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Robert Rex

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  1. Great, tense chapter, lightened with laughter. If you don't use the cat against Lanny, and make "transparency" a running joke, you'll miss out! So we've now got Jeanine as "Glenda" and Candy as the "Wicked Bitch" ...good! Nice to have the players nailed down--and yeah, can already feel the cards lining up against Candy. Fun to get Candy's background details and see just exactly how scheming she is. And yeah, I know some like her.... Another good job, even if the "likes" isn't working right now.....
  2. Me? Put anyone through the wringer? Surely NOT! LOL! This spidey sense thing is contagious, apparently--what's up with that. Yup, lots going on in this chapter...you'll find out more in the next one. Glad ya liked this chapter's ending. Nice to see Bubba open up like that. Thanks for your comments, buddy!
  3. Thanks for the kind wishes, Dathi! Things ARE better, after a minor setback after the surgery. And I'm glad you're finding the story involving! There are a couple of surprises ahead; you know how much I like throwing curveballs! Thanks for hanging in with the story!
  4. There IS a lot going on--and think part of the issue is Barry seems to be juggling a lot, and some stuff is slipping through the cracks. Yet, he's also settling into a routine, so only the notable stuff is being reported. He's still aware of the changes around him--certainly not in the drugged-up lethargy he'd had earlier! Confident he's getting things under control. Thanks for the comments buddy--and glad you're "rubbing your hands" in anticipation!
  5. Glad you're enjoying the story, Defiance! You're right--Bulldog does need to be careful, and probably a good thing he didn't have a gun; he certainly doesn't have the experience to take on 4 mobsters! The note Bubba left really said so much--he's never really talked that much directly to Bulldog about his feelings, so it's nice to see him open up. And, as far as Gladys, have always liked her. Here's the YouTube link to a performance she did in March of this year. At 71, she's stll got it! Thanks for sticking with the tale! I appreciate your comments!
  6. Actually, despite the fact he's been a real prick, I'm liking Lanny. He comes across as direct, honest (when sober), and certainly seems open enough to change. Will they all end up friends? Who knows? Lots of drama in this chapter...but progress isn't always easy. Another fine piece!
  7. Tough chapter! Gonna be a rough road ahead, but at least they've got an ally in Janine--and eventually Lanny. And that'll satisfy the need to set someone up, since (I hope) Lanny and Janine will get together. Good job--lots of ins and outs in this chapter, and you handled 'em well!
  8. Damn! I'm worn out from the action in this chapter! The joking was funny as hell--but almost too much, as Ace and Duce damn near freaked out. Can you say "akward"? At least it got settled down only to have Lanny's revelation set up a real cliff hanger! Going to the next chapter now, after the good job here!
  9. Jeremy is absolutely adorable--and if you don't do a stand alone story with him, well.....you just need to do it! Moving chapter to see the guys supported again--not from maybe guilt but from love. Nice job!
  10. Dave's letter was moving--and he's right; he's never really opened up about his feelings that much before to Barry. (See my comments to LitLover below.) And, not intending it to be a cliff-hanger, so hang on for the next chapter; we'll see if ya still like me. Thanks for staying involved in the story!
  11. Yeah, well, Randy is an idiot...he's partying at his employer's expense, and obviously not thinking anyone would notice! It's a good thing that Bubba didn't get Bulldog a gun when he asked for it sometime back; suspect he know that Barry would (or could) explode if he had one. No question that Dave's line of work is dangerous...what I find interesting is that Dave is now acknowledging his own gut level feelings--he's been somewhat closed in talking about those up until now; maybe his letter and his new-found "spidey sense" show big things for the start of the year? It's definitely been a ride for him in the relationship! Thanks for the comments, and hanging on with the story!
  12. Glad ya liked the chapter, Daddy....and, yeah, that's a favorite "oldie" of mine, too. Glad you posted the video of it. I've got another of her performances in later years, and her voice only gets better. (Saw her the other day on something, and yeah, she STILL has the pipes!) Thanks for the comment and the video!
  13. It was a milestone for both men--a real notice to each other that it's truly a "no holds barred" love. Thanks for the comments, buddy!
  14. Robert Rex

    Chapter 20

    Silas' street smarts really come into play here...looking forward to the pastor getting his justice! Fine job!
  15. Moved into our treehouse on the river during Labor Day weekend. Although it was Southern Decadence in New Orleans that weekend—something of a “gay pride/end of summer/let's party for the hell of it” event with seventy-five thousand gay visitors expected to hit the streets of the French Quarter, I was far more interested in getting out of the extended-stay hotel into our own place. And the bar would do just fine without me for a weekend. The move was painless. We'd bought the place furnished, so
  16. You better watch it, you young whippersnapper--my cane is deadly! And get off my damn lawn! <grin>
  17. Robert Rex

    Remember

    Interesting start to what can be a fun storyline! Elliot comes across as the original smartass just waiting to be tamed--and AJ as more experience and who may rock Elliot's world. Keep up the story--wanna see where you take this tale--and good job so far!
  18. Robert Rex

    Chapter 1

    Nice start to an intriguing story line! You've got some good characters in the cop and the kid. The fact that both are into BDSM and kink only add to the fun--and I appreciate the safe/sane/consensual approach. (Too many take the kink too far/to close to rape and abuse--and it's not fun to read because of that.) Been out of pocket, so playing catchup with my reading. I'll follow the story, and add likes when possible. Keep up the good job--get those next chapters done while I catch up! <grin>
  19. Robert Rex

    The Tunnel

    Been out of pocket, had to get caught up. (6 chapters, and I'm out of likes for the day!) Great tale so far--and really looking forward to what the queen communicates to them; suspect it'll be a major revelation, and will somehow provide an alternate power supply to the city, and (I suspect) much more.) Fine writing here--truly enjoyable!
  20. Robert Rex

    Master Golfer

    Nicely done! And admittedly, kept trying to figure out where you were going with the story line--all the way up to the end--and you told a fine tale all long. Not the typical storyline here...and you did well with it! Good job!
  21. Robert Rex

    Get Tested

    Loved this story--and loved the way you backfilled the past into the storyline as it was being told! The emotions were solid, and our friendly teddybear showed his claws appropriately. Fun read--another good job!
  22. Thanks for sticking with the story and the warm welcome back, Carlos! I love that the guys ARE rough, tough, and direct--and yet the undercurrent of love somehow manages to come through. Neither one ever feels apologetic or hesistant for being gay or their status--they just live their lives. And in this chapter, Bulldog was DEFINITELY "mission focused". LOL Thanks for the comments, buddy! Now I'll focus on catching up on my reading--including YOUR stuff!
  23. Thanks, Onim...good to be back. I've missed this place! I think the thing for me is that Bulldog never felt pressured or obligated to do anything--he just acted as things felt right. (And if it sounds like I'm reporting on them as men, sometimes it feels that way--they're that real to me!) And nice that Bubba fully understood the important of what Bulldog did. They're both great guys. Thanks for the comments and kind words!
  24. Thanks, Pzetts! Glad you like the writing style; glad its communicating not only event details (which can sometimes be overwhelming and overdone) as well as the emotions! Feeling better mostly; a couple of minor setback days, but as I've said--as normal as I can be for me! (Wasn't ever THAT normal anyway! LOL Thanks for the comments and for following the story!
  25. Thanks, Cole! And thanks for noticing the writing style change--the rapid-fire apprach seems to especially fit the drama of the first chapter, while a more relaxed style seemed "right" for the birthday party and Bulldog's "present" later. (Just didn't seem like a "wham-bam-thank-you-Sam" style would work there! ) I appreciate your comments and support!
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