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Nice beginning to a new story, you’ve got me interested and I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

I love these characters! ❤️ You certainly covered a lot of ground in this chapter, Hunter and Perry (I’d still like to see a story about them), Hot Tony the hotel room service waiter, Ian and Cam, and now we come back to Hayden. Thanks for filling in a lot of details about these incredible characters. I’m looking forward to the next chapter, even though I know I’ll need to have a new box of tissues to get through it! 😃

I really loved this chapter! ❤️ You’ve made my day by having Hunter meet Perry, and having the sparks flying between rhem. The visits by Jaime to both was a wonderful way to bring them together. I too would like to see a story about these two characters. They neither one appeared in the earlier stories. You’ve made me grab the tissues again. 😂 You really do have an amazing talent for telling stories and creating complicated deeply moving characters! Thank you so much Geoff! 👏 Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Another outstanding chapter, in a terrific story! I’m glad that Kyle has gone to work with Eric and Rain, he’ll be a lot happier going forward! I’m glad Lola and Aunt Pearl seem to be getting along with each other. Lola seems to be mellowing out just a little bit. This is a very dynamic family and I love all of the characters. Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

I love these characters and the story! Thank you for moving forward with this story again! $250,000.00 is a large sum when you take into account how many descendants there could be by now. However, the amount is less important than the actual apologies that are being given in a heartfelt way. Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Thank you for another great story Ron! 👏 Your story brought about a satisfying ending. I love these characters and hope you’ll revisit them in the future. Looking forward to the next story! 😃

Great chapter Geoff! The emotional turmoil comes through clearly, and I hope that Nick will start to develop some self assurance, some self esteem and mostly importantly some self worth. Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

I’m truly impressed by the way you create characters and stories that are realistic, emotional and uplifting. You are a Master Storyteller! You’ve taken me on a special journey through small town life, intolerance at persons not “normal,” has been and probably always will be around. It’s very sad that religions all teach the same message, tolerance and love are stronger than hate and intolerance, and are uniformly ignored by so many. Thank you for incorporating the horrors of Orlando into this story, and helping all of us believe, even when older, that it will get better! THANK YOU! 😃

Great story, you brought incredible characters to life with all the angst and uncertainties of young love. All the emotions and fears where extremely well told. Thank you so much for reminding everyone of that first love we all wanted so bad, but were so afraid to take the chance of being rejected and outed in a society that still persecutes people who are different. Outstanding story, great character development and incredible use of emotions and fears! I look forward to more stories from you!!!😃

Outstanding chapter! Devin and Cameron bonding over Devin’s troubles, was very touching. The fact that his coach wouldn’t be available for over an hour forced Devin to go to Cameron’s home, where he then met Mrs. Lynch and got the support that he needed in that moment. When Devin and Cameron were sent to his room, the last step forward for Devin supporting Kevin was revealed. He could actually see the love between Kevin and Cameron. Amazing emotional chapter, and I wish I had a Kevin to be my husband. I hate the idea of the story ending 😢 I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃 Yes, you’ve brought tears to my eyes once again. Excellent story telling!

I really love Tony and Eric, they are who they are no matter what anyone else thinks. The MacKenzie family dinners are a hoot! A very small ignorant part of the family tries to brow beat the gay members because they’re to brainwashed by biblical teachings. It’s nice to see that the majority of the family has or is coming around. Hopefully in another 10 years the majority of the people will be accepting and respectful. I’m looking forward to the next chapter!

Outstanding chapter! I’ll miss Ivan and Katya, the gift for Alik is a nice touch. Dropping in unannounced on your son and his partner and then complaining about the house being a mess is just wrong! Nick and David were rather calm about the whole thing. The wedding was anticlimactic. I love the relationship between Eric and Tony. The love they share is extremely rare. I love all the characters in this story. Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Excellent chapter! I’m sorry that the wheel of life just ran over Devin and Ashley 😢 Devin finally seems to be returning to the person he used to be. With the support of his brother the coach, and ultimately his father, there is hope that he can get through this. Ashley and her family and friends are the wildcards in this scenario. Hopefully all parties involved will come up with a solution that will be beneficial to everyone. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you Eric! Your stories and characters are amazing and you also should take out stock I a tissue manufacture company. 😃

Great chapter! The Ellen show taping was wonderful, I really appreciate the way you included the proposal at the beginning of the segment to set the stage before they even appeared. Ellen’s questions about the ability to have children biologically is ridiculous. She’s perfectly aware of biology! There are many ways for gay men to have children, surrogates, IVF and adoptions. The usual problems are narrow minded straight people who make having children for GLBTQ persons unduly difficult if not impossible depending on where one lives! They always claim that God says WE are dangerous to children. Too long religious intolerance has been able to deny US our rights to be parents. OK, I’ll step down off my soapbox now! 😉 I’m really looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Great chapter! I really enjoyed the way you had Nick worried about school and his hot brother in the start of this chapter. I’m glad that Nick was honest with Noah about school and the fact that he is sending the wrong messages with the shower scene last chapter. Noah handled everything perfectly and helped Nick get some sleep. Noah was really there for Nick at the mall parking lot when he had his panic attack. Noah handled it extremely well and brought Nick back slowly and patiently until the crisis had passed. His explanation about why they were doing what they did made Nick realize that he really did deserve to be treated like everyone else, with respect and love. Can’t wait until the next chapter is released! You’re still making me cry through these chapters 😂 I really hope you took my advice and invested in a tissue manufacturing company! 😃

Great chapter! The wheel of life seems about to roll right over Ashley and Devin, hopefully it will steamroll right over Paul, Gordon and Paul’s wacko father. When Ashley has the baby, I sincerely hope that Devin and Kevin’s mother will be unable to get her evil hands on it. I sincerely hope that a good adoptive family can be found to raise the baby. Ashley’s irresponsible parents and Devin’s mother are clearly incapable of raising their grandchild. You’ve definitely added a lot of depth to these characters and I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Great chapter, I enjoyed the interaction between Eric & Peter and Yuri & Boris, it’s adding depth to these characters relationship. Burbank airport is a smaller airport with limited airlines utilizing it. Private planes us it often due to it’s proximity to Hollywood and downtown Los Angeles. It’s a very nice airport. I like that Eric is becoming more comfortable with the titles and their proper usage. Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

I’m heartbroken for Hunter losing Jaime. 😭 Hopefully Hunter will go to the cape, so that he can try to pick up the pieces and start over. I’m happy for the warm reception Vic is receiving at the high school, the interview with Hayden was a really nice touch. It’s very good to get a glimpse of the other main characters prior to the beginning of the original story. The new house and new car paid for by his parents using the money they’d saved for his college education was an extraordinarily special addition. I love the new pool boy. 😍 I’m ready for the next chapter 😃

Very sad chapter 😢 I loved Andy, Hunter, Gavin and Alex. It was nice to see Ian in this story. I am now looking forward to seeing how you merge this story with the original. His new job and position with the high school will keep him busy, as well as the lifeguards at the community pool. You always find a way to keep me interested in the story and your Characters make all of us fall in love with them. Thank you for your hard work. Outstanding job! 😃

Excellent chapter, I didn’t see Alex coming, sooner or later Gavin will need his ass pounded, the question will be if Alex can support his need? The penultimate sexual encounter between Andy and Vic was very sweet. It’s very nice that the two couples could get along so well! I’m looking forward to the next chapter, however I’m going to be sad about Andy and Vic. Thankfully Vic’s parents, and fellow teammates will be available to help him with whatever ic happening next. 😃

This was an amazing chapter! I feel like Andy and Vic are starting a relationship that will help them both get through their university life with support, friendship and absolute joy. The sex was perfect and just as it would be in real life with teenagers. I’m very much looking forward to the next chapter and the return of Gavin, let’s see how that goes...😃

Great chapter! You’re still making them work for it, Newsies was a great way to bring them closer. I think Andy is getting more comfortable after Vic’s no labels talk. I’m hoping that Andy can get past the whole cultural barriers to being happy with himself and who he is. Vic seems to have similar qualities in making people feel safe and comfortable in his presence. Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Really enjoyed this chapter, you’re going to make them work for it, aren’t you. Hehehe.... Love the food details, keep them coming in future chapters. Can’t wait for the next chapter! 😃

Great chapter, glad the injuries were not worse, love Jaime, Hunter will be in good hands during his recovery. Hate Hunters family. Andy could be an interesting new character in this story. Looking forward to the next chapter 😃

Another great story with dynamic characters and realistic dialogue. I really enjoy the way you’re always adding unexpected twists in your stories. You always keep us guessing. I’m looking forward to the next chapter and book 4!!