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Hiya! Thank you for the kind feedback!
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Thank you so much! It means a lot
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Thank you for reading! Feedback from readers is the best thing in the world for writers, as I'm sure you know!
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Thank you so much, Carlos! Leaving the door open for more to tell is a personal weakness of mine
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It was a compromise made in desperation, but the Queen is tough and driven by relentless determination. She will not be idle for too long.
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Thank you for the feedback! I do hope I didn't scare too many people away, lol.
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*tries not to blush* Thank you very much! It was a hard choice for the Queen, but her kind of intelligence works differently from ours. And her emotions are complex and hard to predict.
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Thanks, man! I'm glad I was able to keep your interest, and more goodies will come very soon
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Thank you very much! I really enjoyed writing it.
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Thanks, Kalandor! I'm very glad I'm able to keep you guessing
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Oddly enough, I picture her longer and more sinuous than a spider...
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drpaladin, you've read my mind. I was going for just that- stagnation, corruption, dependence
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Thank you kindly! I hope the conclusion won't disappoint
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I packed a bunch into the final chapter, though
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Yes, sir! lol - it's finally up now
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Chapter 10. The Spark We walked for a long time in the darkness, side by side in the ever-narrowing tunnel. My weakness from earlier was gone. We were descending, and as we did so the temperature rose slowly but steadily. There was nothing to see, but there was only one way to follow so getting lost wasn't an option. The surface of the tunnel we followed was rough underfoot but sufficiently smooth that we didn’t once stumble over a fallen rock or trip over a hidden depression beneath our
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Chapter 9. The Tunnel I opened my eyes and wiped 02-spark from my face. It didn't burn anymore. I spat some of it out; there was blood mixed with it, and for an idle instant I wondered if I was about to die. Then I coughed. Dust was everywhere, choking me. Andy. I shifted in my position as much as I could. Something stirred beneath me. Frantically, I dug through the debris, unmindful of how the sharp rocks tore at my hands, and after shoving some small rocks out of the way my hands t
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after decades of slavery she is finally free. We'll see what she decides to do To those she holds responsible for her captivity…
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lol! Don't worry, the next chapter is coming soon and all will be revealed! * cue commercial break music*
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yeah, some people can't understand that others may come before themselves. We can all try and learn, though.
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The thing about the encore is a disturbing thought, lol
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Chapter 8. The Attack My eyes snapped open when the vibrations coming through the floor suddenly changed, getting much more intense. Andy stirred a second later. “Bentley's coming closer,” he said, his voice muffled by my chest but already fully awake as well. Andy rolled away from me and I sat up, stretching. I had no idea how much time had passed but I felt well rested, even though my entire body was covered in painful bruises from the fights. Judging from the feeling, at least a few
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The Background Of 01-Spark By Albert Nothlit
albertnothlit replied to albertnothlit's topic in Stories Discussion Forum
thank you! when I write a story, I normally have all of these little details planned out in advance, but sometimes I don't get to mention them outright during the narrative because it would interfere with the pace of the story. It's good to be able to finally explain everything, though! -
I'm glad you liked the chapter! Rick finally found what he wanted - a strong Dom that's the real deal. A strong man like him could never settle for anything less.
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Lol, absolutely. The creepy creature can wait.
