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    niiiice one... need to stay on this one:) need I mention the two time repeating? that was a little odd. things moved on a little fast though (but I'm used to that from my own stories:) on to chapter two, need to see how thing progress
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    One Friday night I stayed up longer than usual, and around 11:00 I heard the door slam open and loud voices. I got up to go greet Anikin and welcome him home. When I got to the hall it was silent and as I turned the corner I saw Anikin pressed up against the wall, in a deep kiss with another guy. Anikin must have felt my presence, because he opened his eyes and met my shocked gaze. He pushed the guy away and looked up at him with an apologizing smile. “Time for you to go home Jack,” he said wit
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    thanks... I'm horrible at starting stoies and with no one to read them before I submit, it's even harder... but I'll try my best, hope you will stay on it:)
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    Chapter 6

    Avangelion commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in Chapter 6

    God... for the last two days I have been on this story... yes literately two days, only stopped to eat, drink and sleep... I have bee through all kinds of emotions... I was somewhat skeptic in the beginning, but then again, I always am when I start a new book/story. But I have been amazed and ended up brawling my eyes out first with sadness then with happiness. Amazing writing. absolutely loved it.
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    Hello my name is Dominic; I’m 18 years old by now. I can’t say I had a bad life until now so you won’t hear me complain. When I was 4, my parents got divorced; I haven’t seen my dad much since then, every 3rd weekend or so and mom struggled for about a year on a low income as a waitress making her best to support me. By chance she met a new guy, Danny. I don’t remember much from this time, I was still young, but it was obvious that he had a lot of money; I had visited him with my mom during the
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    Dominic is put in a difficult situation as his mother is divorced. He ends up living with his succesful step-brother, and as time goes Dominic discovers his growing feelings of love for Anikin, which comes with uncertainties and problems. How to handle the feelings, does he confess, will Dominic have his love in the end? A sudden episode occurs and a swift turn of events follows. How will it turn out for the two of them?
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