Hilarious! The whole chapter was totally enjoyable, one of the best parts when Efrain and Cory seriously tried to explain and come out and the others weren't even listening.
All characters and situations are so real that somehow even if there's no overly exciting plot (running from mafia, waking dragons, saving the planet etc.) it's always a treat to get into a new chapter. I have a feeling that the winter break is going to make a huge difference in many ways... Hopefully it won't be too hard for Cory!
Thanks for a brilliant chapter! I loved the way Cory let the Garzas know they were out of line, then he took care of Efrain and gave him space and time. There were sweet parts that showed how much the boys actually care even if they probably don't even realize.
Wow, a new story! Like everybody said, intriguing situation, interesting characters, so much tension in the first chapter. I guess there's more to Jared's condition than repressed sexuality and ugly divorce... Looking forward to the next chapter!
You can make any universe alive in fanfic! Would've never thought I'd enjoy a Marvel fic but, damn, your Spider-Man and Deadpool are sooooo... adorable?
The truck scene was my favorite so far, Teague won some serious points, self-friendzoning, LOL. I'm looking forward to the rest of the team to come to the same conclusion.
These guys are so much fun that I've totally enjoyed all chapters. Sometimes the change of POV seems a bit abrupt but its fun to get Preston and Indie's side of the story.
I loved the authentic feeling of both sauna stories, so very Finnish to the tiniest detail. Your characters are so real (well, an sort of cute...), I'm glad they're both on the same page on the being together thing.
Poor Nate... Bad as it is, he's so lucky to have a supporting mom and the best grandparents and uncles in the world! ❤ Kendall seems to be even more wonderful person than ever, more mature and levelheaded of the couple soonish-to-be-married. It was so sweet to let Nate know the big news first! Somehow I have the feeling that with Kendall's brilliant help the Aceto team can solve any problem thrown into their lives. Their love and trust in each other and the endless support is something... well, the most important thing in the world.
The latest chapters have been a bit sappy to me but I managed to read them through despite the Christmas decorations, rings, roses, engagement and all that.
I love to read this story but the latest chapters have been so smooth -- like they're so ready and well written that there's nothing more to say. Except that the guys are so wonderful that it's impossible for anyone to be annoyed with them, let alone hate them.
It's not hard to guess who're going to be the godfathers! It's like they are meant to be close after all that happened, even if I have to say Arron's jealousy irritates me a bit. Well, nobody is perfect and Chet doesn't have the tendency to flirt around. I just hope it's not going to lead into jealous paranoia, I don't wish that to anyone, least of all to our adorable Chet. Can't wait to hear how announcing The News is going to go.
Kendall and Michael's interaction was so very real in this chapter. They are so good together, Michael being the... well, not really hot-tempered but definitely more so than Kendall.