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As others mentioned, the story was set up very well in the first chapter. I already like the characters, and the action was spectacular. Your descriptions of the fields, cliff and the 'fort' the kids have built was vivid and easy to picture in my mind. The dialogue conveyed not only the background, but the emotions of the kids. You have set up a very unique world with the superpower 'zombies'.

Hey Geron! Just know Ivor made me read this! I am now down to 14 of your stories left to review.

Thanks Comicality! This was just the inspiration I need to get back to a project that stymied me for months. Not a story, but a poem. Your words made me realize I had the wrong approach that just wasn't me or how I felt.

Magic is quickly spreading to all the people of the planet. I suspect that part of the reason is because they will need it. Jamie and his group's abilities and powers came to them before they needed it. Maybe it was the luck given to Jamie, or it could have been magic responding to what will happen in the future. I liked both the meeting and the safe arrival in Methuwan. I assume that they are going up to confront Porvus, but if they are to be sneaky the way may have to be indirectly. What will they use to find out where he is? Should the use their extended senses to survey the city a bit? How are they going to be able to help the grey robed mages under Porvus' compulsion?

I to am glad that Rusty is breaking free of Roy. I understand and agree with what you are saying @Shadow086, but disagree a bit about Rusty's feeling for Roy. When I read the telephone conversation I thought that Rusty was telling his dad he wouldn't listen anymore to Roy's constant criticism. He wants Roy to understand that when Rusty does good that Rusty wants his dad to acknowledge it. I think Rusty has set his dad up for a test after seeing some of the changes his dad has made. It will be up to Roy to pass this test when Rusty proves he is committed to achieving something. Roy will have to acknowledge that Rusty has commitment, has accomplished something and then tell Rusty how proud he is of Rusty.

It may take a few more chapters, but Rusty is backing himself into a corner and realizes that. Rusty did make a commitment to be friends for life. He has not put Matty in the same box as his other lovers and knows he has deep feelings for Matty. He also believes he (Rusty) will never let Matty have a boyfriend that isn't perfect. Rusty now has to understand the Rusty is the perfect boyfriend for Matty. I think that Roy will find out that Rusty has two commitment firmly in place by the time Rusty graduates. Matty is one and singing is the other. Awesome writing Laura!

Hello Everyone! I'm up a bit late, but wanted to say Hi before I go to bed. Have a great day.

Hi Gary! Great news!!!! I'm looking forward to reading it.

Late to the party as usual, but did enjoy the chapter very much. Like many, I don't have a clue about what Jamie was trying to figure out. I honestly don't think that Jamie will retire to the shadows. He could stay on planet to explore for more of the ancient cities, learn more of the history, and/or try to figure out the science of the ancients. He might even figure out what the purpose of the space station is. It could be an interstellar craft to transport massive amounts of people and things for a migration or a portal to other stars and planets. With his team he might even explore those other places giving up his magic for a while. One thought I did have is that if Flitch can connect with Jamie visually, will he be able to solve problems that arise in the nether and transmit the solutions back to Jamie when he needs them?

Maybe not dancing, but I am sure there will be something around the prince's maypole tonight!

Time crossed lovers face many perils as well as the consequences of a paradox of time. This is both an adventure, story of love and a mystery. Sci-fi at its best. Libby Drew is a very talented writer who shares the excitement with us in this compelling story. The story flows from each event while making you feel you are part of the action whether it is a wild chase or a romantic evening. I highly recommend reading this tale.

I did the recommends and added a review. Hope you like it.

Two very different young men in love face a world of danger and challenges together. They find support and enemies in both family and friends. The story is filled with love, laughter, tears and fear as they grow stronger together. Characters are engaging, the plot full of unexpected twists and the writing is superb. I highly recommend this story!

Great ending Ivor. Everything was wrapped up nicely like a beautiful Christmas present.

Hey Albert! Hope you and Steve have had a great day! s

These two make such a wonderful team! Their voices so different, but blend so well! I will miss Tony very much!

Thanks Bucket! I'll try that. It sounds so much easier than what had planed!

Doing well Albert! I do have to manually transfer all my bookmarks however. I'll get ride of the garbage, but my recipe bookmarks are going to be a long project. All the basics I need are here and working. How about you?

Great fun in this chapter, and a very big plug for Zombies. Geron's gonna owe you for this.

It didn't take the guys long to get back to doing what the love to do. Another great chapter! I do want to mention that Z Is For Zombies is the next story tab on my Geron window. I also have one for you, Ivor. However it is Geron's turn next. I have read and loved it on the other site, but look forward to the fun of commenting on it here.

Looks like the will be again!

Another peace filled chapter, but not stressless. Christmas shopping is always stressing online or in the stores. At least by going to the mall to shop they got the opportunity to meet two potential good friends in Paul and Chris. If these two new guys do establish a GSA in their school, I hope that it will affect the attitudes of more people in the town in a positive way.

Are you trying to say they will get huge as they begin to touch more often? 🤞

Love the peaceful theme of this chapter. The only big excitement was the movie night when Mr Edgars introduced his husband. The fun banter in the comments added to my enjoyment. I love to see people play with words, although I am a rank amateur. I am hoping that Adam and Troy can get back to playing in their bed soon!

Hi Bucket! Hope you are having a good day! Is the weather getting colder or warmer now? Thanks for saying this. I have to admit in my opinion that this has been a ongoing team effort by all of us. I am sure that Drew would agree. After all, he continually whines about all of us "picking on me". He is and I love him so much. Except when he pranks me and teases me. He's a lot like my young brother in that respect. I agree! It gets ride of a lot of garbage that accumulated for 12 years. Kind of like a spring house cleaning on steroids.