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oh, no, definitely not done--at least one more little surprise, well, I think it'll be a surprise anyway...
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oooh, I love that description--"the shrapnel from that explosion shooting in all directions hitting unintended and innocent targets"! That's definitely a great descriptor of what's happening.
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So many questions... but I can't tell you just yet! I think you'll find another bit of a surprise coming soon.
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That's true, Bryan does know Wyatt better than anyone, so while he might be upset briefly, he's probably going to start asking questions real quick.
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hehe, guess either it was pretty transparent or you guys just know me so well...
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Chapter 7 Bryan groaned when his phone buzzed. He felt like he'd just fallen asleep. Then his brain kicked in and he shot straight up, scrambling for the phone, his heart racing with hope it was Wyatt. His heart sank. It was just a text notification from one of the stupid game apps. It wanted him to come back and play. Fuck. He threw the phone down on the bed as he plopped back into the soft, downy mattress. The warmth of the down comforter caressed his skin, but it felt hollow, empt
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Hey, Cia! Happy Birthday!!!!!
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Welcome, Andy!
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Heyyyy! Happy Birthday!!!!
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Good timing, I just posted the next chapter! So you can see what Bryan thinks! Things are going to start moving a bit, with different POVs popping in as well.
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Chapter 6 Bryan looked at the text again. ~Not feeling well. Heading home.~ Bryan had replied earlier from his meeting with: ~So sorry to hear. Rest. I'll see u later.~ ~Okay~ He hadn't heard from Wyatt for the rest of the afternoon, but he hadn't really expected to. He'd called Wyatt once, but it went straight to voicemail. Obviously, Wyatt had turned off his phone to keep from being disturbed. He didn't hear any movement from inside the apartment. Frowning, he knocked again on W
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Very good questions! and actually, I'm thinking of posting the next chapter early...
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Yep, it just gets more intense from here...
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Everyone will definitely be suspicious of Darrin...
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Well, we do know mom doesn't care much for her son's relationship with another man. And knowing about Darrin can certainly be used in her favor.
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Yep, you are not alone in suspecting Carol, especially since he's feeling ill after meeting with her.
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Thank you! Darrin is definitely suspect number one.
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I'm glad you enjoyed Wyatt's students jumping in. I like to think that teens would be a little protective over their favorite teachers.
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I can see Bryan's mother has become number one suspect now, hehe.
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Next chapter Wyatt has his meeting with Carol, and yeah, she's still questioning their relationship...
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No, you'll see Darrin again...next chapter.
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You are not alone in being suspicious of Carol... She hasn't been quite as enthusiastic as a fully supportive mother might be. And Darrin, well, yeah, Darrin is as Reader 1810 said... a bug you wish you could squish.
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Awww, thank you so much. Knowing others are interested and waiting for more keeps me motivated! If I hadn't found GA, I probably wouldn't have done quite as much writing as I have this past year.
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hehe, a bug you could squish, huh... that's funny! Bryan is good for Wyatt, and I hope I have been able to convey a bit of how Wyatt has grown and become a little more self-confident because of his relationship with Bryan. This story is a bit different than my others since the MCs are already in a loving, committed relationship.
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Yes, Wyatt had been rather submissive and insecure around Darrin's more dominate personality.
