Still early - for me anyway - and I haven’t yet finished my first cup of coffee (my brain wrote copy twice, so there you go! lol) but, I have to say, tim, it was worth getting up early to read this.
I did say what is this? during the prologue (thank you for not making us wait until next week for chapter one btw), but I did figure out what was going on, rather quickly.
So, some sad bits, but lots of funny bits, too. Love that Rena and Robert still live in that little house as I had wondered about that.
Loved the shout out incorporated into Lous lust distracted comments.
This was a joy to read. It flowed well and seemingly without effort, but I know there was effort beyond measure.
You did good,tim and thanks @droughtquake for planting the seed, so we all get to enjoy another peek into the lives of Don and Louis.