Hi Duncan:
Nice job! This is the first time I'm commenting in your forum here (although I've sent you a couple of emails, which you graciously answered).
Chapter Three is excellent! Of course we're all worried about Luc, and now Matt, and then Scott and Josh - you have piled plenty of worries on our plate - LOL! But that, of course, if your JOB as our fearless writer. I'm hopelessly caught up in all the complexities of the characters and their interactions.
I have to say that I'm pulling for Luc at this point. I hope he gets a better shake. I root for the underdog, as usual, and Luc could use some good karma about now.
And you've peaked my radar around Josh. What exactly is he up to? Hmmm... I was confident he was really into Scott, having been a wounded animal himself, but now will he mess with Matt again!??!!? While he lives with Scott!?!?
And should I want Scott and Luc to be together?
Arrrggggghhhh... chuckle.
Way too many things to consider. Excellent job.
And thank you. We often forget to simply say thank you to an author for their hard work. So there it is.
My best,
Centaur