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This has been very intense and I do not see how it can be wrapped up in the next chapter. But I will be here to read it!
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What a delightful chapter! Arvid is a teen gay Viking, from a conservative nudist Swedish family. Vince turns out to be unhappily in the closet. (Always knew he was unhappy about something.) Venetia is an unobservant busybody matchmaker, a would-be Emma. And like Emma, she is trying to match up people who have already found their mate. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Holiday plans & stalking panic
Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Holiday plans & stalking panic
Jasper seems to be living up to his name: a type of impure silica rock (usually red or brown), which though rough in the wild can be polished up a bit. -
Don’t know why Lucas didn’t tell the judge about being assaulted by his uncle. That would prevent being placed with him.
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Another day in the life of TJ as he meets his brother/father's soon-to-be in-laws. I love this story!
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Another great story from Ronyx.
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The Horniman Centre presumably is where one goes bunburrying (see Importance of Being Earnest). I’m finishing up a stay at a University adjacent conference and ran across the there / their mistake in huge type on a screen in a presentation yesterday. Quite distracted me from the subject.
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I too had this image of Jasper and golden showers, except he had some young men with him….
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I love that phrase, "all taste and no satisfaction." Perfect description!
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In case anyone missed it, this chapter covers 4 years of conflict in a very summarized fashion. The above sentence, shortly into the section after the newspaper headline, needs a little work as it doesn't make sense as written. The woman referred to is Mrs. Patterson. It looks like there should be a "not" after "could", and there should be a verb somewhere after Mickey. I get the sense that Mr. Patterson is pleased Mickey had his ex on the defensive. It's nice to see Mickey turn from being an attorney on the offense to being a philanthropist.
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This story is getting more interesting with each chapter. I agree the unnamed black boy may be Alex's brother and I too hope there is romance in the air between them, with Alex playing a supporting part. Maybe he can get a romance going of his own with Sam?
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Beautiful story. Thanks.
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It's A Miracle To Find A New Life
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in It's A Miracle To Find A New Life
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Mermen’s willies and a Christmas shop
Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Mermen’s willies and a Christmas shop
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The first day of school is going perfectly awful for Neil. He does seem to have a firm friend in Sammy, and an ally in Ms. Shelton.
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My gay ex-husband & a symphony of semi-naked crotches
Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in My gay ex-husband & a symphony of semi-naked crotches
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Nice story. Thank you!
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This was a very lovely chapter, a good time had by all.
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Open Day and Photo Shoot
Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Open Day and Photo Shoot
It's great to hear that there are future installments written and planned. Of course your loyal readers can always use our imaginations to fill in the gaps of happenings off-stage, as it were. Thanks Summerabbacat for the Eartha Kitt song. I'm sure that will be in my head all day, and I couldn't ask for anything better. -
School Issues & Date Night
Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in School Issues & Date Night
I can just imagine all sorts of calumnies a Bible-basher might utter against a school staff member; needn't be homophobic in nature, just offensively personal. -
This is going to be great for him, as long as a politician with a magic marker doesn't disagree.
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I totally sympathise with Mickey. My stomach has the same reaction to salami and eggs.
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Have read this story elsewhere and it’s great. This appears to be a revision but without seeing them side by side I couldn’t say. Looking forward to seeing it again
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We know Jackie has already tried to put the blame on Ludo with the story of his so-called affair with that female which he totally ruined by turning out to be gay, how could he ruin her alibi like that? Her mind is probably working overtime trying to re-spin the blame on Ludo and Arthur now for her misdeeds. "My husband's a poof Milord and that's the root of the problem!"
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