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  1. raven1

    Chapter 32

    I don't know what Jamie will do after this adventure ends. However, if I can get Jamie to share this new power with me, I know I will be keeping very busy after the adventure.
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    Chapter 32

    Great chapter! I definitely like the new powers. Can you imagine a gay voyeur with this power? I'm sure he would see a lodda bouncing balls at night.
  3. raven1

    Chapter 32

    I like your idea! It sounds like another good avenue for a third book in the series!
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    Chapter 32

    Jamie is going to have to Lodda him up and move him out.
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    Chapter 32

    You do like to create an unexpected twist that stirs up up, Geron. What are you up to this time? Dialogue between the gray mage and Porvus suggests that Lodda is not human and immensely more powerful that before. I was surprised that Porvus sense their presence and requested a meeting. That Urvan knew he would die and Jamie's hand, but Porvus doesn't seem to fear Jamie is also interesting. I don't like the idea of them meeting, but maybe if they are there and had a way of responding to Porvus without endangering themselves the meeting might be very interesting. One thing said was extremely frightening. It would seem that Lodda is setting up in the ring ship to destroy the world. Shades of Death Star!
  6. Good Job Chris! I like how you keep Mrsgnomie on her toes.
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    Chapter 9

    Zombie Flambé and now the Armani suit is ashes. At least the suit went out in a flame of glory. Sadly I suspect the Zombie is still around. I wonder what he will wear to the next encounter. This may give the guys time to set up their trap while the zombie recovers. As for de planes boss, I continue to believe they are just that until the contrails disappear, they can change directions sharply and fast and can stop on a dime and hover. I love how the boys turned the entry tunnel into an oven in less than a second. Not many mages can do it that fast.
  8. Clo Dearest! Go wash your mouth out for saying the a... word!
  9. Hi Dugh! Hope you're feeling better! If this were a game of Battleship you would have sunk all of Drew's ships and submarines today! Very impressive!
  10. Hi Page, I know you're glad he's back, but when you get finished getting caught up with his SI escapades share the stories!
  11. Hi Nong Chai! I see you and Drew are still trying up to dividing the hunky Asians. Maybe Clo could teach you both moderation. You two are like horny teens in an eye candy store.
  12. Hi Albert! I see you are waging the good fight against evil today! How are you and Steve doing?
  13. Hi Man! Those muffins sure look good. It's a good thing I keep a towel on the desk to cushion my arms as I work on the computer. You had me drooling over the muffins. Now I have to get a new towel.
  14. Hey Clo! Teaching Drew humility would be so much better than teaching him English.
  15. Hi Gary! Hope you had a good day. Getting out for a walk when you take a break is great for relieving eye strain. Glad to here your are making so much progress on your new book!
  16. Hi Bucket! Enjoy your outing!
  17. Wow! You guys had a busy night! I've got five pages of comments to read. See you all soon as I read them.
  18. raven1

    Z is For Zombie

    Actually, @Backwoods Boy and I are from the same neck of the woods. Although I love where I am now, I do envy him hiking around the Gorge and Cascades this time of year. Right now the alpine meadows are an amazing display of brilliant color with all the many wildflowers in bloom. Have fun hiking Jon! Let me know what trails you have been hiking. If nothing else, I can dream about hiking again. 😀
  19. We both had a lazy Sunday. My main accomplishment was reading. Aod did better and made an awesome dinner for us both!
  20. raven1

    Chapter 8

    Very interesting chapter. The jet in the sky may not have been noticed for the last few years probably means it took that long for survivors to organize and get planes flying again. I am mystified that only humans have been affected by the change. The only thing that might explain that is that whatever caused the change only affected humans because of their unique DNA. Why some were not affected is also a mystery. It was suggested by one comment that radiation was involve. If that's the case, then maybe the humans not affected were somewhere where they were protected from radiation. Or maybe I'm making a tempest in a pot of tea. They made it back and I'm hoping their speculation about the zombie being recovering and not spying on them is correct. I am glad they have hidden the explosives away from their silo home. Hopefully it will be there when they get up in the morning.
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    Chapter 8

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    Chapter 7

    They have a plan now, but who are they going to use for zombie bait? I hope they get the timing right!
  23. raven1

    Chapter 7

    A ballsy statement about bats had me cringing and grabbing crotch!
  24. Bad Yayo! Don't scratch daddy's face up.
  25. Just got it translated. Aww, I didn't know you cared. Back at you!
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