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Victor Gutte

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  1. wow onkel Tim!!...wow!! 2 chapters in such a short span, I like it . all things aside I think this chapter shows how close the Perry brothers are, Jazz and Nel are really close enough to be brothers as well. it feels nice to see how Rob values Eric's opinions in his personal matters. I almost feel that he meddles in Eric's relationship because he thinks that it's his right to do so even though it's all in good sense. my prediction about the reason for which Eric stayed in the closet turned out to be quite true after all . anyway tak for kapitel onkel tim, elsker dig... knus og kram
  2. YAY!! I finally get my present. thank you onkel Tim.... you made me really happy . while it may seem that we have known them for ages, Eric and Nelson's relationship is really young (barely 72 hours long) . you have captured the feelings in a new and budding relation quite well as well as let them behave like teenagers. their interest in exploring but also the need to make it work was told quite perfectly. Eric may have more similarities with his brother than he thinks ...not that it is a bad thing . I liked the way Nel was trying to be sensible but had difficulties in doing so . the shower scene was perfect, if they had tried to take it further there it would have been quite rushed and I'm sure that they wouldn't want that . besides I feel that Nel wants to take things slow because he wants to get to know and understand Eric and strengthen their relationship before the big step happens . anyways tak onkel Tim, elske dig
  3. I really loved the chapter Gary . my mom always said that people don't become your own just because they are blood-related to you, but they'll become yours when you really consider them to be your own. it maybe the reason why the relation between life-partners is the strongest of all. I felt really proud of Carson in this chapter and I for some strange reason understood Michael's fears. I love how Kendall seems to understand what goes in Mikey's mind. it's llike a match made in heaven..oops i.e. Gary the god of writing . BTW Gary you should really tell Michael that having a fat ass is a lot better than having a flat ass
  4. man, friends like Jasper and brothers like Rob are hard to obtain . such friends who are comfortable enough in their own sexuality to help their gay friends to find a partner . I get a feeling that these both are going to be involved in Eric and Nelson's love life to the point that it gets embarrassing for them. while I can see why Rob got famous quickly, I'm gonna be in Team Nelson, even if I'm the only one in the team . insert Nelson in the sign
  5. I really understand the feelings Kendall has for his father, I have the same feelings towards one of my granddads. they are such as like you love the person but don't want them to be a part of your life. when I was 9, I asked my mom if we could love a person who we don't like, she told me it was possible. Carson's behaviour made Kendall dislike him but still was unable to stop loving him. I really am proud of Michael of not being ashamed and listing Kendall as his Common-law partner. I felt that it brought them even closer than before.as for the dinner, the mention of frozen black cherry yogurt made me almost drool. Kendall blackmailing Michael about sex always makes me laugh. thanks for an amazing chapter
  6. I really reading COTT not just because it is an amazing story but also because it shows the exactly same kind of life I want to live in the future. I really wish that my parents would react the same way the Acetos did when I take my life partner to meet them . anyways I really loved the sexual innuendos used by both Michael and Kendall . I'm just imagining what would have happened to Michael if he just wouldn't have defended himself during the situation with the papa Aceto
  7. I really liked the starting uncle Tim , I liked that you used the same prompt twice in the story. Rob does seem nice, even though if he comes across as a little over-bearing. Jasper seems the same way too with Nelson . I think Nelson is gonna be my favourite, it maybe because I'm more like him in my real life and can relate to him better . anyways I'm gonna look forward to read more of these guys
  8. this chapter had it all Gary, the closeness between the guys, the seduction, the small arguments that a couple get into, the acceptance from the parents, it had everything. Kendall trying to get Michael do things by "threatening" not to have sex was hilarious . then Michael saying that he want to be labelled as partners was so adorable, even I wanted to kiss him but I'm very sure that either of them wouldn't approve of that . Michael's parents were so nice, made me want to them both for putting their child's happiness over every single thing. my respect for them grew even more in this chapter. . and the sex, well by now I'm officially convinced that you lack the ability to write a sex-scene. you can only write a love scene . thank you for another lovely chapter
  9. this chapter left a strange feeling of longing in me Gary. I mean it is just not this one, in general your stories leave the same feeling in me. it maybe because of the fact that this is the kind of life I keep seeing myself in, having a loving partner, cuddling in bed and watching movies, talking to each other about how the other's day went.....well you get the picture. I keep seeing myself in the stories you write, or maybe that I can relate to the characters you write. anyways, I felt that the couple did a nice job talking about their issues rather than bottling up. nice chapter Gary, thank you
  10. this chapter showed just not hot sex but their bond and comfort levels between each other . it also showed how romantic Michael is, and all those sexual innuendos made me laugh . the way they confirmed their relationship was perfectly done and couldn't have been better . the ending lines were quite funny as well and that was a good way to end a chapter as it leaves the reader happy and satisfied . thanks for the chapter.
  11. while the sex-scene was hot, I didn't feel that this chapter was actually about sex in the first place. this chapter was about Ace and Deuce and their love for each other. the sex was more than just sex for them, it was a proof that what they had together was real, their love was real. it actually strengthened their already strong relationship as friends and brought out what they both have been hiding inside themselves. Michael saying that he was Kendall-sexual was a really nice line . the ending of the chapter showed how comfortable they are with each other . thanks for the lovely chapter
  12. while Michael getting his knee injured is unfortunate, Candy is to blame for that . but on the bright side it got Kendall and Michael closer so it happened for good. Kendall and Michael's banter showed how comfortable they were with each other before the confession. I could imagine Michael totally in those cloud patterned pyjama shorts. Kendall not believing Michael's love is quite expected, because when someone dreams of something to happen forever and expects that never to happen in reality, they generally don't believe it when it really happens or think that they are being pranked Colleen was just awesome in the chapter and reminded why I respect women so much
  13. most of the times,people often plan on things to happen in a certain way, and when they don't go as planned they generally panic and try to avoid the situation by react in a way different than that of how they normally do. Kendall reacted to Michael in such an aggressive manner because he didn't plan on being confronted by him. Chet had been an amazing friend to Kendall in this episode by putting away his attraction to Kendall aside and trying to guide him. Michael has been awesome in the fact that he put his own hurt of being dismissed behind and thought about the things to be done next. him going to sleep hugging Kendall's old hoodie was so lovely and sad at the same time. P.S. the moondoggie thing is hilarious. jealousy can make people do weird things. you did a fine job by making me tear up a couple of times during the chapter . thanks for the chapter
  14. realisation always hits hard! and when it hits, there will be many feelings that overwhelm a person. I felt that in a way, Michael has suffered more than Kendall did as he abused himself by supressing his feelings and emotions. while they disappear, they never truly go away and stay deeply hidden inside of us and keep eating away at us until we eventually give in. I can actually relate to Michael more on that level as I have done the same thing for years before accepting myself, although I still am not at the level where Michael is, I am slowly working at it. BTW, the description of a naked Kendall in moonlight was done in such a beautiful way, that it was more erotic than sexual. felt like a beautiful painting . thanks for such a beautiful chapter
  15. Kendall talking to Jr. Kendall was quite funny . Chet was described in a quite proactive manner in the chapter. He would be a great friend. he would be a great boyfriend as well but Kendall is not in a position to get in a relationship right now. he's too hung up on Michael right now .
  16. our family was not really well off financially until I was a teenager. by the time I started middle school my sister was already in high school. there was a place whose donuts were really delicious and I always wanted to have them. my sister used to pack her own lunch to school, and used to save her lunch money so that she could buy me those donuts I loved every week. I didn't realise the importance of what she did back then, but now recently when I asked her why she spent her savings on me instead of using them for her own, she replied that "when you truly love and care for someone and want to see them happy, such things don't matter". I remembered the same conversation when Michael was trying to make Kendall feel comfortable . BTW Gary, how does Michael know what horse piss tastes like?
  17. I feel that you have captured the feelings and emotions of the person on whom the bomb is dropped on. it sometimes can go as much as thinking that they know nothing about the other person. it is justified that Michael felt that why should he be punished for something he hasn't done . it is also a fact that no matter how much we love a person, there is a limit to what we could do for them. thanks for the nice chapter Gary
  18. I can actually relate to Kendall in this chapter. kinda reminded me of the time I tried to come out to my sister . as I was reading the chapter I kept thinking you can do it Kendall, you can overcome your fears and I wanted to give him a for being able to do it. while Kendall was successful, I was not able to make it , coming out that is. anyways while I know that there are 29 more chapters I still want to read more chapters
  19. I would say that the beginning is quite engaging, and made me want to know what happened during the debate . I could totally relate to Andrew as I have been the same way during my high school as well . looking forward to next chapters .
  20. this chapter and the previous ones have quite satisfied my sappy romantic soul but got me yearning for more . kudos to you for writing such an engaging and beautiful story . I just wish that I could have some more of them being happy .
  21. I've loved the way you described Arron's house, I was able to picture it quite well. and their lovemaking had me and made me want to and ,but at the end made me wistful
  22. the levis thing got me . I also caught a glimpse of Chet's child-like and playful mentality. Made me like him even more and him. though i'm sure Arron wouldn't approve
  23. Arron your heart was telling you right. not everyone is a cheating a**hole. the ending of the chapter was nice, made my romantic heart happy and slightly tear up
  24. when I started to read the chapter, I was full of anticipation praying to keep Ian away from the house. then I was at you for keeping him at home. at last I was like "DON'T GO ARRON!! YOU WILL REGRET IT SO BADLY"
  25. while I can't relate to Arron's relationship to Dwayne, but I have seen such case in my family as well. an uncle of mine has cheated on his wife, and now they just stay together for the sake of their kids. I've always felt bad for her, she was such a sweet lady. BTW the striptease done by Arron and Chet made me . nope not saying
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