I don't believe that Julia is that mean! I think Devon has more to do with it than is being said, because why else would he ignore the messages and change phone number? I agree completely with chris191070. The man needs help and now Edgar will too. Quokka please don't do away with Edgar as you have in the past. I don't believe I could take anymore young people 's deaths.
To me the banning is way too harsh. Plus, Devon didn't ask for an explanation of how it happened. I think Devon needs to see the doctor again. Ignoring the phone calls is another sign of PTSD. His quick to anger is a really big sign. Let them work for Devon on weekends helping the gardener or painting the barn inside and out. I am sure there are a lot of things they could do to pay for the damages. Also, since Devon knows how easy it is to fall in the brook he should have put up a barrier of some type. Therefore he is just as much at fault as the kids.
Again I've said it before and I'll say it again. An excellent story by an excellent writer. James M
If Edgar's streaking is that big of a problem for Devon with guests present why don't he put up a curtain across the hall? That would solve a lot of problems for Devon and if that is the case then why did he tell his brother about it? Something is not right with Devon's thinking. After all his own twin cousins did it around Royalty and nothing has been said about that. Perhaps Edgar needs to get more backbone, otherwise Edgar will be walk on the rest of his life. That said you are still an excellant writer with excellent stories.
I, also, wish to welcome you back. Perhaps Stef will be able to bring the two brothers together again. If Alex's mother is still alive what will happen to his father?
A most excellent story as always. I do hope Eliza and the boys are warned not tell their friends. Also, the staff. I think Devon should sing with the band periodically.
When will you be continuing your other unfinished story?
How about a Book 2 called The King and his Royal Guard? King Leon, Prince Logan, and their children has a nice ring to it. Castle Arguro could then be used as a new SPOC Headquarters or a home for Gia and her step-mother depending on their involvement in the criminal plot. James M
I agree with mikedup. I feel danger ahead for some reason that I can't explain. Quokka you are a fantastic writer and we love all of your stories. I just wish you would have continued some but maybe that is just me.
I think that perhaps there is more wrong with Sebastian than anger issues. Remember he has had issues before but now he venting louder and more often. Perhaps something medical????? Also, is Singapore satisfied with the findings? And the twins gave up too easily to my way of thinking. Thanks to the powers that be for Mrs. Cooper. James
I do hope that you are going to continue this story. A story this great should not sit idle for to long.
Perhaps a hint for when the next chapter will be available.
Excellant story. Keep those 40+ chapters coming. I wonder though if the report he is writing will lead to a government job offer or will the picture of the bridge at the point he turned around some how cause him a lot of trouble?
Fantastic story with super chapters. While the story has kind of a NBNB flavor to it, I hope the ending isn't the same. Also, Gres has indicated his possible plans for the two biggest islands but nothing about Grant Island or even what is there. However, I do wish to thank you for some of the best reading around.
James M from Iowa, USA
Well, I know think that Harry gave Steve a knock-out shot because of what happened as she came at him. As Harry some how gave a signal she increased her speed to catch him as the drug took effect making it look like Steve fainted. She possibly has Steve in a secret room tied up and gagged. Her movements are similar to flying actors on a stage. And if Harry is not involved why did he hold Danny back from following her? The rest is still a mystery to be solved by Danny.
A great beginning and a creepy cliff hanger. I hope that Danny and Harry find Steve quickly. I, also, think someone should turn Dr. Foster down a few notches or the funds may dry up. But that's just my opinion.
I personally believe, here in America, that a grave injustice would be committed to the Benning family if only two chapters were written. I really think that Sir Dad & Lady Mum with Cadet Tom, Simon, & Belinda have more to say and do. I'm sure 10 or more chapters are needed.