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This was an amazing chapter! I feel like Andy and Vic are starting a relationship that will help them both get through their university life with support, friendship and absolute joy. The sex was perfect and just as it would be in real life with teenagers. I’m very much looking forward to the next chapter and the return of Gavin, let’s see how that goes...😃
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Great chapter! You’re still making them work for it, Newsies was a great way to bring them closer. I think Andy is getting more comfortable after Vic’s no labels talk. I’m hoping that Andy can get past the whole cultural barriers to being happy with himself and who he is. Vic seems to have similar qualities in making people feel safe and comfortable in his presence. Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃
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Really enjoyed this chapter, you’re going to make them work for it, aren’t you. Hehehe.... Love the food details, keep them coming in future chapters. Can’t wait for the next chapter! 😃
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Open a New Window, Open a New Door
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Open a New Window, Open a New Door
Great chapter, glad the injuries were not worse, love Jaime, Hunter will be in good hands during his recovery. Hate Hunters family. Andy could be an interesting new character in this story. Looking forward to the next chapter 😃 -
Another great story with dynamic characters and realistic dialogue. I really enjoy the way you’re always adding unexpected twists in your stories. You always keep us guessing. I’m looking forward to the next chapter and book 4!!
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Great chapter, I’m disturbed by the last line, and am hoping that Ryan and Milan will become closer and will care for Kai together. Looking forward to the next chapter 😃
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Wow, this family is seriously screwed up. The father has anger management issues, the wife has been brainwashed by the church, Devin is a serial liar and they have issues with Kevin! The father at least is being supportive of Kevin, mom and Devin need psychological counseling. Paul is a closeted homophobe, and Ashley is a spoiled princess with no care for anyone but herself. As for Cameron’s mom always being home, her husband was killed in action, and I’m guessing that there was life insurance to help her with raising Cameron. I hop Kevi isn’t hurt too badly. There was a glimmer of hope for Devin, but his own selfishness took over again. Looking forward to the next chapter 😃
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On Your Marks, Get Set, Go!
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in On Your Marks, Get Set, Go!
Great start for this new story, love Vic and Gavin, sad that they’re going to different Universities in different parts of the country. Looking forward to more about Hunter in next chapter. -
A Very Special Boy (Part Three & Epilogue)
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Very Special Boy (Part Three & Epilogue)
Congratulations master storyteller, you did a magnificent job with the ending! You should get a large stock dividend due to the amount of tissues required. I also would like to see a story about Noah and Timmy. Truly an amazing story with an inspired ending! 😂 looking forward to Vic’s story. -
A Very Special Boy (Part Two)
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Very Special Boy (Part Two)
Gramma is hilarious, she’s at the age where she says what she wants and doesn’t give a damn what anybody thinks! Love Gramma! The wedding was beautiful and romantic. The honeymoon was delightful. Then you dropped the 2000 Lb. bomb on everyone in a cliffhanger no less! As I’ve stated before, you should have stock in tissue manufacturing companies! You’re a master at emotional manipulation and a master at story telling! Your characters have depth and the dialogue is realistic. Thanks so much! -
A Very Special Boy (Part One)
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Very Special Boy (Part One)
You should get stock in a tissue company!, thanks to your uncanny ability to create characters with real emotions and believable dialogue. You sir are a Master Story Teller! I can’t tell you how much I appreciate and enjoy your writing and stories. Thank you so very much 👏❤️😂 I will be very sad 😢 to see this amazing story end. -
I must say that the groomsmen sex romp was extremely hot. I feel sorry for Alex and Connor and the deception their living, they should be willing to tell dear old dad off and live for themselves, rather than living like kept boys waiting for the old guy to die. Very glad to see Jacob come into the story. Excellent chapter
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A hot Asian boy’s hot ass is exactly what Charlie needs at this point in his life. Hot sex distracts the emotional baggage leftover by David, what he does not need is any of Frankie’s b.s. I really hope that he can resist Frankie’s “charms”, hopefully Eric will intercede and stop Charlie from jumping back into the fire. Great story, excellent chapter.
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The Musician (Part Four)
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Musician (Part Four)
Damn, the other shoe just dropped 😭 I knew this was coming, but it made me cry for both of them. They fit together so perfectly and complement their strengths and weaknesses perfectly. You’ve manipulated my emotions again! You know what you’re doing! Great chapter even though it’s 😢 -
I already love Charlie, now I’m loving David, they’re so amazing together. This was an amazing chapter, I only wish my husband of 27+ years was as romantic as David. I’m truly jealous of the romantic love story their sharing together. Greatest chapter yet! 💕
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I love these guys! Everyone needs a friend like Parker. I’m still hopeful for this new relationship to work, however I know from the last story that Charlie was alone when he met Jacob. My guess is they’re going to end up going to different colleges or universities and will end up separating as a result of the distances involved. Hopefully the friendship will survive. Another great chapter in a great story.
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You are a master at character nuances, I already love Charlie, I dislike Frankie, I love Liz, and now out of the blue, comes David. I already want to love him, but according to him, I need to wait and watch what happens. I have very high hopes for this potential relationship. Thank you for being a genius in story telling. ❤️
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Very sad about Frankie breaking Charlie’s heart, however most teenage romances are doomed to failure for a multitude of reasons. Frankie didn’t have the support system to come out to his family and teammates. There unfortunately are too many people who still see being gay as a choice that can be overcome. I’m not forgiving his cowardly methods, but living in the conservative south, I can understand his reluctance. As usual you’re playing with our emotions, and doing it very well. Great story and characters!
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Great ending to an amazing story! I’m so sad that it’s ending 😭 Very sad about Hayden’s cancer and Vic’s loss. I am happy to hear that your going forward with Charlie and Jacob’s story. Yes you brought tears and sadness, as well as, joy and laughter to this story. Thank you Geoff!
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You’ve played with my emotions again! You’ve created these characters for us to enjoy and connect with on an emotional level, and you are spectacular at manipulating your readers. Not in a bad way, but in a realistic and happy way! I do hope that there are wedding bells soon. I really hope that Charlie and Jacob will be the next storyline. Charlie has a gift that hopefully Jacob, Ian and Cam will encourage. Great chapter!
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Mrs. Lynch is a great mother!, she’s being supportive, and tolerant of her son’s sexuality even though she’s uncomfortable with the details, she’s continuing to help Cameron make choices with her absolutely unconditional love. It’s always sad when family is not supportive and hostile toward their GLBTQ relatives. Great chapter!
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Great chapter! I love these guys and all of their family and friends, I really appreciate the honesty that their using with each other, it’s something that every couple should follow, there would be fewer issues. The spectre of this illness is weighing on both of them, and making me uneasy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Great chapter, you’ve cleared up the fostering quickness issues with a reasonable explanation. I’m looking forward to the next chapter of the story and am very invested in your characters. So looking forward to more depth on each character going forward. Outstanding story 😃
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I’m happy that Ian is getting out of the hospital and moving to a rehabilitation center for intense PT, these rehab sessions will be very hard for everyone, however, once completed, will allow Ian to go home and continue with his life! I’ll be very sad 😞 to have this story end. I’m very fond of all of these characters and will miss them terribly! Sequels and side stories are very necessary. Great story and chapter.
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Another great chapter! The insurance policy twist making dear old bastard dad pay for the wedding of his “faggot” son and boyfriend is just too perfect, the ultimate poetic justice. Hopefully dad will be watching live from hell, and made to suffer in perpetuity for his crimes. Keep this fascinating story going, please!
