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Parental duties & football practice
Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Parental duties & football practice
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Lunch-boxes and packages
Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Lunch-boxes and packages
Another shining story with great commentary. Come for the story, stay for the snark.- 13 comments
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I always love Ronyx’s stories.
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Such a wonderful story. Hope there are more chapters.
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Robert and Keith get to try out a new art form - new to them, opera. The opera the author gets them to, Katya Kabanova, is a very moving piece about a partnership that is so disastrous that by the end there are two deaths, a murder and a suicide...it's very gripping. And while Keith is watching this, he is trying to figure out how to resolve loose ends from his relationship with Maria....and struggling to define his relationship with Robert. Masterful chapter, Robert Hugill!
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I think Brian being with Uncle Louis for 4 hrs every week, even if only on a professional basis, is probably the best thing that could have happened to him in this situation.
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Thanks and blessings for this.
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This is one of those rare stories that inspires commentary that is as illuminating and entertaining as the story itself!
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2 1/2 paragraphs in the last chapter about Julia - that they met and liked to spend Saturdays together. Then this chapter open with regular sex between them. This is strange since Oscar couldn’t even look at a naked person in the past without getting very upset. Then Julia disappears with a lame excuse and ghosts Oscar. Again, Oscar has no reaction. Oscar is not acting consistently.
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I don’t think Oscar is homophobic at all. But there is nothing in the story that explains his physical reactions to events, and he expresses no remorse or concern when someone who was once his friend attempts suicide. This doesn’t make sense and I am done
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That’s it I am done. Couldn’t understand Oscar’s reaction to Rizen’s action earlier although I read it three times. Either there was more than was reported or there is something in Oscar’s past that caused Rizen’s actions to trigger the reaction, also not reported. Perhaps Oscar has some sort of disability, also not reported.
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The story keeps getting better.
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Wow, there is a bad storm with lots of damage. The lads jump in and spend the morning cleaning up the exteriors of the cottages around them. I'm impressed with their volunteerism and can-do spirit.
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Anniversaries! I wonder what Keith and Thomas will end up cerebrating. Their first date? Their first time having sex with each other? Moving in together? All worth celebrating.
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Phil is thinking about the past and is sorry for all the mistakes he made, but he doesn't see any other choices he could have made. He needs to forgive himself and move on.
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It's so nice to see the contrast between the two relationships. Keith and Thomas seem to have it right!
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Reading these stories, I sometimes get the impression of a James Bond-style villain, stroking a white cat and slavering over his Bond boys. Heyward definitely feels the type.
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Wow! Colin and Jason take Phil out to lunch, and he connects with an old flame. Do I sense a hint of romance in the air?
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The intriguing Mr Heyward
Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The intriguing Mr Heyward
Another nice addition to the Hugillverse! Deciding to meet the relatives.- 12 comments
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Love the humor in this one.
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The One That Changed It All
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The One That Changed It All
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Such sweet pillow talk.
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I have a hard time believing that a football coach can get away with sexual assault on female high school students, in this time of me-too. That school district is opening itself to some huge lawsuits.
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I was wondering that too, @Cane23. And, like many, I do love athletes in short shorts. Or tight uniforms, such as in baseball. Going to minor league games and sitting close to the action, watching those players in their 20s can be quite thrilling.
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Greg does need to learn how to diffuse situations; learning in high school is better than learning on the job in international relations.
