Victor Gutte

Hey Gary I just finished binge reading all the chapters I missed. Sorry, I didn't review them yet but I wanted to be the one to review a chapter first I did once eat a macaroni and cheese casserole my sister prepared and it was great I am sure all the others taste great as well (my family's vegetarian and so am I, by association ) Two puppies YAY!!!! I loved that bit I hope we will be meeting "Patch" soon you really did turn Candy around, like a total 180. but yeah most of the times, when people redeem themselves, they are not given a chance and I feel happy that this is not the case here coming to the chapter, this one is all about love and showing it and about love scenes, DAMMIT, you made me feel like guilty because I felt like I was intruding on a beautiful exchange between two people in love I also want to take this moment to tell you that another thing I love about your stories in general is that you maintain the chapter titles and the chapter notes in theme with the story title and yet make them connect to the content I have always meant to tell you this but I keep forgetting . anyways thank you for a new chapter Gary it was a nice surprise

I cannot actually believe I never reviewed Delicious I have always loved the story and it always puts a smile on my face reading about them Trying to imagine James on a bike hilding an umbrella made me laugh I did feel like calling Faris a D*** because he let James go but well, you made it all worth. I kind of smiled reading "I think you’ve broken my dick, you stupid prick!" line just in what position was he for James to run over it This was a fun chapter and yay for NicVic for suggesting this I will try to review other chapters as well and in the meanwhile wishing for a new chapter as well thank you Tj

Reading this and the previous chapters kinda made me reminisce myself in my late teens . Carly needs to understand that just because her sibling happened to be blessed with better looks, they didn't make him the loved twin. He was "liked" more because of his attitude but I am sure their mom loved them equally. In my late teens, I battled with serious depression, so much that it strongly affected my studies. My sister around the same time successfully completed her bachelor degree with honors and was able to land a good job. Until the past year when she got married, I used to think that she achieved all that because she's straight and didn't have deal with being gay like I was. I used to have strong feelings of jealousy towards everything she had. My relatives and parents' comparison between us further fueled them. Only the last year, I got to realize that despite of being born into the same family, you don't necessarily need to have the same destiny as your siblings. Different people need to work in different intensities to achieve their dreams. The path may not be easy for everyone . Only then, I was able to acknowledge that my sister achieved things not because she's lucky or straight but because of her hard work and persuasion. It is only after that I was actually able to be happy for her and feel proud of her achievements. That made me understand that I may not have a path as straightforward as hers and only after that was I able battle depression and make decisions about my life. So, I think that unless Carly stops feeling scornful about her twin, she will not be able to ... Also, I am kinda doubtful about the ages of the characters. Since it has been said that Bailey was conceived when they were in high school and Bailey is about 2 years old, that would generally put them about 21??? Sorry for the lengthy review Gary this and the past couple chapters made me remember what I was like before and that kinda made me feel bad . But the story is great and I can't wait to read more

Reading this poem would make anyone understand that this has been written by someone who misses their lover I could totally imagine you sitting in a rocking chair (They are really great, don't judge ) reminiscing your time together you did prove that love is not related to age and is just as magical in any age reading this make me want to know how love feels like thank you for sharing such a personal thing I also take this opportunity to congratulate you and your loved one for what you have All the Best

Promising start to a great story . I liked the way how characters were told. I get a feeling that Carly is jealous of Craig who happens to be better looking and maybe a better achiever as well I also have a feeling that this will cause more trouble in the future Now that it is known Jared has feelings for Craig, how strong are those feelings and are those the reason why he and Carly divorced? I have a feeling that Craig also happens to have feelings for Jared subconsciously but they stayed buried because of Harlan speaking of Harlan, he sounded like a strong character but it was a shame to not to get to know him better I also noticed that Carly still refers to Jared as "her husband" which means she is still obsessed with him oh! and I love Craig's mom she was amazing overall, congratulations on a new story and I can't wait to read more. thank you

I loved the chapter onkel Tim I am sometimes amused by Nelson's obliviousness to his surroundings. He atleast has a reason in Eric now . I like Trevor he's really mature. I feel bad for him, maybe he should get a boyfriend too I am waiting to see how Rob's going to deal with the bigots (sometimes I wonder what Rob's full name is ) so, is Eric going to be GSA's next president that would be fun, really fun thanks for the chapter onkel Tim

It moved me to tears again learning more about what you had to go through always does that. My respect for you keeps increasing everytime I learn more about your life. every happiness you have is something you have truly deserved With lots of love Victor

Awww!!! This was such a fun chapter onkel Tim ... I really had a lot of fun trying to pronunce danish words I am really happy to see the affection both Chris and Jacob has for their respective partners and how they are respectful towards their bond with their sibling . I am waiting to see how Kristin's encounter with Christian goes I do want to see how the rings look in real and know if I inagined them right though I am slightly confused about the shop owner calling both Evan and Chris sir and their reactions to it is there some sort of background to it??? and I loved the confession by Russ can't wait to see the reactions and finally nice touch with the use of emoji it was ..... and now the hungry birds moment; cheep, cheep, cheep .... thanks for the chapter onkel Tim

This was such a sad chapter Lit ...I definitely am looking forward to knowing more of Kel ...if Merrick loves Jensen then the pain he must have felt seeing him cry would have been so unbearable I wish I could write more but my hand really hurts now (I sprained it bad) ...but it was a terrific chapter Lit

see, this is the problem with replying late everyone already says what you want to say I loved the scene where eyebrows claimed Michael reminded me of Cherry as a puppy and I fell laughing when Michael was about to kick Bodie's butt and I absolutely loved what Mike Sr. said but fun things aside, it was sad to know that bodie has got a scar himself or Kendall having those dreams ... thank you for a great chapter

This chapter necessarily could have been the situation in which Michael and Kendall are teenagers and fall in love. I loved the confession between them and I totally love "eyebrows" even I hope M & K pick her up and I am interested in knowing what Michael has to talk to the current owners ... I have felt that Nate went through more than what was told and they have been confirmed although I am surprised Bodie could understand why it appeared I wanted to write more but I am quite tired right now and sleep is claiming me but I really loved the Nate's POV and also that there's a chapter about Nodie ... waiting for the next one

Yay!!!! first one to review ....honestly, I loved the chapter Lit, Merrick's persistence finally proved to work and Jenson's shell has a crack ...I hope to know whatever is going on with J to be known soon ....maybe I should start by reviewing the 1st chapter first ...I'll do it soon ...great chapter Lit and a really hot one at that ...looking forward to read more

Firstly, I remember seeing the 1981 Chevy pickup in a vintage cars expo it was quite beautiful ...no wonder big mike loves it so much ....but I was always confused for what people living in cities would need a pickup for I love Nodie while I never understand teenage love (I was a really boring teenager) , I could quite relate to the attraction that is intense enough to make your mouth dry and take the words of mouth , Mira"s conversation with Michael says that Not only she knows Bodie is gay and is okay with it but also that she is comfortable and used to it as well Michael's conversation with Kendall is quite hilarious especially this part here I was like OMG, he actually might have done that or would do that i a couple of years .....and when Michael asked Kendall to be romantic, I was like this is going to be fun and it was ....this was such a cheerful chapter Gary thank you

it's not really about the situation right now things will change if the attitudes of people is correct ...and the attitudes of the people here is not good and the things wouldn't get better either, but rather worse

I loved the chapter Gary Kendall will be a great Dad it feels bad to know the kind of things Nate has been through but they helped him grow strong ....and abuse of any kind will have it's effect for a considerable amount of time not to meation he's still very young ....Kendall's reaction to Michael calling Nate a corpse was quite realistic and reminded me of my mom .....Michael having difficulty explaining things is quite understandable since he hasn't done anything of such previously .....and finally I definitely want to see where Nodie (Nate and Bodie) will end ....thanks for a lovely chapter Gary

this chapter was so relatable Gary considering what I have been through the past few days, I will have to admit that I have been dreaming things similar to what Nate has faced happen to me as well. that made the chapter more understandable ....Nate's lucky that he has an amazing support system in his uncles and grandparents ......I have to admit that while Mark and Megan selling their business and moving to Ontario sounds great but I am unsure of the economic complications that would arise maybe it's just me ......I can't wait to see where will Nate and Bodie's story go .....anyways thanks for the surprise chapter Gary

you were looking really cute in the last picture Caz .....I would have adopted you if you were still that young

this was a really nice chapter TJ , I still am not entirely sure of Ryan but that might just be me ....the sex scene was quite hot maybe they could build something stronger than just sex ....I'm waiting for more

maybe we are seeing the real Nate now , the one that is confident, exuberant and a happy teenager who is mature enough to know what he wants that's generally how a person would be with his support system ....a person will start to show his/her vulnerable side when they feel lonely or have their trust broken by those who they consider a rock ...that same person starts to become insecure and lose their self-confidence if it continues it was nice to see Nate and Bodie .....although I never seem to understand teenage love ....it maybe because of my personal experience though ....but I am definitely willing to see where their story goes ....while Mark did abuse Nate in a way, I think that Nate would be better with staying in Edmonton if Mark is actually going to change.....that said I think that Nate should change schools though .....I know that I am going to ramble, so I'll stop here. BTW really nice chapter Gary

I am intrigued to read more ...and I am interested in wanting to know which way Sim's journey is headed ....you need to update soon ....oh and nice story TJ

Zeil seems like a highly enthusiastic and super fun kid even though he's older than Lor .....going to the next chap to see their talk

it's interesting to know that Lor is weaker when it comes to physical .....I wonder if they have anything different from humans for Dillon not to identify even after Lor took his robe off

I'm pretty sure that Lor was thinking wit his second head ...if he has it ....but at least he stopped himself ....so we can see that he has a chance

well it is quite justified what Dillon's feeling .....finding that you're turned on by an alien would freak anyone, regardless of whatever gender they are ....going to the next one

I am quite interested in the concept of mates .....so I have a feeling I would love this story .....trying really hard not to run to read other chapters without reviewing