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Adrian felt relief that he no longer had to deal with generals and the counts that they brought along with them to do business, but for some reason he couldn’t shake the feeling of anxiety. He had closed many deals and felt that he was probably ushering in a new brand of prosperity for the Illjard, but the Nabian elite were greedy, insatiable, and just a general pain to deal with. Almost everyone had left the Di Coteau house now, but the relaxation Adrian had expected to come following their dep
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Oh no, thank you so much for reviewing at all! It really means a lot to me. When it comes to Eamon, I think you'll get your wish soon! Marion is still definitely in development, but I agree that she and Jezebel have some similarities. I'll try to flesh out their differences better in the future, especially when the action regarding them starts picking up again. Thank you again!
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Thank you! Don't worry, there will be lots of it soon, and I do mean lots. I appreciate the review!
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Thank you so much for reading and the review!
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Hopefully! This chapter was a bit about setting up for the next several. Yago is definitely calculating, and his relationship with his sister will certainly take some turns soon. Is it schizophrenia ? Or something else? I'm really starting to like her as a character as well for exactly that reason. And thank you very much!
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Perhaps! Ysabel's relationship with her brother and her struggle for control will be made much clearer later. As for Carl, there will be a return to action soon, and his relationship with his subjects is certainly important to keep in mind. Thank you for the review!!
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Tome after tome, Carl searched through his parent’s entire library looking for the answer to his most pressing question. After looking for days on end, he found only the same answer, repeated; that the Hallowed Order was disbanded almost 200 years ago. Every page and scroll that he came across said the same thing – that same phrase about dissolution that made absolutely no sense to him. Didn’t my father say I was to be inducted? He shook his head, dismayed to find that the last text he had f
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Just devoured this story up to this point - I absolutely love it. Character depths are amazing and I can sense a really great plot coming on. Keep up the great work! Best, Wes
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Jezebel sat atop a massive four-poster bed, arms crossed and fuming. The high ponytail that she always wore occasionally swayed with her twitches of rage, which coursed through her every time she thought of another reason why it was an insult to be in her cousin's territory during the meeting of the Thirteen. All of the most important Nabians sit in and around the Di Coteau house socializing, waiting for the news. Affirming their strength. And I am here. Fucking. Here. Her rage mounted over
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Indeed they did - sometimes fights are the worst between the closest of people. And yes he has! Luca has developed quite a bit. Indeed! Yago's decision is most certainly significant. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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It certainly does raise some interesting questions about their dynamic. We'll see what happens! Thank you so much for the review and reading!
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Adrian Fray faced down the council of thirteen fearlessly, knowing that he was perfectly safe despite being at one of the most dangerous meetings in the history of Nabius. Though three murders had occurred in the camping grounds outside the Di Coteau estate since the arrival of all thirteen generals, no Illjardi had been affected or even close to the scenes of the crimes. In fact, most Nabians were trying to gain favor with the Illjardi folk present in Nabius, and were at their best behavior. Th
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I really loved this story! Great both for Halloween (even if I'm a year late ) and as a stand alone!
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Most definitely agreed. And hahaha I love it. He definitely has a major decision on his hands! Thank you for reading and for the review!!!
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Thank you for such an in depth review! To answer your thoughts: You wouldn't recall because you don't know yet! I think things are definitely busy there, but who knows what is going on. Ysabel has the right idea, I'd agree, but for someone who wants to change the way of the world how far should Alex buy into the laws of the land? Poor Luca, what a decision. Lots to come in the near future. Thanks again!
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“Lady Talia,” said a housemaid in reverent submission, “it is such an honor welcoming you back home.” The girl was genuflecting herself in such a way that Talia could only see her one knee sticking out from her skirts on the ground and the hair on the top of her head. It wasn’t a servant that Talia remembered, but she admitted to herself that she really didn’t remember many of them. The view from above wasn’t helping either. Most all of the house staff was outside the front entrance to the Di Co
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Don't worry - you'll see plenty of interaction soon!! I know its slow at the moment, but lots is about to happen Thank you tons for reading and reviewing!!!!
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I liked having all three princes in one go as well! As for the relationships between these characters, we'll have to see what happens Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review!!!
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The Prince of Tomacia walked through a small village marketplace, still soaked and shirtless from swimming with a few friends that he had recently reconnected with. As usual, he was the center of attention and turned heads wherever he went. This time, though, the attention wasn’t all friendly. Carl gazed around at the stares that surrounded him as he moved, finding a select few faces that looked angry, or at the very least questioning of his personhood. He was in the innermost village square tha
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I'm glad you like it! As for your suspicions, we'll have to see > Things will definitely pick up soon. Thank you for reading and for the review!
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Perhaps indeed! I think everybody would react differently to the struggle of going blind, and how he does definitely will characterize him. Thank you for reading and the review!
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I think recklessness is definitely something that defines Jezebel, and indeed it does backfire on her often. As for Eamon, we'll have to see... Thank you for reading and the review!
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It is - but harshness is definitely a trademark here I'm thinking. Lots to deal with in the aftermath of this event for sure. Hahaha, certainly considerable! Thank you for reading!
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Alexandre rode in his mother’s lavish carriage as he headed home, which was a welcome reprieve from the saddle that he had been accustomed to in recent months. He enjoyed being able to sprawl his legs out wide, and sit on a pillow cushion as he made the next stage of his journey, and felt blessed to start losing the callous bruising of the inner thighs that prolonged horseback always caused. The box of the carriage in particular was a bit cramped, but he wasn’t about to complain. I only feel ba
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Indeed! I'll drop a small spoiler that Eamon isn't going to die, but once again Jezebel is going to have messed up a lot for the group. Thank you for reading and for the review!
