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An exciting if somewhat truncated tale, I am sorry it was so tiny. It was however an enjoyable learning experience for all concerned. The scolding of the now ex keyholder like a truculent child was the best way to bring it into a good perspective (although I want to know what was said in camera), such is the way of it however and we will pretend that the author knows best. A delightful read as always thank you for sharing this tale and deepening our knowledge of the realms and off shoots. Very well done.
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I do enjoy watching the manner in which you build and empower show downs and face offs. I am eagerly awaiting the one which is coming. Wonderfully written and thank you for sharing your tale.
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Awesome way to cure the Power Nexus, I find cetation song very relaxing and calmative. Excellent chapter again although I would have left the usurper in a ward bubble, like a zorb, with no energy in or out until they are ready to deal with her. Much more demeaning and humiliating than just being shown out by a "dog," nice touch that I thought. Thank you for sharing and very well done and I am cheerfully awaiting the next installment to brighten my day.
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A light and sound show; awesome. Not as annoying as burning bow strings but much more fun to watch. This is lining up to be a right donnybrook and no mistake, like a will reading without the burial. It looks like the toys are thrown and there is nothing left except the face to face encounter. I am excitedly looking forward to this inevitable engagement. Thank you for sharing as always and very well done.
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Sounds like time for tin hats and body armour. Step into the ring and bait the bear plus abandon all hope ye whom enter here. Immovable and unstoppable trying to co-locate in the same space and time is going to be energetic. Appreciated as always, thank you for sharing and very well done.
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Looks like someone is in for a major comeuppance and from a team that has experience in doing just that. Fun and games ahead for all and good training for a future realm lord. Another excellent chapter and as always thank you for sharing and very well done.
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Three day posting schedule, humpfh! Hiss, spit, snarl and grumble. Double, double toil and trouble, fire burn and cauldron bubble. Is more the need, make a posset to speed things along. I am starting to guess that we are encountering Dubh-Sidhe which is never entirely nice. Grin and awesome to have a new chapter to read. Delightful building of suspence, this is becoming really exciting. Thank you for sharing your wonder filled tale, very well done,
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Sounds like you were wanting a feed of yabbies from the local billabong. Practising and experimenting, not very exciting but very essential. Knowing how to use the tool is just as important as having the tool. As you have a history of doing this I am now becoming expectant of excitement to come in future chapters. As always I am joyful at having a new chapter to read and I am thankful the you share your tale and very well done.
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A very puzzling conundrum you have set before us. Curious twists and cliff hangers are a standard from you. However, entertaining as always and another intriguing chapter. Well done and thank you for sharing this tale.
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Happy, happy, happy, joy, joy, joy. You thought to sneak another tale in without me noticing!!!!!!! Not a chance. Another awesome chapter in the Widderkin tale. I am eagerly awaiting the revealing of the machinations of your over fertile imagination. As always, thank you for sharing and very well done.
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The mock up looks great and while I do not use a mobile device to access this wonderful site I understand the sense in doing this. Well done and thank you for all the hard work you and those who help you have done and we all fervently hope will continue to do. To those who do Merry Christmas and Happy New Year and to the rest, like myself, may I suggest Gin and Valium in large quantities because murder is a bad thing. I am looking forward to many great things from our wonderful cadre of Authors and to all take care, be kind and stay positive.
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You are the author, follow your inspiration and we the readers will follow you to oblivion and back. Although a little more depth to the characters would provide a clue towards their motivations and anticipated behaviours. To reiterate, you are providing an excellent tale that is engaging, so keep doing what you are doing because it is working well. Basically wot 'e (centexhairysub) said but fluffier.
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So being left gasping for breath is not the norm?
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A good start and very well paced opening piece, I am intrigues and am eagerly awaiting more.
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Intriguing; I am now very curious where you are going to take this tale. Well done and thank you for sharing this story.
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An excellent start, well done and I hope to read more as you tale unfolds.
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A very fine start and I am looking forward to following this until its completion. Very well done and thank you for sharing this tale.
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A most captivating chapter of a tale that deserves to be expanded to the fullest. I await excitedly for the following chapters as your character and world building wordsmithery is excellent. Very well done and thank you for sharing your story
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Finis! Complete!!!! Obscene word no author should ever be permitted to use! However the consolation is the knowledge that the follow on is under way so all is not despair and destitution, but only just! Thank you again for sharing this wonderful tale and I appreciate your wonderful word smithery that inspires my imagination. Building believable characters and events is a serious task and I feel you manage this credibly well. May your inspiration flow ceaselessly and incessantly from your fingers and active imagination thusly beguiling and delighting us avid readers with further and future tales of epic deeds and awesome adventures.
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Hmmm, security team leader onside? You are plotting something dastardly methinks (actually I am fairly certain). As for the dog he sounds too well minded to be a threat to the penguins and a reminder to be gentle would suffice. A fun sensitive chapter, thank you for sharing.
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This truly is starting to become convoluted, excellent; because it makes for more fun reading. Thank you for sharing your story and very well done with this latest chapter.
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All I really have to say is that I am enjoying this tale of daring do and intrigue immensely, as I have with all your tales. Very well done and as always thank you very much for sharing this glorious tale.
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An exciting read is this chapter, well done and thank you for sharing. Assassination stymied, oh but whom was target prime? Cliffhanger, mumble grumble snarl hiss spit grrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!
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Interestinger and interestinger (too many dead cats otherwise) zipping about, all while standing still. Soon there will be Ents outside of the Realm; that will cause chaos. As always, another exciting chapter that adds to the intrigue that is stirring in the pot that you have created (thankfully). Thank you again for sharing this wonderful tale, well done that man.
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Oversized mousers playing, what fun. Plotting's and intrigues to shake the capital powerhouse, most excellent. Again an awesome chapter loaded as always with your convolutions and knotty dealings, thank you and very well done, in my opinion.
