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Brought To You By A Prompt
Victor Gutte commented on Hunter Thomson's blog entry in Hunter Thomson's Blog
I have had enough experience with life to say that no matter how carefully we plan our life and careers, life always finds a way to do it differently. I have found that going along with it sometimes is a good thing. I hope you would take the right decision -
Welcome Back Sasha I loved the story, short but sweet. I don't have an extremely active imagination but I still was able to imagine the tattoos on their bodies. It is kinda funny and sad to see how the misunderstandings kept them away. But the ending was a sweet one looking forward to read your other stories
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Happy to know that things are going well for you I read your story Born Wolf years ago and fell in love with your style of writing. I hope we get to see more of you
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Chapter 20 Taking Turns
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Taking Turns
Well, I was sure Tobyn would come around and he did come around just in time Besides you probably would have had to deal with an angry mob of people carrying pitchforks and torches if anything had happened to Kellar . I'm interested in seeing how their mating goes and what Tobyn does at that time this was a short but nice chapter Gary. thank you -
No Prompt: Third Date Part II
Victor Gutte commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in No Prompt: Third Date Part II
Aww onkel Tim I loved the chapter I've had gelato only once, a pistacchio and chestnut I loved it not only the taste but also because it was lower in fat I probably would have a gelato moment, that sounds very fun Nel and Eric were adorable I still think that there needs to be a little drama in their relationship, it makes their bond stronger and also, is Victor based on me by any means? because he kinda reminded me of myself a little bit th was a great chapter onkel Tim I'll be waiting for the next chapter -
Chapter 18 A Day of Reckoning
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 18 A Day of Reckoning
I know that Kellar's hurting here but I kinda see where Tobyn's at. Everything he believed was proved wrong and the life he envisioned for himself started to seem less possible now. I know that the story is mostly based on Kellar's POV and readers would probably sympathize with him as well but I would see Tobyn in a different light. I believe he would come around albeit a little slowly. Such things wouldn't happen immediately. Kellar is not the one to be blamed for the situation but Tobyn is not responsible either. I have been in several situations as Tobyn and I relate to him well besides, if Kellar's 19, I'm sure Tobyn isn't much older. So, he's pretty much a young man and young men don't understand things very well. I have some theories about Tobyn's problems but they're better discussed in private because I don't want to give out any spoilers if one of them turn out to be actual story Anyways, an interesting and emotional chapter overall, thanks for the story Gary -
Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
I started reading the story with an intention to read it slowly but ended up catching upto chapter 19 can't wait for more infact post all the chapters now!!!! just kidding but I wouldn't stop you if you decide to do so thanks for such an interesting and well written story Gary -
Chapter 58 You Can't Win Without Trust
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 58 You Can't Win Without Trust
I was actually going to nag you for a new chapter but checked the story before doing so. Good thing I did, or you would have roasted me real bad As for the chapter, I loved the puppies you need to give us more of them The snow fight scene was funny and M & K's moments, you need to give us more of them as well Nate's gift for Bodie was so thoughtful and touching And finally the Cavanaugh family's Christmas tradition I'm pretty sure K & M will look amazing in them Great chapter as always Gary -
Prompt 492 Now what do we do?
Victor Gutte commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 492 Now what do we do?
Finally another chapter with Nelson in it I already like Trevor, stark contrast from Nelson Maybe he and Rob should end up going to the same university. that would be great Jasper did great Rob being shocked is something rare True, Eric running for GSA president would be a great thing. It would also do a good job of keeping him busy if Nelson ends up studying in a university far from home Right now, their relation lacks any kind of drama, having a long distance relation will strengthen their bond but at the pace your story is moving, I'm pretty sure that'll happen by chapter 300 or so Great Chapter as always Onkel Tim : hug: -
Chapter 10 Floating Toward Shore
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Floating Toward Shore
this was a nice chapter Gary I missed to review the last few chapters as I read them on a cousin's tab. I'll review them when I'll read them again I sometimes wonder how much of an active imagination you have to write such descriptions of houses I liked the designer Craig I'm waiting to see how Carly and Timothy are going to go there's still hope for her. and I'm really happy about Craig's mom she deserved it 100%. I wish I could write more but I don't have an imagination as active as yours but you painted a good picture in my mind thank you for the nice chapter Gary -
Prompt 392 What the hell are you watching?
Victor Gutte commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 392 What the hell are you watching?
Hey onkel Tim I am guilty of binge reading all the chapters without leaving reviews I loved the chapter I did plan to read meta but seeing that there are about 6 books already would take quite a time to catch on I can see why Rob wanted to go study in California as much as you love your family, being independent is really important sorry for leaving a short review but seeing as how my hand already hurts from over working it today I need to rest it for now I'll be reviewing the chapters I missed later though I still need to catch up on other stories as well so, it'll be a while -
Chapter 57 Revealing Duplicate Hands
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 57 Revealing Duplicate Hands
Hey Gary I just finished binge reading all the chapters I missed. Sorry, I didn't review them yet but I wanted to be the one to review a chapter first I did once eat a macaroni and cheese casserole my sister prepared and it was great I am sure all the others taste great as well (my family's vegetarian and so am I, by association ) Two puppies YAY!!!! I loved that bit I hope we will be meeting "Patch" soon you really did turn Candy around, like a total 180. but yeah most of the times, when people redeem themselves, they are not given a chance and I feel happy that this is not the case here coming to the chapter, this one is all about love and showing it and about love scenes, DAMMIT, you made me feel like guilty because I felt like I was intruding on a beautiful exchange between two people in love I also want to take this moment to tell you that another thing I love about your stories in general is that you maintain the chapter titles and the chapter notes in theme with the story title and yet make them connect to the content I have always meant to tell you this but I keep forgetting . anyways thank you for a new chapter Gary it was a nice surprise -
Faris and James: The Beginning
Victor Gutte commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Faris and James: The Beginning
I cannot actually believe I never reviewed Delicious I have always loved the story and it always puts a smile on my face reading about them Trying to imagine James on a bike hilding an umbrella made me laugh I did feel like calling Faris a D*** because he let James go but well, you made it all worth. I kind of smiled reading "I think you’ve broken my dick, you stupid prick!" line just in what position was he for James to run over it This was a fun chapter and yay for NicVic for suggesting this I will try to review other chapters as well and in the meanwhile wishing for a new chapter as well thank you Tj -
Chapter 4 White Water Rafting
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 4 White Water Rafting
Reading this and the previous chapters kinda made me reminisce myself in my late teens . Carly needs to understand that just because her sibling happened to be blessed with better looks, they didn't make him the loved twin. He was "liked" more because of his attitude but I am sure their mom loved them equally. In my late teens, I battled with serious depression, so much that it strongly affected my studies. My sister around the same time successfully completed her bachelor degree with honors and was able to land a good job. Until the past year when she got married, I used to think that she achieved all that because she's straight and didn't have deal with being gay like I was. I used to have strong feelings of jealousy towards everything she had. My relatives and parents' comparison between us further fueled them. Only the last year, I got to realize that despite of being born into the same family, you don't necessarily need to have the same destiny as your siblings. Different people need to work in different intensities to achieve their dreams. The path may not be easy for everyone . Only then, I was able to acknowledge that my sister achieved things not because she's lucky or straight but because of her hard work and persuasion. It is only after that I was actually able to be happy for her and feel proud of her achievements. That made me understand that I may not have a path as straightforward as hers and only after that was I able battle depression and make decisions about my life. So, I think that unless Carly stops feeling scornful about her twin, she will not be able to ... Also, I am kinda doubtful about the ages of the characters. Since it has been said that Bailey was conceived when they were in high school and Bailey is about 2 years old, that would generally put them about 21??? Sorry for the lengthy review Gary this and the past couple chapters made me remember what I was like before and that kinda made me feel bad . But the story is great and I can't wait to read more -
Chapter 8- Prompt 15 Free Verse- Beautiful Mess
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8- Prompt 15 Free Verse- Beautiful Mess
Reading this poem would make anyone understand that this has been written by someone who misses their lover I could totally imagine you sitting in a rocking chair (They are really great, don't judge ) reminiscing your time together you did prove that love is not related to age and is just as magical in any age reading this make me want to know how love feels like thank you for sharing such a personal thing I also take this opportunity to congratulate you and your loved one for what you have All the Best -
Chapter 1 Murky Depths
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Murky Depths
Promising start to a great story . I liked the way how characters were told. I get a feeling that Carly is jealous of Craig who happens to be better looking and maybe a better achiever as well I also have a feeling that this will cause more trouble in the future Now that it is known Jared has feelings for Craig, how strong are those feelings and are those the reason why he and Carly divorced? I have a feeling that Craig also happens to have feelings for Jared subconsciously but they stayed buried because of Harlan speaking of Harlan, he sounded like a strong character but it was a shame to not to get to know him better I also noticed that Carly still refers to Jared as "her husband" which means she is still obsessed with him oh! and I love Craig's mom she was amazing overall, congratulations on a new story and I can't wait to read more. thank you -
Prompt 460 Who invited you?
Victor Gutte commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 460 Who invited you?
I loved the chapter onkel Tim I am sometimes amused by Nelson's obliviousness to his surroundings. He atleast has a reason in Eric now . I like Trevor he's really mature. I feel bad for him, maybe he should get a boyfriend too I am waiting to see how Rob's going to deal with the bigots (sometimes I wonder what Rob's full name is ) so, is Eric going to be GSA's next president that would be fun, really fun thanks for the chapter onkel Tim -
It moved me to tears again learning more about what you had to go through always does that. My respect for you keeps increasing everytime I learn more about your life. every happiness you have is something you have truly deserved With lots of love Victor
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Awww!!! This was such a fun chapter onkel Tim ... I really had a lot of fun trying to pronunce danish words I am really happy to see the affection both Chris and Jacob has for their respective partners and how they are respectful towards their bond with their sibling . I am waiting to see how Kristin's encounter with Christian goes I do want to see how the rings look in real and know if I inagined them right though I am slightly confused about the shop owner calling both Evan and Chris sir and their reactions to it is there some sort of background to it??? and I loved the confession by Russ can't wait to see the reactions and finally nice touch with the use of emoji it was ..... and now the hungry birds moment; cheep, cheep, cheep .... thanks for the chapter onkel Tim
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This was such a sad chapter Lit ...I definitely am looking forward to knowing more of Kel ...if Merrick loves Jensen then the pain he must have felt seeing him cry would have been so unbearable I wish I could write more but my hand really hurts now (I sprained it bad) ...but it was a terrific chapter Lit
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Chapter 49 The Big Reveal
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 49 The Big Reveal
see, this is the problem with replying late everyone already says what you want to say I loved the scene where eyebrows claimed Michael reminded me of Cherry as a puppy and I fell laughing when Michael was about to kick Bodie's butt and I absolutely loved what Mike Sr. said but fun things aside, it was sad to know that bodie has got a scar himself or Kendall having those dreams ... thank you for a great chapter -
Chapter 48 A New Player at the Table
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 48 A New Player at the Table
This chapter necessarily could have been the situation in which Michael and Kendall are teenagers and fall in love. I loved the confession between them and I totally love "eyebrows" even I hope M & K pick her up and I am interested in knowing what Michael has to talk to the current owners ... I have felt that Nate went through more than what was told and they have been confirmed although I am surprised Bodie could understand why it appeared I wanted to write more but I am quite tired right now and sleep is claiming me but I really loved the Nate's POV and also that there's a chapter about Nodie ... waiting for the next one -
Yay!!!! first one to review ....honestly, I loved the chapter Lit, Merrick's persistence finally proved to work and Jenson's shell has a crack ...I hope to know whatever is going on with J to be known soon ....maybe I should start by reviewing the 1st chapter first ...I'll do it soon ...great chapter Lit and a really hot one at that ...looking forward to read more
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Chapter 47 Learning a New Game
Victor Gutte commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 47 Learning a New Game
Firstly, I remember seeing the 1981 Chevy pickup in a vintage cars expo it was quite beautiful ...no wonder big mike loves it so much ....but I was always confused for what people living in cities would need a pickup for I love Nodie while I never understand teenage love (I was a really boring teenager) , I could quite relate to the attraction that is intense enough to make your mouth dry and take the words of mouth , Mira"s conversation with Michael says that Not only she knows Bodie is gay and is okay with it but also that she is comfortable and used to it as well Michael's conversation with Kendall is quite hilarious especially this part here I was like OMG, he actually might have done that or would do that i a couple of years .....and when Michael asked Kendall to be romantic, I was like this is going to be fun and it was ....this was such a cheerful chapter Gary thank you
