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  1. Butcher56

    JV Chapter 8

    I’m sorry to see this story to come to the end already, although I know the story can’t continue without and end. I hope that Mr Wright is able to find a big house for everyone to live in and that they can keep Davies father from finding them and breaking in to get his family to go with him. Thanks for the great story.
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    Chapter 70

    Fantastic chapter. I hope that Wade and Alex are doing well after the scare they had after returning to the nursing home so they could talk to the police about what went on there. I can certainly see why Alex would need extra security now because it seems like his stepmother is out to get him by not allowing the papers that he got from his father from becoming public as it would mean that she would lose her title and the kids would not be in line for the Dukedom. JJ and Stef need to get their respective acts together and start getting along with each other again. JJ just loves to cause drama over everything all the time, and when he does that he feels like he’s justified in doing it.
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    Sanc Chapter 2

    Great chapter. I’m glad that Jonah is safe with his dad now and not missing any more. I agree with Nathan that sometimes the police think they’re above everyone else and because they’re the police you have to do what they say and not argue with them. This was a great example of how they don’t listen to the people who contacted them about a situation, in this case a missing 12 year old boy who is alone and scared. When Nathan and Hunter arrived at the service station the police officer told them to get back into their car and leave the area because they’re searching for a missing person and even though they tried to tell him that they were the ones who called them about Jonah. I’m very happy that Jonah is going to live with his dad now and that his mom and stepdad are both in some serious trouble because of the way they treated him and then taking a week before they contacted Hunter about him.
  4. Fantastic chapter. I’m glad that Josh, Jake, Nigel and the boys went to help the Beckers on the farm, this way they could get the hay baled and stacked in the barn. I’m sure Little Ricky enjoyed having some company close to his age, he seems to really love being on the farm because he gets to do a lot of things he never got to before, such as skinny dipping in the pond, riding horses, milking the cows and other things. Then when Josh pulled Mr and Mrs Becker off out of ear shot of everyone else he told them of the plans and stated that Little Ricky was welcome to come with them and he could do any or all of the activities that they had planned including going to a naturist camp where they would be naked, they told Josh they would ask him about the plans after he and the other guys went home and then let Ricky make up his own mind. Love the story I feel like I’m one of the characters in it.
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    Sanc Chapter 1

    Great chapter and start to the story. I think his ex-wife should have notified him as soon as his son took off and didn’t return home. I have a feeling that there might be more to the story that his son was slapped a few times in the face to get him to admit he was gay from his step father. After reading this chapter and seeing that the mother and stepfather are both heavy drinkers it’s not a wonder that he took off. I can only hope that he’ll try to get in touch with his dad and try to come live with him.
  6. It’s not a problem, I know that you do your best to respond to the comments that are made. I saw where you said your computer died and it took awhile to get it fixed.
  7. Fantastic chapter. I think it’s great that Trey wants to write a play for both english and history classes but I also think that he’s going to have a long road ahead of him to accomplish the finished project. I’m glad that Nigel called Josh to tell him that he and his boys were going to take him up on his offer to come and stay at the Castaway Hotel so they could show them around where they live. I hope that there aren’t any other issues arise from Nick and Trey coming out, such as the words carved into Nick’s locker at the high school, luckily Josh knows one of the night custodians personally and called him to ask him to take care of the locker.
  8. Awesome chapter. I think it’s great that Josh has such a great bond with the boys because they are able to tell him anything and not get yelled at or hit. Josh has always shown nothing but love for the boys who he’s told them all they could come to him anytime and he would listen to them and help them with whatever they have on their minds. The fact that Graham is seeing the black shadows around the World Trade Center as well as planes crashing into buildings doesn’t mean that he would be able to act on it because people wouldn’t believe him. I’m glad that he’s able to go to Josh about this and that he and Josh can talk about the things he sees and come to a understanding about it. It’s like when Josh told Brent that he could go on the trip with his friend from school and his family, Graham started seeing the black shadows beginning to form around him and they kept getting darker as the time went on, Graham also saw grey shadows around Josh and while he was trying to get Josh to not let Brent go on the trip he told Josh he saw the shadows around him as well only they weren’t black like the ones around Brent. I’m glad that Graham was able to see Brent after he passed away from the accident and he told him that he wanted him to pass on a couple of messages one to Josh who was in the hospital at the time after suffering a severe heart attack at the end of the grave side service for Brent. The message to Josh was that he was doing great where he is and he thanked him for showing him what love really is and for allowing him to go on the trip and he didn’t blame anyone for the accident and he didn’t suffer, he also said that Josh would get better and return home to his sons. The other message was for Kevin that their last night together was something he’d never forget and he wanted him to move on with his life and not let his death keep him from loving anyone else. I hope that Graham takes what Josh is telling him to heart and doesn’t let the visions get him to the point that he can’t go on because he blames himself for the bad things that happen. Fantastic story Bill.
  9. Great chapter. I feel bad for the Currie family as well because this is one of the hardest things that any parent can ever go through. The loss of a child is terrible for not only the parents but also for their siblings and the family as a whole. My grandmother lost all 3 of her children before she died my uncle was the first one, then my aunt and then my mom, it was very hard for her to deal with it all. I think Josh is going to have his hands full with trying to get Kevin through the next few days and possibly even weeks after he lost the third boyfriend he had only this one wasn’t because he got a wandering eye but due to his death when he was coming home from being on a trip with his friend from school and his parents. I know that Brent wasn’t there for more than a few months but he was still a brother to all of the boys and he was loved by them all including Kevin who loved him as more than a brother and more than a lover. This will be hard for everyone who knew Brent. This was a tough chapter to read but I know that there are many things that you have no control over.
  10. Butcher56

    Chapter 69

    Fantastic chapter. I’m glad that Alex was able to know for sure that his mother wasn’t dead even though she was basically a vegetable. Alex and Wade go to the nursing home where Alex’s mother was and there was another vehicle in front exactly like the one they were in, it turns out to be his father and his 2 goons. While Alex and Wade were in his mothers room his father came in and he said that he had Cameron’s ransom with him at that time he took an envelope out of his jacket pocket that said he knew that his wife wasn’t dead and his new wife knew about it as well. His father was in on the plan to get rid of his wife and her lover who was Wades father along with Elizabeth Danfield Wades mother. Elizabeth was the one who had Cameron kidnapped, she gave Wade instructions to have Alex call her after they left the nursing home. The letter that Alex’s father gave him basically states that his two children by his second wife are illegitimate because both he and his wife knew the truth. His father asked for a few minutes alone with his wife and after Alex and Wade left the room he shot her and then turned the gun on himself and committed suicide leaving Alex a orphan.
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    Oce Chapter 15

    Fantastic chapter and story. I’m glad that the restoration project was such a huge success and the tourism is going well with positive reviews from the first visitors to the islands. The animals reintroduced to the island was a great idea by the parks and wildlife service in the area and after their two days they were very impressed by the work done by Travis and his staff over an 18 month period. Thank you for the fantastic story of Travis and the rest of the people from Aquaria and Oceania I always love to read what they have for them as they have done many things over the years.
  12. Fantastic chapter Bill. I’m glad that the Beckers, Jake, Shannon, Mark and the other boys enjoyed the trip to Philadelphia ahead of the Beckers catching their flight to Orlando in order to go to Disney World which was a gift from the Curries to little Ricky for his birthday. Even though there was a delay of their flight until later in the evening Josh made sure to include them in the activity he had planned on going to after they left for Orlando, he had to do some negotiating but was able to change the seats to further down the first base line for a baseball game between the Philadelphia Phillies against the Montreal Expos which the Phillies won 8-5. Every one had a great time, and Josh said they would go to New York next weekend before they are scheduled to pick up the Beckers when they return home. I’m glad that Pat was able to get some eye sight back in his left eye after he got a corneal transplant, I know that his faith in God and Josh made him feel better about his situation rather than him feeling sorry for himself.
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    Oce Chapter 14

    Awesome chapter. It seems that the village is coming together well as the buildings are now ready for occupancy with the sheds being set up along with the solar panels, storage batteries, desalination system, sewage tank, as well as two top of the line bbq’s.
  14. Although I agree that the Boy Scouts were very bigoted for many years, even though they turned a blind eye to a lot of things that went on during camping trips as well as the jamboree. I think Josh hit the nail on the head when he reminded the school board about their own policy against discrimination due to race, religion or sexual orientation. I hope they do the right thing and expel the scoutmasters son because he was the instigator that started all the problems in the parking lot of the school. I also think that they should tell them that they are not allowed to use any schools for their meetings and also stop allowing the United Way to have school faculty collect money for them as long as they support the Boy Scouts. I’m hopeful that Pat is able to return to school so that he isn’t going stir crazy at home with just his tutors, I think it might enhance his healing of his eyes. I can’t wait to read if the boy gets expelled or not.
  15. Fantastic chapter. I’m glad that Pat has realized that he is in a position to help other kids who are suffering with disabilities such as being deaf or blind as he is in one eye after having a beaker of sulfuric acid fall and break just as he was getting back up from putting his things away. The sermon for Easter was all about knowing that god is always there for you especially in troubled times of your life. One part of the message was that when one window closes another one opens, I think this is where Pat got the idea of helping the kids with disabilities to get them in a better place whether it’s something that would help their family or finding them someone to love and care for them like Josh has with his boys. I truly believe that this is the push Pat needs to get him to be able to feel better about his disability. I thought it was very nice of Nicky and Jordan to help their uncle Pat after almost making their actions back firing by trying to help him with little things.
  16. Awesome chapter, I don’t think Kevin will ever forget this birthday because of his friends being there to stay overnight with him and his brothers. Josh is going to have a mess to clean up now that his little tactic has come crashing down. I’m glad that Kevin realized how much his sour mood about him taking his test for his learners permit to learn to drive caused his brothers to not want him around them because he wasn’t talking to anyone and he played a terrible game when they went to the school to play a game of soccer. He really thought everyone hated him because of his attitude the last few days and when they went back down to the school and he didn’t even know that they were going, finding he was alone he sat down on the porch and cried until Josh got back. Kevin cried awhile after Josh sat down with him and then Josh explained that his attitude was the problem and Kevin agreed that he had been quite a bit of a problem the last few days. I’m glad that they were able to come to an understanding about his taking the test for his permit, and when it was time to go back down to the school he went with Josh so he could apologize for his actions, everyone accepted his apology and it was behind them. I hope everything goes well when Josh flies to Oklahoma to meet Nicks parents in person and they could come to an agreement as to where Nick wanted to live. Fantastic story, it seems like it gets better with each new chapter I read, I can’t wait to read the rest of the story here and also the future books in the story.
  17. Butcher56

    JV Chapter 3

    Excellent chapter. I’m glad that Davies has gotten settled into his new apartment and his job. Davies has already gotten a taste of the hectic schedule for the book signing tours. I’m glad that he has the support of his family other than his father. If things continue to go well for him he’ll be set up to succeed despite his father.
  18. Great chapter. Another group of ignorant people who are taught that they are superior to everyone else who isn’t white. I’m glad that the boys handled things the way they did so there wasn’t any problems such as a fight. It’s a good thing that someone in the crowd alerted park security and they stepped in otherwise who knows what would happen.
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    JV Chapter 2

    Fantastic chapter. I’m glad that Davies accepted the job offer from Mr Wright, as he will have a great place to live as well as getting to travel with him to his book signings. The apartment is going to be a little hard to get used to for Davies as he didn’t even have it that good at home before he got kicked out and excommunicated by his dad because he’s gay. I hope that he gets used to the fact that he’s got a great job with benefits such as the apartment and a vehicle to use when he’s running errands for his boss. He even has a plan for Christmas Day to be the guest of his boss at a local charity where his boss volunteers every year. (I figured out what to say this time. Ha ha)
  20. This has been an interesting story so far. I’m glad that I came back to read it again as I have missed quite a bit of the story since it now has 12 books total. Thanks for the great story.
  21. Butcher56

    Oce Chapter 11

    Awesome chapter.
  22. Butcher56

    RC Chapter 6

    I’m glad that the Celtic Lads were so well received for their free concert to kickstart their new band. As the people were waiting for the concert to begin there was a reporter who had spoken to the police about the number of people who were attending and he was told that the crowd had surpassed the 300,000 people who attended the Skyworks on Australia Day. I don’t recall reading about Hugh & Robert as to what happened to them, if there was anything I must’ve missed reading it somehow. I’m curious about this as well, the last thing I read was that Devon wasn’t speaking to Edgar after the accident he and his brothers had been in with the cart.
  23. Butcher56

    Driving Lessons

    I think it’s great that they plan these little afternoon trips so that the boys and Holly will have something to do besides stuff that they can do at home. It seems like everyone enjoys them as they’re always telling Josh, Jake, Alice & Julie all about what they did and how much they enjoy the time they spend on these outings. It’s to bad that they couldn’t take Julie & Alice outside on this visit due to the rain, even though it was only sprinkling at the time there was no reason to take the chance of getting wet and making them sick. I love this story and enjoy every chapter because there’s always something going on with the family, and I think it’s great that they include the boys friends in what they do so they’re not left out.
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    Swan Chapter 14

    Fantastic end to the story, it seems like everyone had an enjoyable experience on board the Southern Explorer for the end of year graduation ball. The only problem was when they were returning to the harbor so that everyone could leave the ship, they had to detour to the Wagner International Corp Jetty where all but 20 people were still on board as the school bus had some mechanical problems and it wouldn’t be available until the next morning. Xander offered to allow them to stay aboard and they would have breakfast in the morning all at no cost to them, the next morning the Headmasters wife thanked Xander for allowing them to stay in a suite he told her that it was his pleasure although the ship actually belongs to Sebastian who is his legal guardian. Over breakfast they listened to the boys saying how nice their cabins were and they talked about who snores the loudest which brought everyone to have a fit of laughter, as they left the ship to get on the bus they all thanked him again and said that they wished they could stay aboard longer. This was a great story and I enjoyed reading it very much.
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    Chapter 18

    Fantastic chapter and story. I’m glad that the two people who were responsible for the death of Leon’s parents were caught and prosecuted for their crimes against other members of their own family, I’m also glad that the queen stripped them of their titles and any claim to the royal family. I’m glad that Logan has finally proposed to Leon and then married him with the kingdom accepting the fact that he is in love with another man even though he has noble blood in his pedigree. I wish them all the very best in their lives and hope that they will live happily ever after.
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