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I don't think he's too worried about fairness But it will be addressed in the next chapter!
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Good Question! Remember that Giovanni Nandra is not an opposing force - he's more like neutral ground. Jack Du Vance (now Jezebel's territory) was also relatively unmanned, so its more like Orr's territory is the only thing holding them back from having a complete line down the east side of Nabius, with Tomacia at their back for defensive purposes. They could attack Marie Lafeye certainly, but the Orr estate is the more valuable property to go for first, as it links Alex with Ysabel I just realized I wrote Davora instead of Orr - thanks for the catch, editing that now.
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Ha! Is it ever? Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
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Indeed, it is tough for them! And we'll have to see I know where Jared's storyline goes in the future, but as for right now, lots could happen! Still so many decisions to be made about this battle.
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We'll have to see which way the internal fight goes for her - jury's still out
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Carl was there when the fighting began. He had only been at the camp a short time before it all broke out – he hadn’t even had time to find Alex, or any other commander besides the two Nandras that he had traveled with. He had admired the location of the camp from afar, but reevaluated when he had finally arrived and war broke loose. Evidently, Alexander had chosen to go for a high visibility, fully open layout for the armies he commanded. The Orr estate was essentially one giant wall, built
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Ysabel and Marcus rode in their caravan through blazing heat, taking little refuge in the shaded – but stuffy – interior. The sun was shining high, and there were no clouds above the small stretch of desert that now fell outside the governance of Nabius. They were to the south of Yago Clarion’s territory, having taken a pass through the mountains that formed the lower border of Nabius into the lower provinces. Marcus’s village was in this small section of desert, built near an oasis that suppose
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Don't worry - both Luca and the Order will develop further as time goes on. Thank you!
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Indeed he is. And I think you might be right We'll see!
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Indeed indeed! As for the Order, their motivations will become clearer over time. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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I really hope he doesn’t take this the wrong way, Luca thought while making his way towards Adrian’s quarters. He had just taken his leave from the kitchens and Alfie, explaining to the head of staff that he would be around a bit longer. Everyone had seemed to react well to that, which gave Luca confidence. I don’t want power like the rest of the people here do… but I have to admit it feels good to be needed. He approached Adrian Fray’s door, and hesitated. Well, needed for the right reasons. Is
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Thank you for staying around! All of these characters do indeed have their shortcomings, and they will definitely drive the plot, as you've guessed. I appreciate the review!
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Thank you for staying around for it!
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Aw, glad you like it and have stuck around! And I'm glad you are paying close attention That definitely helps with moving the future plot of the story along!
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Hey there! Sorry for being gone for so long, but I am back and this story will definitely continue. Thanks though!
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Marion paced around her room reading, not stopping look up as she passed her chair-bound husband. She had stopped giving him attention besides when it came time to wash or feed him, and he had lost the defiant look in his eyes as of late. When he was more outraged by his condition and her sabotage, she used to bounce ideas off of him and use his reactions as a sounding board. Now, he lacked expression when she informed him of some new horror that he was to be subjected to, and taunting him had l
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All will be revealed in time And hahaha I imagined him trying to be all sneaky like A. or something but I just don't think he's cut out for it! Thank you for reading and the review
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Eamon walked through the halls using his hands as a guide, feeling every curve of the halls and the texture of every painting, frame, and window that he passed. Now that the Di Coteau estate had calmed from the pandemonium that was hosting hundreds of people during the summit, Eamon felt freer to walk around and attempt navigation. There was no one in the house that he would feel completely uncomfortable displaying his disability in front of, and even though he didn’t relish the thought of becom
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Thank you! Hahaha, yes indeed, Jezebel. She's always there to complicate things at the right time, and Luca will definitely be at the center of a few plot lines. Thank you for reading and always leaving reviews!
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I think Luca will too, but I definitely think it will take some work on his part. Luca hasn't had the easiest life. As for the others, the plot just thickens
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Oh thank you!! I really appreciate that I'm working on getting book two and a bunch of questions answered as fast as possible
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Aw thank you so so much!!! I really appreciate the compliments, I hope you enjoy the next one!
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Talia studied the maps before her sprawled out on the large wooden table that had recently held the thirteen generals, only occasionally glancing up towards her mother and brother. They were also working on a potential battle strategy, but Talia knew that Alexandre was distracted and that Ysabel was picking up on it. She supposed his mind was on Carl as per usual, but this was recently annoying her. Separate your emotions, Alex. Saints’ sake. After running a hand through her hair and accidentall
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Indeed. As for Almanita, things will be fleshed out in the future but I think it safe to say that no, she is not a villain Thank you for reading and the review!
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Sadly there will be lots of bad news to come. Thank you for the review!!!
