Avangelion

Don't worry, there will be more, although my process is somewhat slow during school periods. I am working as fast as I can to upload new chapters

I'd say "running all over the place" is somewhat of an understatement... Even I have issues keeping up and keeping them in line 😅

I am on it.... although a bit slow

Sasha Pacing. I needed to stop pacing. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t relax. This whole situation had twisted itself into a knot that I could not untwine. I promptly stopped and flopped down on the ground. I immediately regretted it. I’d barely hit the ground before yelping and grunting surrounded me. The two white pups were so full of energy. They climbed up on my back, pulled my ears, my tail. And every attempt I made to warn them of lasted for all of three seconds before they wer

First of all, thank you for the positive feedback, it is much appreciated. Second, I am amazed that you managed to point out all of my own pondering, which I haven't even solved yet, but I do guess that means even though this story is a first draft I managed to "convey the message". and you even wrote it so perfectly Thank you

I'm glad you liked it, and thank you, I do think I need it for this next chapter :,D

It's always a nice thing when you can contribute till the knowledge, so thank you I'm still trying to to work out the details of this whole 'other pack' stuff, but I've definitely put Tristan to overwork, the poor thing *LOL* But I am confident they will figure it eventually.

There will be more, don't worry... but you might have to wait a little before the next, academic assignments take up a lot of... well everything

indeed but hadn't really thought about them like that, so thank you ❤️

Tristan I slowly peeled open my eyes. Everything hurt like a bitch. Memories of what had happened gradually started to flood back, and I groaned. Shit. I rolled out of bed and slowly got to my feet. I wore a pair of PJ bottoms and didn’t bother putting on more clothes, just thinking about it made my muscles burn. I made my way toward the common area in search of Asha, but the whole building seemed vacated. Down the next hall towards the wing facing towards the mountains, I found one o the yo

wow, that was fast. I know the chapters are fairly short but still. anyway, I'm glad you liked it, the story will continue, I'm just a little slow due to the pressure of the world of academic writing *sigh*

yeah, one of the perks of being a university student... academic writing is killing my muse, and when I'm finally done with my academic writing, I'm too busted to acomplish any creative writing... But, fret not, I am working on the next chapter, it just takes a little while to get the gears going:D

Hehe... yeah, one might think...

Sasha I jerked up from where I’d been studying. The text on modern literature in front of me: completely forgotten. Something was wrong. My stomach plummeted. “Sasha?” Connor asked, looking up. “Pack up my stuff, yeah?” I asked and broke into a run. Outside, I heard the distant sound of a wolf howling. It wasn’t the pack howl, but even so, I felt the pull of the howl in every nerve of my body, a cry for help. Goosebumps raised along my arms, I had never felt so drawn to answer a howl

Don't worry, answers will come. But thanks for reminding me to remember the details

Tristan I was in a seriously bad mood. I snapped at everyone in the house. Over a pup. Fuck, I didn’t even know where to look for him. Christ, I was in deep water. I’d meant to stop him that day, after the party, but Asha had held me back. He’d argued that my approached apparently had been all wrong and Sasha probably needed some breathing space. With that, I had gone back to my bedroom to tidy up after my run around the territory and found the bedsheets smeared in Sasha’s seeds. If I had fo

Thanks for loving it ❤️ I'm so happy. I had so much fun writing that scene, Sasha doing his thing and then... "Yeah, I'm pissed at you, you get to clean that up" *LOL* Hope you will keep enjoying

He sure is definitely not your usual omega *smirk*. Mellow? Yeah, should kind of work on that... but it's a first draft, and i'm not all that close with Tristan... yet... heh, I tend to have favorites and forget the others. But thanks for pointing it out, I'll keep it in mind. I'd say Tristan is more confused and perplexed about Sasha's behavior than angry, I don't think he knows what to do with him. I guess I'll figure it out as I go along.

*Smirk* I'm not going to say to much since that would be a spoiler so I'll just be smirking. answers will come. As for Tristan singleing(?) him out, I'd be pissed too. Because of the size of the pack the dynamics is a bit different, and therefore for the alpha to pick one out of the crowd for apparently no reason at all? sure Sasha hooked up in his private space, I'd be pissed about that too, but why would the alpha forbid him drinking at a party? thats a bit odd. Their relationship is a bit confusing at the moment, for both of them. They don't know each other but are still drawn towards one another, and then there's that too, which just makes it all so much more confusing... leaving you a cliff hanger here *smirk*

Sasha I woke up in a bed that absolutely wasn’t my own, placed in a room that wasn’t in the slightest familiar. It took a moment before sleep east off my booze-hazed mind. I squinted around at my surroundings. Where the fuck was I? That’s when I noticed the smell. “Fuuuuuuck.” I groaned. I was in the alphas bed, it had to be his room. The scent was so intoxicating. I burrowed my face in the beddings, breathing in deep. The bed smelled like him and nothing but him. So he was without a pa

Tristan I was speechless – He’d just growled at me! I had been told off… by a pup. I was his alpha, for crying out loud, and even so, I could do nothing but watch him walk away, too shocked to follow. I huffed. I had never – Not even Asha growled at me like that! I wondered for a brief moment why anger didn’t surface, shouldn’t I be angry? I believed I should, I had punished others of my pack for less, like Nadine had been earlier that evening. Perhaps the confusion over the abrupt chan

Sasha Stella had totally abandoned me. I had spent half an hour prior, searching for her without luck. I had even tried to sniff her out, but that hadn’t gone so well either. Sniffing out someone with so many wolfs in the same place wasn’t easy, especially if she did not want to be found. I hoped that meant she had found what she’d come looking for. Once I had given up, leaving Stella to her schemes, I soon found myself in the middle of a conversation with a bunch of semi-friends from s

Tristan “You are such an idiot,” I rumbled at Asha, the annoyance evident in my voice. “You know I hate it when you call me that in front of others.” “But is he that? Others?” Asha threw back. I gave him a warning growl. “What is that supposed to mean, how can he be anything but?” Something pinched in my gut, a protest to my own words. What the hell had that feeling been? “Oh please… you were staring at him like he was a fucking trophy kill you wanted to take down.” I snorted at

It is not harsh at all, all kinds of feed back is highly appreciated, so thank you for taking the time to comment 🥰 You are absolutely right, I should probably have sent it past my editor 😰 one of the perks of being too eager, and so I am very sorry that you did not enjoy, not that I can say I blame you, yikes... and I will see to that the mistakes are corrected and make sure I reread everything before posting. However, I did type a note about this story being a first draft and there were bound to be errors along the way, so you should not have expected the read to be flawless. But I completely understand you, I too have skipped stories because of errors. Feel free to come by again, once I have the errors fixed and hopefully you will stay with me. Thank you again for taking your time Loves and hugses🤗

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