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Great story!
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I'm sorry for you loss....
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String from Your Tether Unwinds
blueirealand commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in String from Your Tether Unwinds
Another great chapter! For a split second I thought, great his parents will be cool with it.... And then they weren't -
I was so scared! I didn't who was going to get assaulted for sure. I'm so glad Lee got Jack there in time. I couldn't possibly care what happens to Dale. He deserves everything that's coming to him. This was a great chapter! Questions: I do wonder why Alistair can't cross dimensions like Lee, the other unicorn and nightmare. Also,is their half form more shaped like centaurs or minotaurs?
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This was such a great story! It's rare to find a story with the perfect combination of grittiness, hotness and an actual good storyline. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
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Brotherhood of the Midnight Cake
blueirealand commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in Brotherhood of the Midnight Cake
At first I thought, awww we're not getting into the meat and potatoes of the story? But of course by the midpoint of the chapter I was hooked. I wasn't expecting background info but I enjoyed getting that peek being the veil. I hope there are more to come. I've been hooked since Wolf Like Me and Wildcard seems like it will be just as awesome. Please keep up the amazing job!! -
Epilogue -- Christmas Eve Eve
blueirealand commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in Epilogue -- Christmas Eve Eve
This was such an amazing story! I've read everything, except the last four chapters, twice. Such great characters and depth, so good! I can't wait for the next book.Thank you. -
You Can Look, But You Better Not Touch
blueirealand commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in You Can Look, But You Better Not Touch
I haven't been on this lovely site in about two weeks, I haven't been getting any notification. So when I surprisingly saw the Winter title I literally rolled around in my bed and squealed! lol. I'm sure I startled my roommate. Not three hours ago I was wondering when this story was going to be ready. I'm so excited to see what CJ and the rest of the guys will get up to. Thank you and keep up the great work!! -
This was a great chapter. I'm used to only having to keep up with, at the most, four main characters at a time. With your story I'm keeping up with about nine and you do a great job of making each character distinct enough that I don't get confused. Thanks! I love that we get to see a different side of CJ, Brett and Cesar's relationship. Parents and their kids tend to clash every now and then, no matter how strong the relationship. I'm looking forward to seeing how long it takes this issue to be resolved and how it is resolved.
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I basically live and breath for these chapters. Thank you for writing these stories, they're great!! I love the development of the characters and CJ is such an amazing person. I love him and the elite 8. Thanks again.
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Luca!!!!! Watch your back!!
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Hi, I really enjoyed this story. I have to ask though, Is this the end of Mark and Vicktor's story? I understand that Mark thinks he's dead but a vampire dying from a bullet to the head? Wouldn't Vicktor heal when the bullet came out? Or, wouldn't the bullet work its way out of his body? Wasn't Vicktor drinking from Mark and not just a little bit but he drained him. Plus their power was infused together and none of that could save him?
