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drpaladin, you've read my mind. I was going for just that- stagnation, corruption, dependence
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Thank you kindly! I hope the conclusion won't disappoint
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I packed a bunch into the final chapter, though
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Yes, sir! lol - it's finally up now
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Chapter 10. The Spark We walked for a long time in the darkness, side by side in the ever-narrowing tunnel. My weakness from earlier was gone. We were descending, and as we did so the temperature rose slowly but steadily. There was nothing to see, but there was only one way to follow so getting lost wasn't an option. The surface of the tunnel we followed was rough underfoot but sufficiently smooth that we didn’t once stumble over a fallen rock or trip over a hidden depression beneath our
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Chapter 9. The Tunnel I opened my eyes and wiped 02-spark from my face. It didn't burn anymore. I spat some of it out; there was blood mixed with it, and for an idle instant I wondered if I was about to die. Then I coughed. Dust was everywhere, choking me. Andy. I shifted in my position as much as I could. Something stirred beneath me. Frantically, I dug through the debris, unmindful of how the sharp rocks tore at my hands, and after shoving some small rocks out of the way my hands t
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after decades of slavery she is finally free. We'll see what she decides to do To those she holds responsible for her captivity…
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lol! Don't worry, the next chapter is coming soon and all will be revealed! * cue commercial break music*
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yeah, some people can't understand that others may come before themselves. We can all try and learn, though.
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The thing about the encore is a disturbing thought, lol
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Chapter 8. The Attack My eyes snapped open when the vibrations coming through the floor suddenly changed, getting much more intense. Andy stirred a second later. “Bentley's coming closer,” he said, his voice muffled by my chest but already fully awake as well. Andy rolled away from me and I sat up, stretching. I had no idea how much time had passed but I felt well rested, even though my entire body was covered in painful bruises from the fights. Judging from the feeling, at least a few
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I'm glad you liked the chapter! Rick finally found what he wanted - a strong Dom that's the real deal. A strong man like him could never settle for anything less.
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Lol, absolutely. The creepy creature can wait.
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Yay, thanks! I'll take your revenge wishes into consideration, lol
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Chapter 7. The Night “Fuck him,” I said, smashing my heel against the floor to pulverize this little machine. “I'm sick of his little games!” “At least he can't hear us now,” Andy pointed out, trying ineffectually to get to the computers working again. I tossed him his boot for him to put on. “Whatever he thinks he's going to do will take time. We can use that time to try and come up with a plan.” “Yeah. Good idea. But where the hell do we start? And what is going on, how is he even doi
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Yeah, Andy turned out not to be evil, but they sure are in a difficult situation.
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Yeah, Bentley is a bastard.
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Thank you for reviewing!
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Decadence in a society is awful, but sometimes unavoidable
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Yup, I have a thing for many legged monsters.
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Chapter 6. The Queen I stumbled forward, free. Now I had to act. I prepared myself to attack him right then, just in case he changed his mind. I knew he was a better fighter than I was, but if I didn't seize this chance I might regret it later. I got into second pose. Andy saw how I tensed my body as I flowed into the offensive posture, and he reacted instinctively, assuming a defensive stance. Should I trust him? Or fight? We held the tension for a few long moments, but then I saw the s
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Glad you liked it!
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It's a hard choice, for sure. And things are only going to get tougher. Thanks for the review!
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Wow, thank you! I really had to think this story through so I wouldn't write myself into a corner, but I can see now it's paying off!
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I guess we can all put down our pitchforks, huh? Poor Andy. Thanks for reviewing!
