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    Chapter 8

    Carybr commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Thank God for Mrs. Rusho in 6th grade who was my cursive teacher!
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    Chapter 8

    Carybr commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Great chapter Mark! Why couldn’t Levi learn to ride a bicycle? What’s wrong with that? Good grief that woman was controlling
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    Chapter 5

    Carybr commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Really well done. I look forward to each chapter.
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    Neil is childish and Alex is whiny, which is in its own way childish. They are 30 going on 14.
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    Don't know why, but Evan reminds me a little of a dear friend (deceased some 15 years now) who began his career in music -adjacent fields (dogsbody to a conductor, best man to a violinist) and spent his main career as a set decorator in television. But Fred was never in the least heterosexual.
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    Fore!

    Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Fore!

    A fun and light hearted story. Thanks!
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    There is a strange shift in the story from first person to third person viewpoint, when Kent asks Marvin out. Not "the word settled between us". and also: Kent is looking at himself from outside, seeing how this happens, and observing his reaction.
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    So great to have a story that's at least tangential to your day job, so to speak. Neil seems to be very attractive to Alex, and he doesn't seem bothered by getting close and personal to gay men (or at least this one).
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    Very pleased by the story so far. Even though I have no interest in this type of music, the story and the people in it are interesting, so let's have the remaining chapters, please.
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    The Slow Vanishing

    Carybr commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Slow Vanishing

    Such a heartfelt story.
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    Do we have to see these characters go? Can there be an Art of living book 2?
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    A job well done but not quite finished. Bravo.
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    Can't wait for Saturday.
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    Cold dildo? Oh my no. Surely one warms it up first in a microwave.
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    Drawing class

    Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Drawing class

    I have never conceived of a dazzle of dicks to be a loose end.
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    Kit handled his parents well, as stressful as it was for him.
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    The Afterglow

    Carybr commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Afterglow

    This is just beautiful.
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    The Call

    Carybr commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Call

    Great chapter.
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    Dare I say it, this chapter was definitely a work of Art?
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    Two Worlds

    Carybr commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Two Worlds

    Great chapter. Kit's Father is coming around, slowly. Kit might have a home to come to.
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    Cute chapter! These guys are acting their ages, unlike those 14 year olds in some other stories.
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    Definitely want to read Lewis and Charlie discover a murder.
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    At last there is a glimmer of a way forward.
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    Planning the Move

    Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Planning the Move

    Thanks for another great chapter.
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    Missing?

    Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Missing?

    Good chapter. Makes me wonder what’s next?
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