my two latest stories. All my earlier work was R rated for language but no sex. All the sex happened off page. I thought I was above that sort of writing.

Young Krista is like, lets fuck shit up. .

Why would you tell her? Let her go to the afterlife thinking she gave a character name Barbie. Bad Jeff!!! Not only did you kick him when he was down, you might have done bad things to his back there place on national TV. It's so much fun and most of it is his fault.

Younger me, older me, being thrown out of my house because of Leviticus, I wouldn't take anything from him. Even changed my name so I don't even have that anymore. True story, I was forty-two years old, went back to my small home town for one reason, to piss on his grave. Broad daylight, in front of the caretaker, when he asked what I was doing, I told him it was fine, tombstones don't talk back. Is it bad that I found that whole scene funny.

I guess I was never a classy author, I never showed my characters naked, not even wet butts.

I actually like Julie, she makes me laugh. It's Charlie who's a bit much...much.

I am being productive. I am allowing you a brief chance to relive an old story. It's a gift that keeps on giving. Sadly none of my friends decided to join me. There loss, this story is a hot mess in the best ways. I'm actually highly entertained. And yes it's rough, needs a bunch of work, but I can see the seeds of how you write today. It's not horrible.