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  1. Carybr
    Kit handled his parents well, as stressful as it was for him.
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    The Afterglow

    Carybr commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Afterglow

    This is just beautiful.
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    The Call

    Carybr commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Call

    Great chapter.
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    Dare I say it, this chapter was definitely a work of Art?
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    Two Worlds

    Carybr commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Two Worlds

    Great chapter. Kit's Father is coming around, slowly. Kit might have a home to come to.
  6. Carybr
    Cute chapter! These guys are acting their ages, unlike those 14 year olds in some other stories.
  7. Carybr
    Definitely want to read Lewis and Charlie discover a murder.
  8. Carybr
    At last there is a glimmer of a way forward.
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    Planning the Move

    Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Planning the Move

    Thanks for another great chapter.
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    Missing?

    Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Missing?

    Good chapter. Makes me wonder what’s next?
  11. Carybr
    Really fun chapter - who knew that one could get up to so much at the Garden Centre?
  12. Carybr
    The scene of PJ purchasing a platter with a helmet and truncheon for Pericles is just the best!
  13. Carybr
    Thank you so much for this great story Lee. You are a gifted writer.
  14. Carybr
    Really appreciate the extra work to make the story realistic. Thanks!
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    Epilogue

    Carybr commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Epilogue

    Lovely ending!
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    History Lesson

    Carybr commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in History Lesson

    Great story. I am sure I have read it before but can’t recall where. Thanks
  17. Carybr
    Another delightful chapter. Loved the slice of life with PJ and Joss at home. It makes them real people instead of cartoon characters.
  18. Carybr
    This was a wonderful story and I look forward to reading more of your writing!
  19. Carybr
    Another suspenseful chapter. Keep it up!
  20. Carybr

    Chapter 3

    Carybr commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Jody needs a couple more fillings.
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    Out and about

    Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Out and about

    Oh my God! Why didn't Charlie call Louis when Aunt Daphne was murdered???
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    Chapter 2

    Carybr commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Oh Willem, beware of being another Cassandra, whose truths were never believed! This is great, and I shall relish the story as it unfolds. Kudos to the author!
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    A Runner's Knot

    Carybr commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in A Runner's Knot

    Red hot.
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    Chapter 30

    Carybr commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Chapter 30

    Thank you, wonderful story.
  25. Carybr

    Prologue

    Carybr commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Prologue

    I like SF but not much of a fantasy fan. (And I know a lot of people can't tell the difference.) The sort of fantasy I do get into usually isn't the traditional dark lords, castles, dragons, etc. kind. But, I will give it the read through because I have found a good author can overcome all my dislikes. I sure hope those people (above) who have opted-out of reading will give your work (or at least this one) a second chance.
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