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    Chapter 15

    flesco commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 15

    Great story, you've managed to equate the emotional stresses and turmoil admirably, the latest stunt by the grandparents is a twist I hadn't considered. Great plot twist! You really need to find a way to help poor peter get some relief. He's pretty frazzled and I'd hate to see the relationship deteriorate further. I'm patiently awaiting the next chapter. Thank you for a very well told story so far....
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    Chapter 4

    flesco commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 4

    This was a truly inspired story, told with humor, and feelings that were correct for each situation. Thank you. I've been truly entertained and educated at the same time!
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