Avaloch

I have always enjoyed your stories and look forward to every chapter. I followed this story from the beginning and the end to this epic tale is like fireworks to me - A grand finale. Thank you for gracing us with these works of art.

I feel that chapters are becoming rinse and repeat scenes of similar things - Antonio/Andreas repeatedly torturing Praveen with a bit of Bruce being snarky. I find myself skipping over a lot of dialogue as there not much difference in terms of content. I also feel like some of the reactions from the pro-Praveen camp is unbelieveably oblivious. Praveen tearing up and being hurt is consistently missed out and misread. For adults much older than him, they should be able to read expressions better.

I have been eagerly following this story from the start, waiting for a new chapter to be uploaded as soon as I read the one just uploaded. The plot, characters, lore and writing are delightfully stellar (pun intended). This story just left me feeling the void left behind, like those you get after reading a fantastic book. This is an absolute must read for fans of the fantasy genre.

Still patiently waiting for each update, loving them as they come and totally invested into the story. A really great job as usual!

This story really moved me while I was reading it. All the emotions, characters and settings were really relateable to me. I definitely recommend this great read and thanks to @Ethan for this story 😀. If there is anything I hate about it, it's that it has ended. You know you read something epic when a part of you feels empty when the story ends.

I absolutely loved reading this story. The characters are very well fleshed out and it has a captivating storyline. By the end of the story, it felt bittersweet to know that such a great story has come to an end. Hope to read more of such epics from Sui 😃

Such a deliciously written chapter. I absolutely loved the details that go into each character. Can't wait for the next one!

The story is so rich with lore, well fleshed out characters and a great storyline. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

It would be awesome to learn more about the two! Just curious though, any resemblance with the living?

Well fleshed out characters, a great storyline and throw in a bit of mythology. A great recipe for a grand tale. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and strongly recommend it to everyone.

I loved this short story! I can't wait to see more shorts like this! Keep up the great works!

This story made me cry when I read it on Nifty... I understand and relate to the feelings that Jackson experienced. A great story indeed.

I liked the whole story and build up to the "ending". I hope there would be a sequel as the story is just to good to leave it hanging. Great job once again!

An awesome chapter with so much answers and yet so much more questions to be answered. I guess Shiba is the Spirit of Water since Silas did mention that "when he returns, he will destroy you." I presume that the other 3 spirits will be the target for the Spirit of Fire.

Ah! That's why ABBA's song was next... I was seeing some stuff so I guessed so too! <3