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Happy birthday rustle!

Happy birthday! Have an awesome one Bonne fête à toi, bonne fête à toi, bonne fête à French Canadian, bonne fête à toi XD J'espère c'est un anniversaire joyeux!

Gotta love fire, huh? can't comment on that second part lol Thanks for reviewing!

Yeah, love is a loss of control, and that can be terrifying Erin's problem is more love in general than being in love, though

Thanks for guessing, it's a big part of what makes this story so fun for me Thanks! Can't wait to see your review, then!

Thanks, Ray! I'm not even close to an english major, though XD english is my least favorite subject . I'd ask what the three colors are, but I guess you won't be able to respond (on this post, at least) until the new update, when reviews turn to comments .

Thanks! I hope you like the rest, too

Dogs are the best company lol. I'm glad the story was accurate, then As always, thanks for your awesome reviews!

Thanks, connor! I'll try to get more out soon, but feel free to remind me if I'm taking too long XD

I like it already! It's nice to read 'Alpha' and 'Beta' in a non-werewolf context . The small updates are gonna be tantalizing . I like the physics aspect to it, and I want to smack Will - not william henry - with that nasty cloth already XD. That level of pretension is annoying . Besides, you'd think a Gamma would be better than a Beta (higher energy level, faster, etc) can't wait to see why that discrepancy is there Awesome story, can't wait for next Wednesday!

Thanks Gary!

Thanks! It's good to see you worked out how the stories work I don't know why parents are always killed off, never thought about it lol. I guess it's 'cause parents are kinda tied in with safety, and not having them there takes away the feeling of protection. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story, and good luck navigating GA!

Yeah, he's getting a bit desperate about believing that Nate's feelings for him are temporary yeah, a slap would probably be good for him XD georgia would probably volunteer, but I don't know how I'd get her into the burning house with them XD I don't know if it's all patience that's keeping him from pressing Erin I shouldn't be dropping hints outside the story, but whatever, you figured out his eyes so you deserved at least one Erin's uncertainty is mostly 'cause he's still not sure how to deal with Nate. When he resolves that, he'll show his decisive side It wasn't spooky, right? Haha don't worry, the next chapter's gonna be eventful

Yeah, I feel bad for Nate XD he needs some ass, and quick I think Erin has trouble accepting that people care for him, since he has a kinda-unfounded kinda-not (after all, so far everyone he loves has died...) fear that everyone who loves him dies. He's afraid of that attraction, so even if part of him knows it's there, he avoids it . Yeah, he's being thrown for a full figure eight That'd be the best thing for him, but it doesn't seem likely XD ...again, no comment XD thanks, though! Read it over, and I get what you mean I'll try to avoid that, thanks for pointing it out! Yep, that should be remedied soon, though lol. I love your ideas on the story (the ones on Nate in particular ), thanks for sharing them!

hehe thanks This isn't a conventional fantasy story, you're not missing out on anything lol. I try to avoid writing things that start normal but end up with were-hippocampuses or some weird thing . not gonna comment Yeah, Erin doesn't know how to react to getting close to people, and Nate can empathize with that . Again, no comment on the unique differences part OK, here I have to comment, if just to say no, pink =/= happy good guess, and I'm glad someone picked up on the eye color=emotion thing, although I'm not surprised it was you You're gonna be keeping me on my toes with this lol Thanks to be honest, that started as 'dopamine shivers' but it wasn't accurate and 'serotonin shivers' sounded too forced XD Awesome, wouldn't want everything to be clear yet

Thanks, Yettie

Thanks I like the 'drip feeding' idea XD that perfectly describes what I'm trying to do

Yeah, Nate's eyes are one of my favorite things about this story . It's good that it's not just me that's fascinated by that idea XDhaha I was trying to add just enough that was familiar (generic park bench scene and skittles) that it would emphasize the unfamiliar Hopefully you'll have even more questions soon, although from the reviews you leave on The Saturday Boy, I'll have to bury the hints deeply to hide them from you

Thanks, Yettie! I have to admit, I'm really looking forward to seeing what you think of this story I've seen your reviews on other stories, and I'm excited (and a little worried ) to see your insight in action . I hope you stick around

Thanks! I'm flattered that you're reading it anyway . I know what you mean about too fantastical, sometimes realism is what you want/need in a story On that note, I'll try to get the newest PCE out sooner rather than later lol I've been taking it piece by piece, so it won't be really soon, but I'll try to give it more time

Yeah, self-reflection is important . I think Erin has realized that his curiosity is as much a weakness as it is an asset, and it's not so much that he doesn't wonder as it is that he tries not to. He's got enough to deal with, just from his feelings towards Nate . I think he's focusing on not breaking Nate's, or his own, heart, and he's ignoring all his questions for now, since Nate won't answer them anyway.He was trying not to listen to the sound of the shower, so the crackling just blended with the patter of the water, and he was trying not to notice anything, anyway . Fire detectors... right... I'm gonna pretend I had some master plan that prevented me from adding those . No, really, thanks for pointing it out XD I totally missed that, and I really should have caught it. I'll edit that now lol that's embarrassing XD I don't want to spoil anything, but you're not far off what happens Thanks for the review, and extra thanks for catching the fire alarm thing XD

Ooh, I love demons no hints, though Thanks for reviewing, love your input as always, Gene!

Kier abandoned Shadow!? lol he really does love Sparrow Awesome chapter, I totally love it Kier bottoming was a surprise, but it really shouldn't have been it fits so well (the plot, not... you know). I'm looking forward to ch 16!

I opened my eyes slowly, squinting against the brightness, and after blinking a few times I saw that I was outside. The campfire in front of me had burned down to embers, but the pile of sticks was much smaller than last time I saw it. Nate must have gotten up and fed the fire every few hours. As if the surge of gratitude I felt woke him, Nate shifted against me, and I remembered everything. Fuck, I thought, stiffening. I let him sleep with me! How could I do this to him? I rolled away from

Yeah, I hate when that happens Thanks, Jaro! The next chapter should be a small respite from the tension you mentioned (hey, that kinda rhymes lol), so I'll post that now Thanks again for all the reviews! They're always awesome to read