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thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hope you like the epilogue--just to wrap it all up!
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So glad you have enjoyed the emotional ride! Hope you enjoy the last chapter!
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Thank you! I think after all the emotional torture I put everyone through, you deserved some sweetness and love. thanks so much for reading and reviewing, hope you like the epilogue!
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I think I hit on some of these points in the epilogue, like his education. The therapy session idea is definitely something to consider too--that's an excellent point of sort of bringing it all home again. Maybe in a short ficlet, I could bring Kieran out of the coma, or like you said maybe an off-shoot with another character. As always, you give me such great things to think about!!! Thank you so much!
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The epilogue should tie up a bit of this for you. But I may have to think more about the drawings like you and Cannd suggested...hmmm....Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Hope you like the last chapter!
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Well, not in this story. I think that would be too much too soon after finally getting free of Brad. But maybe I'll write a couple short ficlets about characters from All In and that could be something that they determine if it could be a possibility. I've already written a couple shorts for the Neko from writing prompts, so maybe a couple from All In as well would be fun to keep up writing skills without delving into a long story. Thank you so much for all your reviews!
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I'm so glad that you were able to make it through the rough stuff to get to the HEA. There are still two chapters that hopefully you will enjoy just as much! Thanks for reading, even though I know it was hard at times.
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The last two chapters should help wrap that up for you. So glad you have enjoyed reading! Thanks for the review!
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Nope, it's not wrong, and you are so not alone apparently. As I'm reading reviews now that I'm home, I get the impression that a lot of people agree with you and have suggested that I add in another scene about it. So I'm thinking about it, and may write it over Thanksgiving. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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An insightful critique as always! And you all (all the lovely reviewers here at GA) have again given me pause to do some editing--namely adding in a scene detailing Brad's death, most likely from his POV. As for the story title, glad it finally made sense--maybe I wasn't overt enough in my corny poker references, hehe. It actually wasn't the first title I had for it. The original title when I was writing it was Seven Card Stud--because of the seven people Brad had a minions--but honestly, All In hit me in the middle of writing it and I just fell in love with that title. And I could play with it so much more. thanks again for your detailed reviews and inspiration!
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so now we get to see Jason and Devyn happy! Finally, right?Thanks for reading and reviewing as always!
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I know it would be nice too, and I did think about it, but I think it would be too much too soon. Maybe in an All In short ficlet. I have a couple shorts for the Neko from writing prompts so maybe I'll do some with characters from All In too that happen a year or two later...Thank you very much for the great compliment! So glad you have enjoyed the story.
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So... I don't know, I can't tell if you liked it or not. Hehe.Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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Wow, thank you! That is a wonderful compliment, since I know there are many great stories here! Thanks you so much for reading and reviewing!
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Yes, Devyn will eventually inherit the estate, but I think right now he'd feel like there were too many bad memories for that. The next couple chapter sort of wrap up those loose ends for you, hopefully. I'm sure there might be clammorings for more after the last chapter is done...I'm sure you'll enjoy the next chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Nope, not the last chapter--two more to go! I wouldn't leave you hanging like that. Okay, well, maybe I would, but I'm not this time! So enjoy the rest! Thanks for the review!
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As always, you have made some excellent points! I do think a scene from Brad's point of view with more details about his dealings would be pretty cool; I hadn't thought about that as I had kept it to Jason and Devyn, but Brad's here at the end would definitely be a twist. Thanks so much for reading and offering such great critiques (or was it criticism?)--whichever is the better one!
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Thank you! And actually you and other lovely reviewers here have me considering going back to write a scene from Brad's POV! That's why I love the reviewers here--always keep me thinking!
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Chapter 26 "Hey, Devyn," Jason knocked on the door before slowly opening it. Devyn was sitting on the bed, on a bright blue and green comforter that he had picked out. He had his drawing pad on his lap with his new set of drawing pencils laid out next to him. The kid smiled up at him, and Jason felt his heart jump. That smile was for him. A real smile, a happy one. He had brought the kid to his home--a place where horrible memories did not lay around every corner--and Devyn was slowly b
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Chapter 25 "He's stablizing--" "--ressure is rising." He felt like his body was stuck in molasses. He felt something tug his eyelid pulled open, and a bright light flickered. Shit, that was bright, he winced. "Devyn? --vyn, son, -- hear me?" He wanted to answer, moved his lips, but something was on his face, and that damn light kept flickering into his eye. He began to panic as he realized that his arms were strapped down; he couldn't even shake his head. "Respiratory's ris--" a voic
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True, still up in the air! Tomorrow is Jason at the hospital....so we'll see..thanks for reviewing!
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So glad I was up early to post then! I cried while I wrote it too. Hope you enjoy the rest!
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Sorry you had a bad morning, hope it got better!
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Aww, thank you!
