Hilarious! The whole chapter was totally enjoyable, one of the best parts when Efrain and Cory seriously tried to explain and come out and the others weren't even listening.
All characters and situations are so real that somehow even if there's no overly exciting plot (running from mafia, waking dragons, saving the planet etc.) it's always a treat to get into a new chapter. I have a feeling that the winter break is going to make a huge difference in many ways... Hopefully it won't be too hard for Cory!
Thanks for a brilliant chapter! I loved the way Cory let the Garzas know they were out of line, then he took care of Efrain and gave him space and time. There were sweet parts that showed how much the boys actually care even if they probably don't even realize.
Wow, a new story! Like everybody said, intriguing situation, interesting characters, so much tension in the first chapter. I guess there's more to Jared's condition than repressed sexuality and ugly divorce... Looking forward to the next chapter!
You can make any universe alive in fanfic! Would've never thought I'd enjoy a Marvel fic but, damn, your Spider-Man and Deadpool are sooooo... adorable?
The truck scene was my favorite so far, Teague won some serious points, self-friendzoning, LOL. I'm looking forward to the rest of the team to come to the same conclusion.
These guys are so much fun that I've totally enjoyed all chapters. Sometimes the change of POV seems a bit abrupt but its fun to get Preston and Indie's side of the story.
I loved the authentic feeling of both sauna stories, so very Finnish to the tiniest detail. Your characters are so real (well, an sort of cute...), I'm glad they're both on the same page on the being together thing.