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I believe Felix acts out just so he can be punished with sex. Felix loves Lucian to fuck him hard and deep the deeper Lucian goes the more he likes it. Felix already said that he wants to get into trouble just to get Lucian to fuck him. Lucian is enjoying the attention he gets from Felix whenever the younger nightmare. I'll bet I know what Finn and Alistair are going to do first chance they get.

Penelope has a way to fluster Finn, especially when she walked in on him in the bathroom. He really got embarrassed by her when she told him that he reminded her of Alistair. I can imagine how the meeting will go tomorrow when they meet with Alistair's family. I'm sure glad that Alistair's tutor has agreed to keep an eye on Finn's dad so that Finn would be able to relax and enjoy himself. Felix is going to have to remember that Finn is spoke for and that he's not allowed to touch him in the way he did when they first met.

Another great chapter, I have a feeling that all four young men are going to be very good friends in no time. I like how Finn is so enamored with the land of the uni's and nighties, so much so that I don't think Finn will have a problem with Alistair being royalty. I'm guessing that it's not going to be long before Finn and Alistair are getting down to some serious sex. I'll bet it's going to be a long night for both of them as they try different positions with each other. I wonder who'll be top and who'll be the bottom.

Well the team got their answer as to who was watching them. Agent Burrows got quite a start when Jerry hissed at him. Of course his first reaction was to kill Jerry, and Devon put a stop to that kind of talk. I have a feeling it's going to be a long night as they try to explain to the agent exactly who and what they are as well as explaining that they won't hurt him. I can't wait to see what happens next.

People like Dale are more trouble than they're worth, they think because they're bigger than the one that has been the recipient of the bullying that makes them feel superior. I feel like the bullies need a dose of their own medicine and maybe then they'll quit bullying others. I'm glad Lee'en was there to get Jack to Finn to stop Dale from doing what he wanted to do. I hope Alistair is able to calm Finn down enough so he won't have to relive the horrors of that night and the attack by Dale. I like how Finn told Jack and then Alistair that killing Dale wasn't worth it. I hope the last 4 months until Finn turns 18 goes by very quick.

It looks like Finn and Alistair are becoming more and more inseparable as time goes by. Finn just adores Alistair with every fiber of his being. Even if they have to wait for another 22 months for Finn to turn 18 in order to become more than they are right now.

Quin and Sy are such an adorable couple, and to top it all off they've only known one another for about a day or so. I'm sure that Quin has a real good feeling about Sy and getting him enrolled in the college especially since one of his uncles is one of the people who make the decision to let someone go to school there. I can't wait to read more about the 2 of them just to see where they go from here, especially if the sex is as good as they say it is.

Getting more and more interesting with every chapter. It appears that Finn now has more folk after him even though he's basically promised to Alistair. Jack appears smitten with lee'en so even though he can't see him they've got a lot going for themselves. Jack has made a promise that as soon as Finn reaches the age of 18 he and Jack are crossing over to the magical kingdom where the unicorns and the nightmares live so they could live out the rest of their lives with Lee'en and Alistair as their mates. It's going to be weird watching the newbies try to get a chance to get with the 2 human boys.

This story is a great favorite of mine, I imagine that Finn will make Alistair's dreams come true if he keeps doing what he dreams of. I can hardly wait to read more.

It's interesting to know that sex is possible with a unicorn or a nightmare for that matter. I'm sure Jack enjoyed the experience quite a bit. He'll probably enjoy it more when he's able to see the unicorn instead of just feeling him. Finn needs to relax more and not be so uptight about sex.

Just what they need right now, more trouble from the outside. If someone's watching them and it's possibly human agents similar to the FBI agents traveling with the gang from New York it could be trouble or it may be someone trying to figure out why there's so much commotion around the house. I'm not sure what it means that the venom in the wild vampire being kept in the storage area under the barn, I hope George figures it out soon. I know he wants to get his lab equipment brought over from the VUN in Manhattan that way he can truly figure out what the difference between the venom is.

I was so glad when I saw there was a new chapter to read. I hope that Ryan and Randy are together for a very long time, the same thing for Ariel and Tyler. The two couples seem to be made for each other, yeah there might have been a few bumps in the road along the way of them finding out what they were meant to be. Both couples seem to be truly matched up with their significant other just like it was supposed to be that way. I'm glad to read that Ariel and Tyler are finally getting around to having sex with each other and it seems like it's going very well. I'm waiting for more chapters as soon as they are ready,

I like the comment by wesley8890 asking if Benny was going to be a ring bearer and Haley as the flower girl. I think it would be great for them to be involved in the wedding. I certainly hope that Liam gets his cast off before the wedding, I'd hate to think about him being in the cast for his own wedding. Can't believe Lee was able to get the haircut and style he wanted as well as clothes he liked.

I have read the entire 50 chapters without commenting on any of the chapters. I can really say that I have really enjoyed reading about the main characters of Aiden and Ethan as they became friends at 1st and then becoming mates as it progressed. Not only were they mates they are true mates, as they became more and more familiar with each other and started getting the ferals invading the pack area all looking for Ethan as he is an elemental. As the two make love to each other when Aiden bites Ethan and he goes through the process of becoming a wolf more of the elemental spirit starts to come forward. The wedding they had for the entire pack was awenspiring with all of the different types of species showing up along with the pack I believe it was a great day for the couple.

Colin and Devon make such a great couple, even with the amount of years between them, they still complete each other. I don't know if Colin would have gotten Wentworth Manor completed in the amount of time he did if not for Devon telling him that he would marry him only after Wentworth Manor was completed. Because they're spending so much time on the vampire issues they actually needed to get away from it for the weekend. I'm glad that they have been able to go away for a few days.

This is a very great story all of the characters in it are held together by Will & Liam. It now seems like Liam might not get to see his dream of being a pro baseball player due to the attack he got in the showers in the gym at school. With his pitching arm being broken who knows what he'll be able to due once it heals. Poor Will is going to be a walking zombie because of the attack, he and Liam are so close they could actually be one person. Each of them have their own interests and they have totally different personalities but that's what makes them whole as they cancel each other. I hope that makes sense to everyone who reads this, I'm not sure if I'm phrasing it correctly or not. I hope Liam is going to be alright after this, I can't wait for the next chapter to come out so I can read it to see if he's alright.

Very good chapter, I like the idea of testing the venom of the feral vampire to see what causes the vampire to become feral. I'm looking forward to more of what this group can do if they keep going on the track they're on. Colin & Devon continue to show each other how much they love each other, every chance they get they're in bed proving the love for one another.

Another great chapter, it appears that CJ will be busy during the summer, with taking Ritchie to see their grandparents in Miami, going to New York, and working with the Clinton campaign. I really like that Ceaser and Brett getting the motorcycle for CJ for his graduation gift from them and Harley.

Your writing style gets me every time, I am loving the story as it gets more added. I can't wait to read about the wedding and hopefully Will's mother doesn't decide to crash it and stir up more trouble. That woman is going to be the death of Will if she doesn't leave him alone. I'm sure glad that he's going to be 18 soon and then she won't be able to cause all of the trouble she wants to cause now. Can't wait to read the next chapter, thanks for the great story.

It appears that they're gaining a few more vampires on the serum. I hope that they can get a very good majority of the vampires on the serum.

It appears that Edwin might be a good candidate for the serum, and then give the disflavoring to the humans around that way they don't get bit by one of the unhuman vampires. After getting to know Edwin a lot more they'll probably have more vampires wanting the serum than what they're ready for. I hope that it goes according to plan and they don't have any problems.

Fantastic story, I'm glad they're reaching out to the extended family of Marissa in hopes of getting more vampires on the serum. If they get say 80 to 90 percent of the vampires out there in the world they just might be able to stop a lot of the killings that are going on around the world. If that happens you might have a lot more people willing to go places and not be afraid that something is out there lurking waiting for the right moment they could take a person down and drain them of their blood. If this goes according to the plan the world will be able to breathe a sigh of relief. I'm glad that the team from the VUN was able to stop Marissa and Adrian before they could do anymore damage by awarding another family member the gift of becoming a vampire. Since that has been stopped and both Adrian and Marissa are receiving the serum even though they don't want it, along with those extended family and friends who helped keep them supplied with blood and performing other jobs that requires being in the daytime are being rounded up and locked up as well. All of the family members who aren't vampires are locked up by the FBI and they know why their there, the threat from them is over. I look forward to continue rereading the story as it progresses, I thank you for writing this amazing story.

It's a good thing that this group took down Adrian and Marissa because if they were given the serum it would not be enough to keep Adrian from killing again especially if he could go out in the daytime. Colin said it right when he told Marissa that she created the man who bit Brett, who in turn bit him and his daughter. Marissa and her family group needed to be taken down before more people turned up dead because of the loss of blood. I hope they get locked away for a couple of centuries if not more. Adrian needs to be taken out on the roof at sunrise and let the sun take care of him.

Just what they need a group of vampires that are very secretive, one wants the serum whether it's just for his benefit or a way to take over the group from her nephew, the other one Marissa the leader of the group is a great mystery in of herself. Colin nor Burke got anything from her at all, meaning they couldn't sense what her intentions were. At least they now know that there is another group of vampires in the area, they'll have to be very cautious about the serum now. I hope that this turns out to something good for the group and not more trouble.

Well it looks like Willie's going to be able to get help with the memories of the war and the horrors that he saw. Then Betty comes to the VUN as planned with suspicions of the man she's been seeing a bit. Her suspicions are that she senses something isn't right and that he's hiding something, Devon asked his friends in the FBI if they could run a check on him. What they find out is that he may not be who he says he is. He's supposedly a businessman from Atlanta, but the bank he has been using while with Betty shows a Charleston address. It'll be interesting to see what they actually find out about him and whether or not he'll be brought to Manhattan and put in an interigation room.