Victor Gutte

it's not really about the situation right now things will change if the attitudes of people is correct ...and the attitudes of the people here is not good and the things wouldn't get better either, but rather worse

I loved the chapter Gary Kendall will be a great Dad it feels bad to know the kind of things Nate has been through but they helped him grow strong ....and abuse of any kind will have it's effect for a considerable amount of time not to meation he's still very young ....Kendall's reaction to Michael calling Nate a corpse was quite realistic and reminded me of my mom .....Michael having difficulty explaining things is quite understandable since he hasn't done anything of such previously .....and finally I definitely want to see where Nodie (Nate and Bodie) will end ....thanks for a lovely chapter Gary

this chapter was so relatable Gary considering what I have been through the past few days, I will have to admit that I have been dreaming things similar to what Nate has faced happen to me as well. that made the chapter more understandable ....Nate's lucky that he has an amazing support system in his uncles and grandparents ......I have to admit that while Mark and Megan selling their business and moving to Ontario sounds great but I am unsure of the economic complications that would arise maybe it's just me ......I can't wait to see where will Nate and Bodie's story go .....anyways thanks for the surprise chapter Gary

you were looking really cute in the last picture Caz .....I would have adopted you if you were still that young

this was a really nice chapter TJ , I still am not entirely sure of Ryan but that might just be me ....the sex scene was quite hot maybe they could build something stronger than just sex ....I'm waiting for more

maybe we are seeing the real Nate now , the one that is confident, exuberant and a happy teenager who is mature enough to know what he wants that's generally how a person would be with his support system ....a person will start to show his/her vulnerable side when they feel lonely or have their trust broken by those who they consider a rock ...that same person starts to become insecure and lose their self-confidence if it continues it was nice to see Nate and Bodie .....although I never seem to understand teenage love ....it maybe because of my personal experience though ....but I am definitely willing to see where their story goes ....while Mark did abuse Nate in a way, I think that Nate would be better with staying in Edmonton if Mark is actually going to change.....that said I think that Nate should change schools though .....I know that I am going to ramble, so I'll stop here. BTW really nice chapter Gary

I am intrigued to read more ...and I am interested in wanting to know which way Sim's journey is headed ....you need to update soon ....oh and nice story TJ

Zeil seems like a highly enthusiastic and super fun kid even though he's older than Lor .....going to the next chap to see their talk

it's interesting to know that Lor is weaker when it comes to physical .....I wonder if they have anything different from humans for Dillon not to identify even after Lor took his robe off

I'm pretty sure that Lor was thinking wit his second head ...if he has it ....but at least he stopped himself ....so we can see that he has a chance

well it is quite justified what Dillon's feeling .....finding that you're turned on by an alien would freak anyone, regardless of whatever gender they are ....going to the next one

I am quite interested in the concept of mates .....so I have a feeling I would love this story .....trying really hard not to run to read other chapters without reviewing

interesting start , I'm looking forward to meeting Dillon and see what's in store for them .....a nice introduction to Lor as well ....a nice chapter overall Caz

I didn't realize I missed this story of yours . I am going to read it slowly though, so that I would be able to leave a proper review for the chapters

I don't understand poems normally but I still see how much Michael loves you ......the commitment you both have is really inspiring ......I thank Michael and here's a for him from me and another for you

I have glasses too ...looks like we match in many ways ....I haven't changed mine in years, the colour is starting to fade now .....maybe I should consider getting one myself

I don't know why but for some reason unknown, I expected it to be you to post a story when Gary spoke about an "exciting new writer" .....the first chapter was really nice ....and left a lot of questions in my mind about Jensen's "memories" ......now I am going to start bugging you for a new chapter if you don't post soon ....just ask Drew how bad I can get .....anyways congratulations on posting your first story Lit and wish you all the best

I just have finished catching up this story and liked it so far .....though I am not really a fan of a tri-mating ,your reasoning for having one worked pretty well .....waiting for the other chapters anxiously

I actually did not enjoy reading this chapter as I kept crying all the way through it , it kept reminding me of myself in my teenage years and my parents as well ....this well reflected my fears and feelings on the matter and reading them had my emotions in a wreck , .......I am sorry I am not able to write a better review but I still am unable to get myself into control ......in a really bad shape bawling like a baby .....but anyways you wrote a brilliant chapter Gary and thank you for it

Onkel Tim , you don't have to use cliffhangers to make us hungry birds want another chapter ...we would have wanted a new one as soon as we complete a chapter besides I was not really surprised by Rob having books in his room , some of my friends in real life are like that as well .....I found the title funny and I could understand the feelings of both Eric and Nelson .....for Eric, it must be scary about being out in front of so many people who can be quite judgmental ....let's not forget that he's only fifteen .....and I feel I understand Nelson's fears as well .... anyways thank you for the chapter Onkel Tim

I still haven't stopped , but these are happy tears ......Michael seems to love you so much , and it is evident by the way he was stubborn and how he never gave on you ......the wedding was amazing and so full of love ..... give Michael my for taking care of you dear brother .....and I wish you both all the happiness in your future ......gosh, I seriously need to stop right now or I'll end up with a running nose

this chapter is definitely an emotional ride , it was sad to see the normally happy Aceto family sad , but I believe that every grandparents who love their grandchild feels that way ..... on a positive note, I'm happy that Nate is is better now and surrounded by people who love and care for him ..... I'm pretty sure he'll turn to be a strong young man some day , and hope is a really strong thing Gary , it makes you do a lot of things ......I'm looking forward to see how Colleen reacts to M & K's engagement .....thanks for the chapter Gary

I did feel that something bad is going to happen when I read the title but didn't expect to meet a new character .....I get a feeling that Nate is going to be the prime focus for the neat chapters .....I expect to know more about what went on with him ......since you have told that a new chapter is soon to come, I am unable to type a coherent review right now .....I'll try to do a better one for the next chapter ...so, thank you for telling me that I missed the chapter

thank you Drewbear .....but I feel that I would never be able to replace their mother

but it was kinda sad as well when I think of their mother .....but thank you well I didn't want it to sound like a really sad one though