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Nicely framed and great story. Definitely Tris going to their special one because of the all reasons Jacob given. And the ghost part, you must be crazy while you are writing, how to involve and maintain the porchè. I liked it and going to read remaining...

That was something new. Two teams quarreling for some Phoenix guy, One is bad and another is good One. But whatever You are doing to Tris, is hell of a shock to himself. Knowing that he is someone Special, living with the people that are mutant like, finally knowing the truth about his Brothers and all were OMG... I got some interest from first, which is now doubled. I like these kind of characters and stories. I'll be staving to read more...

I am shocked that in one day how a person's life will turn upside down. Losing last two of his family members, being arrested for a treason which is never made and finally taken by the soldiers as a prisoner. These all turned to be a great excitement. And the Mystery of Surname made Me look into this as serious as it should be. I have liked the way You write down. I merely can seen the visuals playing in My Mind as I read it. You made it that way for Your Readers...

I bey You got Terrified along the Situation... Lol You made my day today... Sorry that I was laughing...

OMG... Even though I had said, Ryan is to blame. But I have my sympathies to him and its cruel to do such a thing with someone. Being alone, seeing nothing, taking company with a camera light and finally lost appetite to even live. I can't believe someone can punish others like this. Starving for food, drinking out of toilet, tired to concussion and all made worst out it. You are so cruel man... You can't just let the main character suffer like that. And what happened to Rex!?! Is it just a lesson for Ryan or a starting of more troubles...??? You did write well but I can say you scared the shit out of so many, not me though. I liked it big guy, not in a good way I think...

Happy Birth Day Big Guy...

Yes, Communication will do a great Job. It involves a good Understanding. I Liked the Chapter... I wish I had this conversation with My Ex(One and Only Ex). I am not going to get that though. Good Chapter Gary...

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It was a shock learning about Lanny and Candy. And a great reason to put two swords into One Kilt. I liked the Kissing and Confusing parts. As I said 'I was shocked when My boyfriend(Ex,I mean, I thought He is Straight) made a move towards me'. A good and Tricky chapter. I Liked it a lot...

A pang of Jealousy!!! I doubt that. Because I have a lot of jealous and I even made enemy out of My Ex's Lover. But we can't do anything when they are so linked. Finally I became a third wheel for them... Sorry to bother with my tantrum. It is a Good Chapter. And have to wait and see what will happen because of Candy???

Its a good thing that finally Kendall given a chance to Michael. It is the only way You can get a chance interact with Love of Your Life even though you don't know what's in their mind actually. I hope for the Best to Happen...

I have got Emotionally linked with Michel but You know I got too jealous of his Parents. I wish my Parents are like that. But every fate does not come with Good Odds. I Liked how Michel's parents made their efforts...

Gary do You know me before GA or what??? You are exactly writing what happened in My Life but with little bit of changes. Like: 1. In my life Michel cheated Me for another Guy and he is not a Best Friend too. 2. Chet is in My life but I never know He is Gay or not. But I loved the distraction as Kendall. What will happen next is definitely God's grace. A good Chapter for Kendall after a downfall.

It is too difficult to move on when You always bound with person You Love. I have gone through that, but not for the right guy though. I hope everything goes well for Kendall...

Very emotional chapter itself... Yes, writing your first story is really a terrifying thing to do. But You had written it with an emotive, so it came as good as it have to be. I love it and emotionally got attached...

Hey Guys... I am back with some information relating to the Next Chapter of the Story. Until now we have seen Davy's misery and an investigation about Davy's disappearance. One was a sad thing and another one is an action thing... The next chapter is going to involve fully about a guy named Francis and something he has been holding for his entire life. I think you will guess what it is, but You have wait to know everything... And in this chapter some of the characters are going to introduce in this chapter. Like Zowie, best friend of Francis. This chapter only involves this set of friends and an important thing relating to Francis's Life... As I have given mystery in every chapter, this chapter is also going to contain a Mystery at the end of the Chapter...

I'll definitely Thank the God for giving the Chance to Wish Cynus before Every body else... So :wizard: MANY MORE HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY CYNUS :wizard:

Hey Guys. I know this is Crazy, But I want to Upload My Picture like Drew and Some others doing these days on GA. I have decided but I need some boost to do that. I know it sounds silly but I am forcing you people to do that for me. Yes, You all involved with this. This is not a game, but you all are going to participate in this. What You have to do is? POST... Yeah you have to post your comments. And when the replies are going to be 143, then I'll Upload My Picture. And the person who will post 143rd comment is going to get some appreciation. I am going to write some poem for him/her and dedicate to them. Hope You people will continue this upto that... Thank You All...

Thank You DR, I know I can depend on people here who care about me. As You said Time is going to do well...

Yes Ace... It is... But definitely Time will Heal...

Cynus, actually the problem is, I was publishing them from my Mobile phone. So its got all mixed up. I'll take care of that when I have access to any Computer. And Thank You so much for the Comments...

Thank You So Much JB... I'll definitely gonna talk, I feel up to it. Thanzzz Again...

All Through My Life I Only Want You I Only Need You... I Trace Your Lips You Kiss My Fingers My Very Essence of Love Is All For You... I Gaze Deeply Into Your Eyes And You Look Me Back I Can Feel The Warmness And the Love We Share I Love This Journey Only With You... Your Lips Meet Mine My Heart Quickens Its Rhythmic Pace We Lay Together Side By Side Its Not The Love Making We Do I Just Want You I Just Need You... Just You... Only You... The True You...

Thank You So Much...

Thank You...