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I sincerely hope Brodie has had a change of attitude towards Carlton, who went out of his way to help Brodie get to know that he had a family whose been looking for him for years. Carlton went and got Brodie the new wheelchair and a shower chair so that he could get around without a lot of help from anyone. Even after Carlton helped Brodie at the hospital, and the motel without Carlton doing anything he could to help him and not even getting a rise out of him. This was a great chapter and story. I'm really enjoying this story as it develops into a great novel some time in future.
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I believe that Brodie is going to have some serious thinking to do, as he has turned out to be very homophobic. Jay and Jacq told Brodie that he was going to have to get used to Carlton being around as he is part of the company as well. I hope that at some point Brodie will come around, if not he can stay in Coral Bay where he's been living with the people who took him in and raised as their son. I'm glad that they got this charter with the Princes from the European countries. I'm glad that Carlton was able to get back to the Trident so he could help with the charter. Great story, loving every bit of it.
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I wonder what Brodie is upset over, Carlton has noticed that Brodie was really quiet for the last couple of days, not wanting to talk to anyone. Carlton seems to think Brodie wants to ask a question or say something else but doesn't seem to be able to pose it for Carlton or Amanda. I hope that Carlton being gay doesn't cause any problems with Brodie. I'm wondering if Brodie is gay as well and doesn't know if that will create any problems for him, his parents, Carlton, Amanda, Sam and Marcus. I hope that Brodie is going to be able get around town without difficulties and is able to get back to the Trident as well. I hope that this story continues for awhile, because I am loving the story and the charters in it. Brodie might also be a little scared about meeting his parents after him being gone since he was 6 years old after the accident when he fell into the river.
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I'm really enjoying this story. Anton's on his way home again and this time he's got an extra 4 passengers with him. I'm glad that Anton is a qualified zoologist, so he has some knowledge about taking care of the little echidna as well as Roey. I hope that Sarah and Oscar are able to settle down and really enjoy being around Anton and his friends and family. I hope that everyone will be alright with Anton after he took off after he tried to call Mathew and someone else answered the phone. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for writing these great stories.
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I'm really enjoying this story. I'm glad that Carlton has taken it upon himself to see if Brodie is actually his cousin. When Carlton first met Brodie he was informed shortly after that they were indeed first cousins, and that Jay and Jacq are Brodie's parent's. I'm glad that Carlton got to the hospital to get Brodie and saw a couple trying to take Brodie's wheelchair that Carlton just purchased the day before. I hope that everything goes well for for Brodie and Carlton when they head back to Arthur River. I can't wait to read what happens form here on, I think it's going to be a very emotional reunion between Brodie, Jay and Jacq.
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I have to agree that the sudden change in temperament is strange even if the snake was a poor idea of a joke, Mr Sanderson's attitude just changed and it was like Dr Jekell and Mr Hyde. I think it would have been a good idea to have Sarah let Mrs Sanderson know that she was leaving. I hope that between Anton, Sarah and Oscar they can treat the little echidna and try to heal the infected wound on his stomach. I wanted to say that this is a great chapter and story.
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This was a great chapter, I think Carlton did exactly what he was supposed to do in order for the cramp to subside. I hope that between Jay, Carlton and Mr Timms along with Marcus and Sam are able to get the yacht free of the tree. It seems like they got lucky to have a chain saw with a 6 foot blade on it so that they could cut the tree into pieces so they could continue the trip back home.
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I have a strange feeling that Anna had this all planned out before she went to the hospital to have the baby, I doubt that she'll be at her parents house. I'm glad that Ian and Paddy will be going to Connecticut to be with Ian's parents and Adam and his parents as well as Reiley. I'm very happy to see that Ian and Adam have gotten back together. Great chapter, it says a lot about the way that everyone gets along.
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I'm hoping that Elizabeth can get over her nervousness around the royal family. I'm glad that Carlton has some first aid training so he was able to help the Prince when he wound up with a cramp in his leg. Once Carlton got the Prince back to the Trident he and Jay carried the Prince to his cabin and that's where Carlton started him out with some stretching exercises. Princess Marie almost knocked her brother in law over when she came rushing into the cabin. I hope that Carlton won't be getting in trouble over the fact that he almost giggled or laughed at Prince Henrik when he almost got knocked over. I'm sure everything will go good for the rest of the time the royal family will be on board. I'm really enjoying this story, it seems like the charter business is going very well, I think it's going to get better as time goes on and more people hear what they have to offer and the prices they charge.
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It seems like Carlton and his family are going to be hosting the Dutch Royal Family for New Year's eve and New Year's day. I hope that Carlton's mom doesn't freak out to much as they have lots of work to get everything ready for their guests when they arrive. I hope that these two days will be just as exciting as it was on the last charter. I'm loving the story as it appears to have more adventures to different parts of Tasmania.
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Another great chapter in the story about a group of vampires who want to be free from the bonds of the venom that is part of who they are. I hope that Colin and Devon can have a great life together like what Dragon and Gaius have had for 600 years. Now that they're both on the serum I hope that they'll continue to be in the relationship they have now. I'm glad that Dragon has a way of speaking so that people will stop and listen to what he has to say. I know that there's going to be lots of questions about the life of the people who were bitten and what they'll have to do and where they'll live since they'll have to be on the serum so they don't continue to change into full vampires. I'm sure that between Dragon, Colin and Devon they'll be able to answer most of the questions that these people have about the future. I can't wait to read more about the VUN and all of the vampires who make up the family. I know that that is what Colin and Devon claim it to be. I wonder what Lucian is going to do, whether he's going to live and go on the serum or if he's going to walk out into the sun and let that be his end. Stan is a smart guy so I'm sure that he knows that he's a valuable person in the VUN. Stan must realize that the work he does with Buddy isn't just about Stan being the computer guy, but an invaluable resource for everyone with the VUN. Stan does more with a computer than most people do on a daily basis.
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I'm a bit confused about the chapter, it says that it's chapter 19 of beyond frontier but the characters are from at sea. I hope that this is just a simple mistake and that it'll be corrected very soon.
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I'm glad that after the accident and his few medical setbacks Anton is finally on his way back to the cattle station to get his belongings, Roebuck and vehicle to start the trek home again. I'm curious about Mathew and whether or not the guy in the hotel room was actually there because Mathew was drugged or because he was weak enough to pick up a guy from a bar. I'm sure everyone is going to be very happy to see Anton when he gets home again. Can't wait to see what happens next in the life of Anton.
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Chapter 83 Institutionalised
Butcher56 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 83 Institutionalised
Another great chapter. I hope that Robbie and Nathan can get together to take care of each other's needs. I'm hoping that Alex and Luke can be able to live like they need to so they don't wind up in foster care. I hope that Robbie and Don are able to mend their relationship between them and that the adoption will finally go through. I know that that is something Robbie's mom wanted to happen, I just hope that Don still wants to get it done after Robbie came out to them about being gay. -
Poor Anton he's in a mess now with a arm that's broke in 3 places, a concussion and bruising on his neck. I'm glad that his injuries weren't more than they were, Anton could have been injured more if he hadn't been strapped in with the safety harnesses in the buggy. I doubt that he'll be driving any time soon with the broken arm he'll not be able to drive for possibly 8 to 12 weeks. I hope that he'll do what everyone wants him to do and find a way for him and Roey to go home. Great story
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I'm really enjoying this story more and more with each new chapter. I'm glad that the Prince and his family had a good time and a very restful vacation. I hope that they might do the charter again and that they can tell others about the yacht and the charters. I think it would have been a good idea to know the ages of the children and how many girls and boys are in the family.
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I have to say that although there was a lot of drama in this chapter, I think it was just the right amount. I'm glad that Dragon got up on the stage and told everyone to stop then he told them that they'd been lied to. I hope that this vampire hunter group stops all of the activities they have planned, because now it's going to be a great deal harder for them to tell who is a vampire and who isn't. Great chapter, I am loving the story so far all of the work that VUN is doing seems to be bringing more people who want to be a part of the changes that are happening in different parts of the world. Can't wait to read more.
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Mark, I want you to know that this is the second or third time I have read this story. I have enjoyed going back to reread the whole thing again, I feel like I have a better understanding of what it must've been like to grow up during these times in history. I really believe that you have really done a great job with the descriptions of the characters and where each one fits in the story. I'm going to go and read book 10 in the story, I wanted to say also that in a way I'm glad that they figured out where Aaron was and went to find him, along with his brother Nathan and his nephew Robbie, I wish that Aaron had gone back to the US with them. Instead he's gone back into the place he's called home for years since he faked his death while serving in the marines during WWII.
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Another great chapter, thank you for writing these great stories. I think that with all that's going on with the media tracking the royal family down the idea of them going into the secluded area of the Donaldson river away from roads and such was a great idea. I hope that the guests can enjoy the rest of the trip without running into the media again. It appears that Carlton has an admirer, as it seems like the Prince is really impressed with the job that Carlton is doing while on the charter. I'm surprised that the Prince actually took a turn at the helm even though he and his family are on vacation, I was surprised by the fact that the Prince told Carlton that he was an admiral in the Dutch Navy. I look forward to reading more about the charter and the Trident and her crew.
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I also thought it was a little comical that Marcus said the head security officer for the royal family gave him the creeps. I think that this charter will be a great success especially when theHenderson's were asked to join the royal family for dinner on the 1st night. I hope that after this 1st night that they'll settle down and really enjoy doing the charter as well as making sure that their guests have a wonderful time as well. I'm waiting for the next chapter to see how the rest of the charter goes. Who knows they might just get more charters out of this one.
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I have to agree with Chris about Carlton doing quite well with his studies. I believe that this is going to be a very interesting charter especially since the guests are royalty. I hope that all goes well for them and that they enjoy the cruise, I hope that the children enjoy it as well as the adults. I think that if this charter goes well the Henderson's will be getting quite a few requests for charters. I can't wait to read more about the charter and how it all goes.
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Great chapter. I like the way that Carlton, Amanda, Marcus and Sam are all scuba certified and can lead guests who are certified to areas that are of interest such as sunken ships. I'm glad that Carlton and Amanda have become better friends and that they're sharing an apartment while they finish their studies at the University. I hope that Jay and Jacq are able to purchase the property that Jacq and Carlton saw when they were out for the drive looking for property to buy.
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This is a great story, I am loving it. I have a feeling that this charter business will be a great way to help Carlton with his studies as well as providing a job for the other 3 crew members. I think Jay and Jacq had a great idea to buy the yacht as a means of providing an excellent opportunity to help Carlton and be able to providean income for them as well. I believe the charter business will really pick up with the ability to not only do regular charters, but fishing as well as research charters will allow them to stay busy just about every week. The difference between the fishing business and the charters is that there really isn't a season that they won't be busy with charters, as with the fishing boats you had a certain amount of time to get out and catch the crayfish before the season ended for the year. I can'twait to read more about the about the charter business and the crew.
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I have a great feeling that between the three guys and maybe a bit of help from an attorney Ian, Adam and Paddy will finally be able to say they're a total family. I hope that they can get something done quickly so that they'll be able to get the baby from Anna before she has a chance to ruin it's life like she does with everyone else. I'm happy that Paddy is such a great young man who is always thinking of others before himself especially when it comes to the baby, he remembers what it was like for him to be a foster child. I don't want to see the baby wind up in the same situation Paddy was in before being rescued by Will and Liam. I wanted you to know that this is a great story about the love of a family and friends brought together by 2 great guys who are not selfish with the love they have.
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Well it seems like Anton's past keeps showing up and this time around Anton meets Sarah and Oscar again in just over 5 years ago like when he met them the first time. It was shortly after the death of Anton, Neale and Jedds mother when they left on the Last Frontier the trimaran yacht and went to New Zealand in order to see what was left of the belongings that Anton's brothers and mom had left after Neale and Jedd's father was killed in a trucking accident. When they left New Zealand they had 2 extra passengers, Sarah became the teacher while on board the yacht. I hope that Anton will finally see the signs that are right in front of him saying it's time to go back. I really enjoyed this chapter.
