This story is a good example of brialliant narration. <3 Especially loved all those tiny details that made little things important, concerning as well Jeff's emotional swings as scenes of their everyday life. "Showing, not telling" -- that's what makes the story realistic and enjoyable. The main characters were very well developed, and the others (Raf, Kenny, neighbours, Sharon etc.) seem always to be there for some reason and interaction.
Being from North Europe, I also enjoyed getting so much information of rural life in North Carolina. And gardening, food and motorcycles are always a treat. ;D
I hope you'll continue this story one day but know how difficult it is to get back to something that's been abandoned for years... Still can't wait to see know if they're going to get chickens or not!