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  1. VVesley

    Chapter 17

    Indeed! I've wanted to write a piece where Eamon and Adrian save their men :D We'll have to see! Thank you for the comment and for reading!
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    Chapter 17

    Haha, I didn't even think of that but you are right! Thank you for the comment!
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    Chapter 17

    Indeed - we'll have to see what happens! Thank you for reading and commenting!
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    Chapter 17

    Luca wandered the hall outside the main wing of the kitchen, struggling to stay awake. The stress of his impending death made for an odd contrast with his exhaustion, and he felt useless as he thought about the battle unfolding around him. He contemplated whether he had really even truly achieved anything in this war, and wondered what would happen when he died. General Clarion had taken over command of the estate, leaving him with a lot fewer responsibilities than he had been managing previousl
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    Chapter 16

    All will be revealed in time! Thank you for reading and for leaving a comment!
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    Chapter 16

    Is it really a "gift" though? ;) All will be revealed! I'm trying to get these next few chapters out a little more quickly - hopefully I am able to. Thank you for reading and for the comment!
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    Chapter 16

    Talia lay with one side of her face pressed to the cold floor, her hair spilling out in every direction across the stone and over her face. She could no longer tell whether the red haze in her vision was from her hair, or something else. I don’t know how much more of this I can take. Talia had been force fed by Yago over the past several days, and each ritualistic meal made her inch closer and closer to losing her mind. Logic became harder, and she felt a dense fog wrapping itself around her
  8. VVesley

    The Story

    This was such an exciting and interesting story - thanks for sharing! I certainly hope that we see these characters and this world again, as I really like them both already!
  9. VVesley

    Chapter 15

    We will just have to see! Lots can happen during war! Thank you all for reading and commenting!
  10. VVesley

    Chapter 15

    Yes indeed it is!!!
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    Chapter 15

    Marion approached the throne room of her family’s castle with trepidation, trying her best to ignore the stares she was getting and failing. Her reinstatement came with a coronation, and though she thought the ceremony was silly she did her best to adhere to tradition. People here need stability. This is for them, not me. As she walked into the room where her family was executed, Marion felt a huge swell of emotion. Shit. Her eyes welled, and she lifted her head so that her tears wouldn’t ru
  12. VVesley

    Chapter 14

    I'm glad that you liked the chapter! Thank you for reading and for the comment!
  13. VVesley

    The Truce

    Hi Jim, you will definitely need to read the other two books first! Thank you for inquiring!
  14. VVesley

    Chapter 14

    Indeed she did! Thank you for reading and for the review!
  15. VVesley

    Chapter 14

    Definitily some tension! I'm glad you enjoyed! Thank you for reading and for the comment.
  16. VVesley

    Chapter 14

    Ha! Lots of 'rounds' coming up soon! Thank you for reading and for the comment.
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    Chapter 14

    A short day and a half on the road had done Adrian and Kade’s relationship well, and Adrian was pleased to see that they still got along outside the confines of a hotel room and the Hawkins’ shop. Kade made an excellent travel partner, and insisted on doing his duty in carrying his own belongings and setting up camp. Adrian had rented a horse for him, and Kade had allowed that so that he wouldn’t slow the group down. Adrian still wasn’t sure whether Kade’s insistence on being self-sufficient was
  18. VVesley

    Chapter 13

    Indeed! Devan is a man who has accomplished a lot in his life - his words should be good advice for Kade. Yago is definitely someone to watch out for. Talia is going to have a lot of work cut out for her! Thank you for reading and leaving a comment! It means a lot to have readers to keep me motivated to keep going.
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    Chapter 13

    Maybe! Kade is used to being a Nabian citizen. For a long time he has had no agency or ability to decide how he should act or what he should do - it had been decided for him for most of his life. We will see! As for Yago, he is dangerous indeed! Thank you for the kind words and always leaving a comment! I sincerely appreciate it.
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    Chapter 13

    Kade was alone in the shop for the first time in several days, owing to the fact that Adrian was making a few preparations. He had left to catch up on business at the local aviary, where he had a small stockpile of letters that had been forwarded there and another pile that he needed to write. Kade had wondered why Adrian seemed to have so much free time, but it appeared that he had been neglecting his duties to spend time with Kade. Well, I guess it wasn’t a full neglection, Kade thought. I
  21. VVesley

    Chapter 12

    Aww, thank you so much! Such kind words. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment!
  22. VVesley

    Chapter 12

    Glad to hear that the suspense is working! Thank you for reading and leaving a comment!
  23. VVesley

    Chapter 12

    For once indeed! Thank you for reading and for the review
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    Chapter 12

    Jezebel Di Coteau threw the bottle of wine that sat on her desk onto the floor, making it shatter into thousands of shards that littered the floor of her office. The red liquid inside formed a puddle that slowly crawled to expand its circumference as it seeped into the stone beneath. She sat with her elbows on her desk and hands on her temples, and groaned in frustration. After a few moments in which everyone was too tense to say anything or move, Jezebel addressed the nearest guard. “What a
  25. Very nice chapter! I like the relationship that's beginning here. Whether it turns romantic or not remains to be seen, but either way it's nice to have a friendship building in the works first!
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