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Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Just another reason to love the fabulous one. -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
First off, maybe that's me being a bad writer/righter and forgetting what I wrote a few paragraphs earlier. And since we are entertaining this theory, you missed a major red flag in the paragraph above the one you referenced. And a few more little things in the last few chapters. Only if your theory is correct. But who knows. -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Are you sure about that? I can share with you lots of videos I took years ago. *food for thought* Interesting theory. If that's the case, then when Michael and Company arrives, its going to complicate matters if you're right. Wow, to think something like that would be in a silly christmas story about gay chicken. Everyone can have theories but that's a good one. Appropriate pull Mr. @Okiegrad, considering I referenced Michael Doughlas in this chapter. -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Her characters? Krista invaded my story herself. But she doesn't know it yet. It's a surprise. -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
I think it was Davin's, when he and Colt comes to Cedar Falls for some skiing. That's right, I'm sure of it. -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
I do promise you that little Five does enter the story again...and again... -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
If the job is finished it stands to reason he'll have no way or reason to get inside PineCrest. His father seems to keep him on a tight leash, I doubt he'll be able to come over and hang out with Five whilst Percy is entertaining Michael and company. And Five, what about Bethany? -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Who knows what his game is. Maybe he's telling the truth, he wasn't interested in Percy in the first place. So what, he told a few lies here or there, doesn't make him a bad person, he's just written that way. If Five isn't careful, he's going to hurt Percy beyond repair. And boy I didn't even think about the cameras. -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
So you went from eating something good to reading something shite. You traded down Mr. Dog. -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
People do weird shit all the time for weirder reasons. Luckily, the job is almost over so he'll be gone. At least he made peace with Percy. -
Witty comment is redacted. In honor of the fabulous one.
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Percy sat in the living room, his legs propped up on the coffee table, as he looked through Latch. Latch was the system that controlled the locks and security codes for each entry point. He was building profiles for Michael and his soon to be guests. As he toggled access points on or off for each profile, he saw something that bothered him. “Hey, Five.” “Yo.” “Can you come here for a second?” Percy called out as he pulled up Five’s profile, which logged each time the boy used his
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Took me a minute but I got there.
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Go with number one:
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It's okay, I'm used to my betters treating me like shit. maybe @Okiegrad was mistaken, maybe I shouldn't be called master. *deep sigh*
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Alas, I do not have the bandwidth for chaos at the moment. I'm too sad this story is ending. Maybe I'll kick the anthill in the finale, but for now, I'm just sitting in my emotions. I have no problem ever pointing fingers, I, above all others, know I'm a shit stirrer with no need of anyone to get me going. However, I've caused you enough grief this week. Lucky for me, I already asked for forgiveness like a month ago and I apologized in advance so you can't get.mad at me. Remember that, okay?
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I had no idea what that was...I thought I had achieved something. Then I saw they give that out to lots of people. Just another way GA keeps kicking me. sad face emoji (too lazy to actually hit the icon and find the one that represents what I'm feeling when typing is so much faster)
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And yet you added (too) it rather nicely I feel.
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I would never imply anything untowards regarding the fabulous one or the newly crown Master Scribe in our midst.
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This is so wrong. I did not derail the conversation away from your story. I just added a touch of trolling. In terms of trolling and what I am usually up to, this was rather benign, don't you think? I didn't write a scene with another gay table, with Colt as their President. Nor did I say that Davin's usual table is his current stable of FWB's that he's been hiding from Joel. Why else did he know he was a top and picked up that Joel was a bottom.
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Well, tomorrow is Monday and I'll be posting Chapter 14. That will be two since January 1st. And thank you, I promised last chapter I was going to be good. And this time, mostly I meant it. I actively deleted comments so I wouldn't derail things. Even that Okie guy has been relatively better. And since all my bad comments were his fault, and Mr. Dog's, I've kept myself on the straight and also narrow. In your story... . In mine, well, you'll see when you catch up. REASON FOR EDIT: With this comment I raised in rank to Master Scribe, whatever the hell that is. Should I celebrate or mastur...err...coagulate?
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Frosted Hearts: The Bet
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Bet
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Frosted Hearts: The Bet
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Bet
That is the bet, right? Percy said dinner and show. But they better do it quick before Michael, Seb and Krista arrive. That would be a bit embarrassing. Hello Percy, I'm here...oh dear, what is that boy doing? -
Frosted Hearts: The Bet
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Bet
wow, that sounds like Ethan would be in heaven and a dream come true. Maybe we can get the truckdriver and have an orgy. -
Frosted Hearts: The Bet
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Bet
there you go @Okiegrad book a trip to Manchester.
