Victor Gutte

...... ..... ..... ..... ....... After reading the chapter, I am unsure of what to say..... let's start from the beginning .... when I read the title jackpot, I sort of expected ....it to happen ..... and your warning about the chapter containing sexual situations ....but I should say that you're a master at writing love scenes , the way they are concerned about each other is wonderful ..... and the love meaking feels like an extension of their love and not a sex scene and as far as the baby is concerned, Michael was being right in saying that the baby is the son of both ..... I somehow have a feeling that the baby will grow closer to Kendall than Michael ...... and besides relations are not made by blood, they are made when we think of the other person as our own ........ okay enough ranting ....... this was such a beautiful chapter Gary , thank you for giving us this

Hey Carlos!! , I found this story today and found that it is part of a series ...I just caught up and really love the story ......BTW....I don't really remember meeting José-María or I might have missed him ...... and I really liked the way you got The Trevor Project into the story ....thank you for such a nice story

....... .......okay! I seriously don't know what to say ......the date was really nice though what I remembered the most was K's previous date with Amanda .....it was nice to see that K was mature to understand himself and didn't want to drag someone else into his mess ......I felt that Amanda was an intelligent woman as she showed no real surprise when K talked to her ...... the sex talk (oops! the love talk!! ) they both had showed the anticipation for the act to happen as well as for it to be a memorable and pleasurable experience...it also reaffirmed how much they cared for each other ..... and as far as Candy is concerned , in the beginning I saw a selfish, manipulative woman who doesn't like it when people messed up with her plans .....but now I see an ignored daughter who wanted the approval of her father, someone who doesn't know what a real relationship is like ...... in the ultrasound, I got a feeling that she was purposefully trying to detach herself from the baby as she knows he is not going to be with her .....because it is hard to not get attached to someone growing inside you.... my sister got really attached to her baby even if it was for a few days and took it really hard ..... and the baby is a boy???? A BOY!!!! .....I was so hoping for a girl , she would totally have both her dads on their heels .....anyways, thank you for the fun but somewhat serious chapter , love ......Victor

wow Drew!!! , it was exactly similar to how it was like mine. though in my case I was not really bothered by the help box ....there were times I found myself staying awake the whole night to complete a story as I was unable to sleep since my mind was full of the story . I've read so many stories as a ghost...oops! i.e. guest though after becoming an actual member, I really did not do as much reading as in the past both due to me not having much time in real life and my time on GA is spent socializing rather than reading but both are equally fun anyways ^_^ . there are so many awesome stories as a ghost I wanted to review or read again but I've forgotten most of their names or some of them became premium ....I might need to get a premium membership at one point .... overall, I just wanted to say that I never expected to find so many nice friends and such a great family in a reading community I guess things happen in the least expected way but in the best way possible

well onkel Tim....I didn't really expect you to be scared by my but any ways I think that this chapter shows how much of a protective older brother can Rob be ....and how much supportive all the parents are . you also provided a good insight of GSA ... overall a good and slightly serious (in a nice way) chapter ....thank you onkel Tim

dammit Gary!!! you made me cry so much ( tears of happiness though) .....when Mikey stared to propose I pretty much ran into the bathroom to squeal even though I'm quite sure that I was well heard all things aside I'm really happy for Janine and Lanny , they deserve to be happy and this conversation between both of them though totally accurate ....... the love between two couples is exactly same regardless of the gender and sexual orientation ......it is unfortunate that gay people have to fight for the recognition of their love and about marriage.....totally relatable.....I totally keep dreaming of getting married , maybe it's due to the reason that it is happening since so long and makes us feel that our love and relationship is complete .... Anyways, thanks for the cute and yet meaningful chapter Gary

this time I don't really have many words to say Gary but this poem is really beautiful

sorry for not being able to leave an elobarate review Gary but I just am not in a stage to leave a good review now . reading this chapter today got me the required smile today and I am really thankful for it . P.S. you can bring a bigger smile to my face if you give me a scene where Ace and Deuce take another step in thier love-making *hides behind a curtain* and also explain the context of the names Ace and Deuce

these series are fun to read , I loved these li'l snippets say, is officer Espinosa named after Drew? I just felt that both are quite similiar

this letter was really touching Gary. Caitlyn achievements before her accepting herself and transition have inspired me to achieve something in my life and follow my dreams. my mom says that people always try to go out of their way to be mean and insulting to those persons they are jealous of. I may not be from the 1900's but being from a country where you can go to jail for sex with a person of same gender, I do understand a little bit of what the LGBTQ+ people during that era might have felt. if you haven't sent this letter to Caitlyn, then you should consider doing so . it was a beautifully thought and written letter Gary and thank you for sharing it with us

well I wrote a nice and elaborate review but lost it just before posting *THANK YOU internet connection* so now I am just saying that this is such a nice story and I'll do an overall review in CC forum later Tak for den dejlige kapitel og elsker dig &

I really wish that some day candy realises what she sold away because then the guilt inside her will kill her slowly, after all feeling guilty is the biggest punishment a person could ever face. I understand why Michael has difficulties talking to her, anyone would be disgusted to face such a heartless and selfish person. I almost felt like jumping right into the story, pulling the phone from Michael and telling candy that both our men would make her regret the day she was born if anything happens to the baby . anyways bad things aside, seeing Lanny become a better person is a nice thing and Kendall has proved that he is good with people and this time Kendall made me feel like him this time, though I wouldn't as I don't want to incur the wrath of a fat ass...oops...badass police officer . loved the chapter Gary

wow onkel Tim!!...wow!! 2 chapters in such a short span, I like it . all things aside I think this chapter shows how close the Perry brothers are, Jazz and Nel are really close enough to be brothers as well. it feels nice to see how Rob values Eric's opinions in his personal matters. I almost feel that he meddles in Eric's relationship because he thinks that it's his right to do so even though it's all in good sense. my prediction about the reason for which Eric stayed in the closet turned out to be quite true after all . anyway tak for kapitel onkel tim, elsker dig... knus og kram

YAY!! I finally get my present. thank you onkel Tim.... you made me really happy . while it may seem that we have known them for ages, Eric and Nelson's relationship is really young (barely 72 hours long) . you have captured the feelings in a new and budding relation quite well as well as let them behave like teenagers. their interest in exploring but also the need to make it work was told quite perfectly. Eric may have more similarities with his brother than he thinks ...not that it is a bad thing . I liked the way Nel was trying to be sensible but had difficulties in doing so . the shower scene was perfect, if they had tried to take it further there it would have been quite rushed and I'm sure that they wouldn't want that . besides I feel that Nel wants to take things slow because he wants to get to know and understand Eric and strengthen their relationship before the big step happens . anyways tak onkel Tim, elske dig

I really loved the chapter Gary . my mom always said that people don't become your own just because they are blood-related to you, but they'll become yours when you really consider them to be your own. it maybe the reason why the relation between life-partners is the strongest of all. I felt really proud of Carson in this chapter and I for some strange reason understood Michael's fears. I love how Kendall seems to understand what goes in Mikey's mind. it's llike a match made in heaven..oops i.e. Gary the god of writing . BTW Gary you should really tell Michael that having a fat ass is a lot better than having a flat ass

well even I get a weird feeling of discomfort seeing stretched ears, they are a real turnoff. at least the 21 year old Nelson doesn't have a huge stretch , so that's a relief

of course Lit, you did not notice his ears because you were busy noticing other things

interesting

well we could play......monopoly, yes monopoly

character

yeah, it is really quiet here

actually, even I have my left ear pierced but it isn't stretched like his

one

precious

well he got his ears pierced , must be due to his Boyfriend's persuasion