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  1. Emi GS
    It is out of experience Parker, it will/had come as I wanted it to be. As I experienced it to be. Thank you for sharing my misery. And thank You for the review... ~Emi.
  2. Emi GS
    It is a personal experience for losing my cousin and uncle. It is so sad to lost them unexpectedly. Thank You for the review Gary... ~Emi.
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    Last step for You

    Emi GS commented on Emi GS's story chapter in Last step for You

    As I said earlier, emotions cross their line and happiness will result in pain and misery. Thanks for the review Lisa... ~Emi.
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    Last step for You

    Emi GS commented on Emi GS's story chapter in Last step for You

    Thank Ben. That was the crucial part which will soothe you and hurt at the same time. Great review Ben... ~Emi.
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    Last step for You

    Emi GS commented on Emi GS's story chapter in Last step for You

    Thanks man. It was an emotional poem which involves someone's pain about their life. Crossing the line, taking the last step looks as a solution. And it not a desire but necessary to end the pain... ~Emi.
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    Last step for You

    Emi GS commented on Emi GS's story chapter in Last step for You

    It always won't happen like happy endings my friend. Emotions will change according to situation. Mixed emotions also involve misery and pain... ~Emi.
  7. Emi GS
    I am glad you liked it Aunt Def. I am happy that my all effort are worth something. And you people made that possible by giving your best compliments. Thank You for the review Aunt... ~Emi.
  8. Emi GS
    God! made me an adult already. Here I am the one who sing for the little rascal who is got the attention from all, and made me stand there and appreciate him. But I am glad he did that. or otherwise I'd not have written it, and haven't got the bestest compliment from you guys. I can forgive him... Don't roll your eyes Lisa. Thank you for the compliment my friend... ~Emi.
  9. Emi GS
    I had written what I had seen. Cynus helped me to put my words into a straight line. I owe him this. And Than You for the great compliment Ben, I appreciate it... ~Emi.
  10. Emi GS
    I just feel wow, that I made you like that with my poem. And I am glad you liked it. Thank You for the review Adi... ~Emi.
  11. Emi GS
    I am glad I made you see what I actually seen and wrote this poem. Its a lovely visual in live. Thank You for the review Tim...
  12. Emi GS
    Yeah, this is so fun to write. And Me too Loved it a lot of all the poems. I just love the rains and dancing. I am glad you liked it that much its made hum. Thank you review... ~Emi.
  13. Emi GS
    Yeah, its more look like autumn Ben. Thank You for the review man... ~Emi.
  14. Emi GS
    Thank You. Last line represents how autumn will make all leafs, flowers and seeds fall to the ground. And spring will bring back them to life. So nature retard everything before it renew everything. Thank You for the buddy... ~Emi.
  15. Emi GS
    That what the specialty of Monoku Aunt Def. And I am becoming fond of this form. Thank You for the compliment and the review... ~Emi.
  16. Emi GS
    I am glad you loved it Lisa. Thank You for your compliment and for your review too... ~Emi.
  17. Emi GS
    No Ben. Crickets are enjoying a hot and sunny day, while I am sweating and trying to write that into this poem. Thanks for the compliments and the review... ~Emi.
  18. Emi GS
    Thanks man. I started to like this form very much. May be I am going to build a pack of poems with this form soon. Thank You for the review... ~Emi.
  19. Emi GS
    I am glad this one line has displayed all the scene I wanted to tell. And I am glad you liked it... Thank You for the Review... ~Emi.
  20. Emi GS
    Just read them all. They are so lovely lullabys'... I just got flattered by Aunt Def's Lullaby. I am gonna personally ask her to sing it for me...
  21. Emi GS
    This is a nice and lovely lullaby. You did it great my friend...
  22. Emi GS
    I missed this prompt because of my busy schedule. But Congratulations to all other poets for your efforts...
  23. Emi GS

    First Kiss

    Emi GS posted new chapter in First Love

    First Kiss "Why are you looking at me that way?" That voice startled me. The lean and fit body in front of me made me forget I was standing in the middle of a locker room full of nude bodies roaming around me. I got so mesmerized by that physique, it made me forget that I could easily get caught by anyone. Or worse, him "Are you like... checking me out?" His cheeky grin made goose bumps all over my body. I think I started to get aroused under the towel tucked around my waist. "W... What
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    First Love

    Emi GS posted a story in Fiction

    Tyler and Elliott are childhood friends. But Tyler wanted more than friendship. Does he get what he wants!!!???
  25. Emi GS
    Cool!!!... Congrats Comsie...
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