Dathi

An excellent start, well done and I hope to read more as you tale unfolds.

A very fine start and I am looking forward to following this until its completion. Very well done and thank you for sharing this tale.

A most captivating chapter of a tale that deserves to be expanded to the fullest. I await excitedly for the following chapters as your character and world building wordsmithery is excellent. Very well done and thank you for sharing your story

Finis! Complete!!!! Obscene word no author should ever be permitted to use! However the consolation is the knowledge that the follow on is under way so all is not despair and destitution, but only just! Thank you again for sharing this wonderful tale and I appreciate your wonderful word smithery that inspires my imagination. Building believable characters and events is a serious task and I feel you manage this credibly well. May your inspiration flow ceaselessly and incessantly from your fingers and active imagination thusly beguiling and delighting us avid readers with further and future tales of epic deeds and awesome adventures.

Hmmm, security team leader onside? You are plotting something dastardly methinks (actually I am fairly certain). As for the dog he sounds too well minded to be a threat to the penguins and a reminder to be gentle would suffice. A fun sensitive chapter, thank you for sharing.

This truly is starting to become convoluted, excellent; because it makes for more fun reading. Thank you for sharing your story and very well done with this latest chapter.

All I really have to say is that I am enjoying this tale of daring do and intrigue immensely, as I have with all your tales. Very well done and as always thank you very much for sharing this glorious tale.

An exciting read is this chapter, well done and thank you for sharing. Assassination stymied, oh but whom was target prime? Cliffhanger, mumble grumble snarl hiss spit grrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!

Interestinger and interestinger (too many dead cats otherwise) zipping about, all while standing still. Soon there will be Ents outside of the Realm; that will cause chaos. As always, another exciting chapter that adds to the intrigue that is stirring in the pot that you have created (thankfully). Thank you again for sharing this wonderful tale, well done that man.

Oversized mousers playing, what fun. Plotting's and intrigues to shake the capital powerhouse, most excellent. Again an awesome chapter loaded as always with your convolutions and knotty dealings, thank you and very well done, in my opinion.

Spectacular reintroduction to the realms and as expected our two newcomers are sufficiently overwhelmed and as always the mundane empty belly overawes the spectacular. Wonderful as always and thank you again for sharing, reading a new chapter is always a bright point in my day.

Like an onion you are building layer upon layer of convolution and obfuscation. We hope that you yourself do not become entangled within your own Gordian intricacies. Well done as always and thank you for sharing this latest chapter with us.

More fun and games, confusion to the enemy and all that stuff. Exhilarating chapter as usual, thank you for sharing your art. Very well done.

Clever word scribbler, I saw not this direction in your meanderings. Another awesome chapter and I am, as always, eagerly awaiting the continuation of this convolution of move and counter move. Well done and thank you for sharing.

Enquiring minds are curious about what has or is about to happen to the remainder of the overt/covert surveillance team? Let the games seriously commence. Well done with this exciting next installment, thank you our man.