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Brody, the Rescuer…
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I shall use this as a literary example I often share with people thinking of writing. This is a clear case of seeing someone write in their own dearest blood. Comsie exsanginated his emotions to breathe life into the chapter. It is one of the most powerful things I’ve ever read! He was a true master of his craft! Anyone interested in being an author should read this story. You write what you know and when you do people will really connect with what you are writing. Comsie knew this world and bled to share it with us.
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I admire Zack’s courage. Too bad he faced the dragon in his den. I figured Dear Old Dad would attempt to murder him when Zack acted out. That will happen eventually if Zack doesn’t do something soon, though. He must tell now. He and his mother are in terrible danger. That psychotic needs to be put away…one way or another.
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A stunning chapter by Comsie and very revealing about what he must have gone through growing up. God bless his soul and give it peace.
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I can only hope that Dear Old Dad isn’t as big a psychopath as I’m afraid he is. If he is he’ll be able to easily manipulate his wife into believing his lies so he can continue his victimization of his son. Psychopaths are past masters of manipulation, gaslighting, and subtle emotional abuse. We shall see what we shall see.
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Brandon Smiling: From The Billy Chase Chronicles.
MrM replied to MrM's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
And Brandon Smiling continues. . . Entry 40: https://gayauthors.org/story/mrm/brandon-smiling-from-the-billy-chase-chronicles-2/40 Entry 41: https://gayauthors.org/story/mrm/brandon-smiling-from-the-billy-chase-chronicles-2/41 Entry 42: https://gayauthors.org/story/mrm/brandon-smiling-from-the-billy-chase-chronicles-2/42 -
Love can turn the worst afternoon of your life into the best in just a couple of slow blinks of the eye.
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Those scratches can’t be hidden for long.
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“To be honest...I wanted to hit something. Actually, I wanted to DESTROY something! But not an inanimate object. No...that wasn't good enough. I wanted to hit something that would be HURT by it. Something that SCREAMS! Something that CRIES! Something that BLEEDS! It made me wonder...is this what my father feels like when he's beating the living hit out me every day?” …and so it begins for Zack. The father innoculates the son who then innoculates his own son and then his son in a pattern of abuse that lasts generations. The Hate becomes almost like a genetic virus passed down one beating at a time. Hopefully, Zack’s heroic spirit will be able to break the pattern and stop the hurting that has gone on for far, far too long.
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That last part…so tragic in its beauty. Should Zack have died that night, at least he would have been able to feel love before the end. That’s every bit as evocative an idea as Justin and Taryn’s ability to make every time the first time. Comsie was a master at making unforgettable images like that.
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Hot as lava! Nobody did it better than Comsie! ❤️
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Friday Well…I guess I’ve made my decision. I’m sorry Billy… He finally said the words…the Three Little Words right to my face today on the front lawn at school. I’d noticed he was acting particularly nervous today when we first met at lunch. He asked if we could go outside on the lawn to finish lunch. So we went. He lead us to a nice spot that was quiet, but not too quiet. I knew something must be up because he was breathing hard and had this permanent blush on his cheeks.
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I like the idea of Zack knowing where his father sleeps at night…
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Thursday The more I think about it, the more I’m afraid. Stevie’s example, yesterday, had done its damage. It was obvious Jason and Karl went after Stevie because he looked ‘gay’. The things they said, as they were working him over, were clearly homophobic! With THAT kind of hatred roaming around school, how can I responsibly commit to any kind of gay relationship without risk of being Outed? The risk is real! These guys are out of control! How could I possibly put myself, m
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Like I said, I will push on even though Comsie may be gone.
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Wednesday Ok, something is seriously going on with Stevie! He came into school with a BLACK EYE today! “Dude! Who the hell did that to you?” I asked him when I first saw him this morning. “None of your business! Just…stay out of it, ok?” Stevie growled! “Bullshit! Is someone picking on you, Stevie? Tell me!” I begged. “I SAID forget it, Brandon!” Stevie almost shouted at me and then pushed passed me, kind of, roughly! Ok, now I’m really worried! Is someone beat
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Beautiful! How I wish I could have had a ‘Brody’ in my life. He would have been my only escape too.
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Attempted murder now. They have a saying in Texas about what certain people need. . .
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So the psychopath is also an adulterer. Is there no end to this man’s evil?
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I knew it would come to something broken or dislocated!
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Zack has enormous courage to return home under the circumstances. I would probably have never returned. A park bench or a jail cell would be better than what awaits Zack at home with that psychopath. One considers that Zack loves his mother and would not want to desert her, but even so…there comes a time when enough is enough.
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What a bright spirit you are, Comsie… Keep shining for us here on this poor old tired earth. We need that light.
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There are no words that I can say about what I’d want to do to Zack’s father that wouldn’t get me banned from GA forever. My hatred is complete.
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That’s quite a belt buckle! 😝
