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Emi GS

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  1. I don't know he is a naughty boy of GA And A math geek until I get to know him. He is cute, and has cuter ass( as his sister told ). He likes to tease and loves to flirt. Whatever he is Whatever people think; He is the first friend I got He is the first one I talked. Love You Love... Happy Birthday! DrewMyLove
  2. Following your quote:"Better Late than Never" Be-lated Happy Birth Day Aunt Reader
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    A Life to Win

    Is this the part you said you have more to write of another poem!!!??? It is beautiful. Parting may be hurt but you have a life to go on. And suggestion of 'Opening Eyes' is the new way of saying 'move on You have a better life ahead'.
  4. Guys, Gary just told that CG is fine and all. And he is coming back with something to Publish... I just thought it would be good to post here...
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    Untitled Poem

    Sad I was, but its Love. We desire and dive, but some times we cripple and would fall. The hurt make us wail and cry. This is what your poem did to me. Just woken up my desire to write this. Very beautiful poem Tim. You have done great job on it... ~Emi.
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    Desire

    'O Love' will do the wonders from very first. Love always is. It was a wonderful poem of true Love is of enchantment for the Lovers. You have shown the very moment of how they are caught with its bliss. And I Love Coffee... Delightful poem Parker, you have done very well and I loved it... ~Emi.
  7. What I see here is a divorce between a couple and the effect on a family. If you have presented here exactly what I thought, then you have done a great job... Poetry is definitely a way to present our feelings about anything... ~Emi.
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    A Springing Haiku

    The form is correct. The visual is bright and splendid. you have done a great job. Don't take offended here, because I felt like it, the Haiku, was unfinished. I think you have more to say/add to this beautiful picture. Overall, Nice effort... ~Emi.
  9. I like the essence of including the time and love mix. And the line 'no debt to pay' was just wow. Some times broken heart can never fix. Lovey poem Alex... ~Emi.
  10. Phew!!! This week gone like a bullet. Completed reading Signature featured story as well as some of other. This week been so busy with mostly reading and little writing...
  11. Finally they are building something. Its not just the home, love and bonding relation. Its the trust that goes along with all those. I am happy for them. And of course for Bailey, such a cute angel she is. I hope everything best to happen her. I can see a great future for them. I expect some less arrogance from Carly and will be glad if none. Yeah definitely some hot chapter again. Wonderful chapter Gary... ~Emi.
  12. Floating with the flow is something we do when we are having something different in our life. Now they both are having their best day and way of living with new plans. I hope everything goes well for them both, even though they have to encounter with the witch of their life Carley. Indeed a Nice chapter Gary...
  13. I am breathing heavily right now by the ending. What a hot chapter it is. That was f*cking awesome. I better be keep down my nerves and sense before I write a review , otherwise I'll be writing all sloppy. A great and hot chapter Gary, I liked it... ~Emi.
  14. A first normal day for the both new starters after a long time. And a beautiful day as a start for their glorious life. Some what hotter at the end , and it was really funny and hilarious about the 'bottom' thing Nice chapter Gary... ~Emi.
  15. A Tit for Tat, I say. Carley deserve this for being devious and for being a b*tch. I turned out to be a big fan of Craig's for his intelligence and courage. And felt sad for Marian, that she has go with all this and know about how cruel her daughter turned out. I was waiting for some shitty law(God know I hate laws ) related blathering, but you were too clever to do that. And I am now so anxious about where you are taking us!!!??? I liked it a lot Gary, You are awesome... ~Emi.
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    Chapter 3 Tsunami

    For frank to say, Carey is a B*tch She don't deserve to be treated as Craig's sister anymore. Using Bailey as bait, lying to both Craig and Jared. OMG! can anyone do such things to their siblings. I can feel for both Jared and Craig. The got hurt, for long time, by Carley's dark ambitions. And, as well as, I can see some wheels are turning on fast in Craig's brain. I think he definitely had planned to show her sister, 'she can't have everything in her way anymore'. Nice chapter Gary. I Loved it... ~Emi.
  17. I never expected twins to be this different. Carly has to grow up, like her mother(God I Love her) said, from her bitterness. I thought it was just a misunderstanding at first, but finally got that it is a sibling rivalry. And mostly the jealousy of Carly's on her twin. Blaming her brother was a nasty thing to do. I think Jared and Craig must have the talk, as Trina suggested. Nice chapter Gary... ~Emi.
  18. I can't resist until I say it: 'I was expecting the kiss from very first moment'. Ugh!!! Three different lives clashed in a situation with different aspects of their minds. I liked the suspense about their individual characters and emotions for each other. And I can say Carly looks like some trouble, where as l liked the mother who is more fair for them all. Different start for this story and have to see where you are leading this. ~Emi.
  19. We trust our Loved one and believe them for life. When the trust broken, we can't cope up that easily. This is a good poem and the line 'You back away when I start to fall' moved me. Nice poem Gary. I hope you stand for your broken trust/heart. Love, ~Emi.
  20. Indian Veda's and some of the ancient sculptures educated about a thing called "Auparashtika". According to this a Hermit monk performing auparashtika(fellatio) on a princely visitors. That means some kings get orals from monk when they visit ashramas some time. Even they might practice with princes according to some myths.
  21. "Shiv Ling" is one of the famous phallic art of India and a sacred statue that is worshiped by Hindus in India. As we all we happen to see the live sexual positions as statues on, mostly, every temple from every village, town and city of India. We(Indians) happen to gain their sexual education mostly from these statues from ancient times.
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    Damphir

    I have been so fond of Vampires, Werewolves, Love and Relationships. A Vampire brought me here for the fact to say. Your story was something very special both in presentation of those species and the concept itself. The Drama, Grief, Tension, Love, Emotion and, yeah, sex too was well presented here. I have been started reading slowly and got confused at some places because of the character and the way you are loading. In the middle I even felt some what bored, sorry for that. But it never made me stop reading. As well as the main character made me continue the reading and Glory I love that kitty from the very first. When I was completing the last two chapters I was pouted that it was ending, I liked that much. All the characters made me flatter for them and I loved it. Coming to final words. Its a very indeed special story for me and I loved. Thank you for sharing with us. And sorry for not reviewing chapter wise... ~Emi.
  23. :wizard: Happy Birth Day Once again Owley... :wizard:
  24. Just completed the reading. I was like, Wow!!! I have just liked the way she presented the characters and drama was great. It stunned me with the end chapter. I was like a slow starter from the first, but by the ending two chapter I was pouting like I don't want it to end. A special story with special era of new species. I liked it so much...
  25. Fate can buffet you with wonderful thing you can't imagine. Being in Love for eternal was definitely one of them. Such simple words have given so much. Nice Poem SD... ~Emi.
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