Avangelion
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It's my first serious attempt to write a "wolf" story, so maybe that's the reason it seems different? I'm happy you liked it, thanks for reading 🥰
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Well... I actually have a bit put down, but only posted the first chapter in order to get this kind of feedback, so thank a million for sharing your thoughts. I hadn't really given this aspect much thought, definitely something to consider before my next post. I'm glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading 🥰
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I'm very happy you like it, I can only hope I won't be disappointing further on. thanks for reading 🥰
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Sasha I groaned and slumped over to rest my hand upon my arm on the table. This was the tenth time during the first hour of my study session with Stella. “This is getting ridiculous. Tell me what’s wrong?” She put her pencil down and leaned back in her chair. “I feel deprived,” I answered, now realizing how stupid it sounded. “Deprived – Of what?” “Sex… I’m sex-deprived!” Silence… Then Stella burst out laughing. “What are you talking about? You’ve never been missing partn
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Being at the bottom the pack hierarchy, Sasha is conflicted on an everyday basis. He does not feel like he belong, being a different species, being gay. His wolf wishes to protect but his human side wishes to surrender, only adding to his confusion. When he finds out he is drawn to the pack alpha, it only complicates things. Tristan knows how to run his pack, even though is has a lot of members, he is respected and no one dares to defy him. Until he comes across Sasha, the lowest ranked pack member who defiantly growled at him.
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Oh, my heart hurt at the end... I was starting to wonder whatr had happened for Kiorl to be the way he is about love... I want to cry for him....
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Maybach Exelero... I admit, after the first comment I had to google... and then I figured out who jethro is!!! Batman... he drives the batmobile... that is so awesome, damn it's a nice car... I'm really liking the story so far... I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship is going to turn out, I don't really dig Honey's character, I find him a little too meek and wanting to please everyone but himself, but perhaps this trait will come in handy later on?
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I am so hoping for all four of them ending up in bed together for hot stuff... I love this story... Thank you SO much ❤️
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I'm becoming real curious about whatever the sifts did that sentenced them all to be wiped out, I wonder if it has anything to do with Mick... but as long as things will go back down a hot sexy path at some point i'm happy 😅
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Okay... I have to admit that I semi followed your advice to skip those few chapters... But, I'm a sucker for this story and had to know what went down, so I skimmed. Icky... but very well written. I'm just happy that those three will come back into the picture, kind of outdid the fact that his glamour cracked... I'm one sad sucker for love
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Hmm.... I can't really decide whether I find Mick assholey or not... but considering everything... I'll give him the bennefit of the doubt. about his partners... I am split. I liked Guy, but this one seems good too... even more so, since he doesn't have the emotional baggage... I'm so torn... it's mean... I don't like it...
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I have been caught... 'feeling lucky' was my starting point, and in my irritation I thumbed through your other work, choosing the longest.. and damn... this is starting out good.... I'll do my best to comment when I remember... if not, I'll see you at the end... this is so exiting
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A Pretty Hard Situation
Avangelion commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Pretty Hard Situation
What??? the last chapter? do I really have to wait a whole week? But finally... I was beginning to think it was never going to happen... but seriously.. a buisness deal? I would've been pissed, but then again, Aidan is so smitten... they are so cute! I absolutely loved that they stayed at their witty selves even trough this more serious situation. But I am still a tad disappointed... where did the long awaited, much deserved spanking??????? 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 No I'm just kidding... maybe later, I will saty hanging in aticipation and hope. Loved it. And a thank you might be in place, I finally broke through my 'lack of inspiraton'period, so now I can finally get on with fixing my second draft😍 -
Hook, Line, And Sinker
Avangelion commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Hook, Line, And Sinker
I hope all their joking? about being "master" and "slave" will end in a good spanking... I seriously can's figure out whether they are joking or being serious... one minute it's all seriousness, the next it's a joke.... Stone and sparks are the perfect couble... so dorky 😆 they could both need a good spanking... just for the heck of it *LOL* -
In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
Avangelion commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
OMG!!!! I am having the best laughing fit ever... What are the odds of that happening... I think I would've replied with "yes sir" too... or pissing my pants.... OMG this is so FUNNY!!!! very well done... I saw it coming right away, but it didn't make it any less fun... ow, my stomach is hurting... Thank you so much, you have officially become my guru of the day 😍 -
Anikin dropped me off at school Monday morning on his way to work. I was fine by now and I needed to figure out what to do with my future. “Will you be fine getting back on your own?” Anikin asked across the seat. I leaned on the open car-door after getting out and smiled reassuringly. “I’ll be fine.” “Give me a call if anything comes up, okay!” I nodded and closed the door. Anikin pulled away from the curb and I started off towards the school. Sean met me at the gate and walked
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The drive home was strangely quiet. I was looking out through the window, watching the rainfall. So much had changed in such a short time. I wondered if my life would go back to the way it was before all this. I was afraid to confront my issues, afraid to put words to them. The accident had left me scared and unsure of myself. It had been easy when I was bedridden in the hospital, but the rehabilitation had been the first step to begin my life again and something had been triggered along the way
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You totally had me at "Now, will you come" the best part of the chapter... I love Deme. He's so tender and yet so aggressive in his actions. he kind of makes me forget they're just kids, he's the perfect contrast to Shane's awkwardness in a good way. looking forward to read more.
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I have been busy for ages now, but I have finally found the time to get working on the next chapter. So, hopefully you won't have to wait long And sorry to keep you hanging
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not long now. hopefully... Sorry for keeping you hanging
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I have been busy for ages now, but I have finally found the time to get working on the next chapter. So, hopefully you won't have to wait long And sorry to keep you hanging
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Sourin, the demon lord, was at his 300 year of rule. The time had come for him to travel his lands; he cared grately about his people and sought to himself that they faired well. Still he was the most powerful demon, in the last 300 years not one demon had come close to match his strength, and therefor he would not need an escort on his travel. Sourin was well known all over his kingdom, as a stern but honest ruler. But most of all he was known for his demonic beauty . Some even claimed he w
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In the beginning there was no reign, only balance. It was a world of magic, inhabited by demons and other mysterious beings. Of all the creatures the dragons were the mightiest. They were divided in four tribes to govern the elements and they were the ones who brought the balance to the world. But the threads of magic, woven for each of the tribes, had their whims. Only a few every generation were born with the ability to shift from their two legged appearance and become one of the original dr
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The story of a Demon and a dragon - and their journey to save the world by bringing the Jikkan Goyo (ying & yang) together again.
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Tina has already been thrown to jail - and she aint getting out anytime soon... I suck at this the whole law suit thing so I wanted to leave that bit out, sorry I'm so glad that you like my story, I love writng it - and I wish i had more time to write so I could update more often, but being a student and a single mom doesn't leave much time for anything else Thanks for the review and support:)
