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Kade wondered frequently why this mysterious Illjardi stranger had been visiting so often, and what his motivations were. A foreigner in the northern territories of Nabius wasn’t a complete rarity, but one who visited Kade in his parents’ shop every day of the week was. It was surprising to be given so much attention, though he had to admit that having someone to talk to every day had helped the time go by. The presence of a rich foreigner also hadn’t gone unnoticed by locals, and that was good
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I think I'll take that as a compliment! I do love a villian.
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Thanks so much! One of my weaknesses as a writer is definitely concluding but I am working on it! I debated for a long time whether to have this plot go through one long book or three separate ones, and ended up choosing the latter. Hopefully the break isn't too jarring!
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Love what you're picking up here - I'm glad to see that!!!!
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Interesting reaction! Excited to see how your thoughts develop as I read the next comments!
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Thanks so much. I'm happy to report that the cute guy I referenced in this chapter note at the end of the story is now my fiance! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
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Yes! Luca definitely stays, as I'm sure you've found out. Thank you!
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Thank you! Oh my goodneess, thank you for all the comments all through the books. I've got a LOT to respond to, and will try to get to them all. I appreciate your feedback and am looking forward to reading it!!!!!
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Yes indeed! We'll have to see Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Alexandre sat with Carl on a bench that was part of a ring in a large stone courtyard. There was an enormous fire in the center of it, and a table that wrapped around to pass by several other benches. They all faced inwards towards the fire, which poked up through a hole in the middle of the table. Luca and Eamon sat on the bench to their left, and Jared Coyne and Marion Monciet sat across from the Cathcart Prince and Nabian General. To Alexandre’s right was another bench that was empty. Servant
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Cute first two chapters to a story! I look forward to seeing how it unfolds.
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Ha! I felt bad when you left your comment on the last chapter, knowing this was coming :( Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Thanks very much! I've always thought of "magic" in this world really being more like fantasy biology (i.e. the Illjardi evolving to have white skin and withstand the cold, the bloodlillies, and an increased strength and viciousness in humans coming from a disease). It's a topic I'm looking forward to exploring more in the future, though probably not with this series. I'm looking forward to getting the next chapters out as well. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment!
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Indeed they do! I think a lot of Nabians are kill first kind of folks too!
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Yes indeed! Though Jezebel's lack of loyalty may not be so apparent to Marion at this point - she hasn't been betrayed yet, or isn't aware that she's going to be. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment!
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Ysabel was received by Damien personally, welcomed through the gates of his estate with a stony look. She had written to him ahead of time to announce that she was visiting, but she could tell that he wasn’t necessarily pleased to see his brother’s widow. “General Clarion,” he said reverently. “General Di Coteau,” she replied. The two grasped arms just below the elbow, in a customary greeting of the country. “It’s good to see you,” Ysabel said politely. She truthfully didn’t feel tha
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Ha! I love how you just phrased that. Very clever. Yes! The Ironians have a lot in their future!
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Yes indeed! It's been a while since I introduced him in the last book, but he is Devan's son. Marion will have a lot of decisions to make for sure!
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I'd imagine this is definitely difficult for someone like her, who is so used to being at the center of action. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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She would indeed. Jared and Marion certainly have their own motivations and growth lines. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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There's going to be a lot more learned about Ysabel soon! As for the other's, we'll have to see how they manage. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Indeed it is not! Though in this world, there's a lot of it. Thank you for the comment!
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Thanks so much!!!
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Thank you! I"m glad that you enjoyed!
