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Yeahh, it is how it had to be
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That is very true. Nabius is such a brutal place, but I still imagine the inhabitants and leaders to be intelligent and precise. Though the future of it as a society won't get touched upon in this book, I'll have to see where it goes later. With how I've planned out this story, there will definitely have to be a sequel
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That is very true. Nabius is such a brutal place, but I still imagine the inhabitants and leaders to be intelligent and precise. Though the future of it as a society won't get touched upon in this book, I'll have to see where it goes later. With how I've planned out this story, there will definitely have to be a sequel
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Yeah, I was sad about it as well hopefully this will be an exciting new start for Luca!
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Yeah, I was sad about it as well hopefully this will be an exciting new start for Luca!
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Alexandre sighed contentedly, waking up nestled in the muscular arms of his training partner that was now also his personal assistant. It had been almost two weeks since Alexandre had first shown the man to his bedchambers, but now the two were almost inseparable, sleeping together each night and training or seeing to estate affairs during the day. Because Alex knew that it would look suspicious if a slave was seen with him all the time – and he also needed an excuse to get Carlin past the guard
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Awww, this was a great chapter. Nate's bashfulness was adorable, and he and Erin are really sweet as a couple together. And yay! I'm glad that both stories should be updated soon
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Each year in the tradition of the academy, students graduated just a few weeks after the passing of their seventeenth year. Though she was a prodigy and likely could have graduated earlier, Talia Di Coteau was no exception to this rule. She glanced around the room she was in, and her pupils dilated as she took in her surroundings. Twenty-three sandbags, each with a red and black target at the center. She looked up at the strings that they were suspended with, and noted that each string was conne
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Yay thank you! Hopefully I still get to spoil you a little bit and I appreciate that you think you're being spoiled at all!!
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Wow, thank you for such detailed and lengthy reviews! It really means a lot to me that people are getting into the story. In my mind, Ysabel seems to have psychotic outbursts revolving around the fact that she is forced to live away from her family. That being said, I don't think she would order any of them harm unless they were a danger to Nabius/had really gone out of their way to be destructive. I hope you like the story lines with Jezebel and Ysabel, because they have a lot coming for them in the future!
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Hehe thank ya We'll see! I still hope to get a little done each night though!
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Carlin sat in Alexandre’s private training courtyard, lonely and bored. It had been three days since he had shared a kiss with his master, and the younger man had not trained with him since. I should never have kissed him. Carlin had spent every day mulling over why he had been so impulsive, and frowning at the complications that came with potential involvement with Alex. Life can be so obnoxious… of course it was the son of Darion Di Coteau that I kissed. He supposed it wouldn’t be his life if
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Hahaha Ysabel and her niece are both a little unstable, and they have a lot coming for them in the future. I'm glad you like Carlin and Alex as a match, because I think they compliment each other well also! As for Carlin and his plans, you'll have to wait and see!
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Who knows, you'll have to find out! And thank you!!!!!
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Who knows, you'll have to find out! And thank you!!!!!
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I really wasn't expecting a laugh there, and I think that's what made me laugh even harder . That's one of the best lines yet, and with how good this story is, that's saying something. No time for a real review, but thanks for writing! Drunk Alex is really cute, and Ysabel is one of my favorite characters no matter what mood she's in . Amazing chapter, probably my favorite yet Aw thanks bud!! I'm glad the chapters went over well, I was wondering how you guys would react while I was gone!! Ysabel is going to be a fun character for me to write >
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Luca was trying to escape drawing attention in the streets of the capitol, but was having a tough time due to the fact that his companion kept sobbing every so often. Glaring at Luca and his young companion, an older gentlemen in military garb passed grumpily by the pair with an exaggerated huff near the church of the assassin St. Melvin. Luca thought he heard the man mumble something derogatory about whores, but steeled his gaze and walked on. “Jack, please be quiet. Meko will not be happy
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Alexandre was glad to have put two days of travel in between himself and his mother, and felt every muscle in his body relax when he had seen the skyline of Mullansburg. Madame Ysabel had been adamant about saying goodbye, so he had stopped by her home just before leaving. Everything seemed to be going well when he had departed, and the small woman seemed to have been in the same mood that she had been in all day. She was calm and collected, which was a bit of a rarity for her. Whatever the reas
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Ysabel woke up when a laughing child had run through the street beneath her bedroom window, and scowled to have been disturbed. I will kill that child, she thought while she imagined its little head on a stick. Rising quickly, she looked into the wall-sized mirror that was across from her bed, noticing she had looked especially beautiful this morning. It would be a good day to seek pleasure. Perhaps Count Gorget, or another General that happened to be in town. Plenty were in the city, and Ysabel
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Haha indeed! Lots of questions to consider, and who knows which ones will be answered
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I'm glad you thought it was funny Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
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I'm glad you liked it! Luca is really fun to write about, and I see a lot of potential for him. Hopefully I don't disappoint. Thank YOU for reading! The reviews and such keep giving me motivation to write on, and I'm glad that people are actually interested!!
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I'm glad you liked it! Luca is really fun to write about, and I see a lot of potential for him. Hopefully I don't disappoint. Thank YOU for reading! The reviews and such keep giving me motivation to write on, and I'm glad that people are actually interested!!
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Yay! I'm glad you like him and liked the chapter!! I think he's a cutie too, and am excited for where he's going in the future!
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He was actually intended to be that way, but I found that I really liked him as a character! He isn't in my original outline for the book at all, so I'm going to have to see what I can do with him > Thank you for the review!!!
