Avangelion

Do you know the feeling of knowing your dreaming but you can’t wake up? Or those times you’re running away, but aren’t getting anywhere, just to find out that in fact your legs aren’t moving? I don’t know when I first noticed something was wrong. It was like I was standing behind a sheet of glass, coated with running water. Someone was on the other side, a hand flat against the glass, reaching out. With wonder, I’d raise my hand to place my palm against the glass, only my arm never moved. ‘Wha

“Arranged marriage?” Arienna wailed. Dad had come home from work today, quite delighted. A business partner, one of the big shots, had offered a meeting regarding marriage, for his daughter, A.K.A. my twin-sister Arienna. They were now in the living room discussing the matter, while I was seated in the kitchen with my sketchpad. The other party would be said business partner’s nephew. Apparently, he was to inherit his dad’s company, but his dad wouldn’t let him take over, unless he was married.

Wow, I was totally hooked from first line. It took me a little while to get the feeling of what kind of world the story is taking place, but then I hit the bottom and decided it didn't really matter I will have to agree with Suikai, this story is really awesome, in a weird way I absolutely love it

I think you managed to get beyond 143 comments... but I'll leave a little boost anyway:)

*mean snicker* I am working as fast as I can to piece together the next chapter. so don't worry, hopefully the next chapter is just around the corner. but I am thrilled I got the desired response I'll do my best not to disappoint your exspectations.

I happy you like the story. I was really surprised when they switched roles, as I hadn't really planned it. I had played with the idea, but it had just seemed really wrong. I guess, Dom wasn't mature enough at the time I considered it. But I loved this chapter as well, so much happens between Dom and Anikin. and after the Santiago insident I had a hard time fixing the relationship, but... It turned out alright in the end. There's a few chapters left so I hope you'll stay with the lads until the end:) Thanks for reading, loving and reviewing

I'm happy you liked the chapter. I have come to enjoy it quite a bit myself I'm working like crazy on the next chapter, trying to fit in all the bits and pieces. Hopefully it won't be too long a wait.

New chapter on it's way. So hopefully you won't have to wait long. But I'm happy you enjoyed that chapter

It was Friday evening and Anikin went to take a shower while I cleaned the kitchen. When I was done, I plopped down one the couch and turned on the TV. I zapped through the channels when suddenly something caught my attention and I had to flip back. There, on the screen was Anikin’s smiling face. “So, Mr. Westwood.” The middle-aged female interviewer looked up at Anikin, readying to ask a question. “Marshall, please.” Anikin corrected her with a smile. “Marshall? But isn’t your last name West

Thank you for enjoying the story so far. As I replied to Petey as well, I was in a situation where I didn't know how to fix the issues around the whole Anikin-Santiago insident, and this chapter was my resolve (not a very good one apparently) just to get it out of my head so I could move on. hopefully everything will fall in place in the second draft, with a good betareader to help me out. Anyway, I hope you will enjoy this new issue with Tina, it's going to be good:)

Aw, thank you... Well I did get a good grade... I always does - but even better now, thanks to you:) I've learn so much since you started helping me, and I am ever grateful for that:)

Thank you so much for the review. I always love when I get feedbacks I can use. I do realize that There are issues revolving the whole Anikin-Santiago insident, but I had no idea how to fix the uncertainty I'd created, and had hoped this would do the trick - apparently not *lol* Since this is only the first draft I chose to share with you guys, I am planning to use all the feedback I get to fix it in the second draft, which hopefully will turn into something publishable. Either way, I am glad you enjoy the story.

The stay at the hotel had felt like a trip to heaven. Anikin’s plan to make me feel like the center of his world had succeeded. And with this in mind, I got out of bed the following Monday with the goal of putting this damn Santiago incident behind me. I knew I was going to attend a shoot with Tamaki, so I decided to catch him before they started and have a talk with him. *** The shoot hadn’t begun yet, and people were still making the last preparations to get the lights set up. Michael, the p

Thank you for your review. I always appreciate when my readers like what I write and come with suggestions and ideas. and since this is a story I write chapter for chapter, I try to blend in whatever is suggested. So, thank you for the inspiration, and hopefully I will soon have chapter 15 ready, but it is some of a struggle to fit school, child, homework and hobby into 24 hours

I was in a daze Saturday morning as I stood in front of the large windows, watching the rain drizzle over the garden, leaving the stones dark and shiny. It had been three days since Anikin and I had made up, but I couldn’t seem to get back to normal. Sure, I was happy and all, although I felt self-conscious and Anikin seemed to tiptoe around me, which only annoyed me further. I knew it was mostly because I still felt the ache in my heart, when I thought of what had happened. Not to mention that

“I think I can fly.” I want to fly. I believe I can fly. I have a dream, a goal. Flying is the one thing I wish to achieve in my life. I was told young that flying wasn’t possible for humans. My mom told me this more than once, Dad too. However, my brother, Spark, believed in me and my strength. So I kept on dreaming. Sitting here on the pier, watching the boats float by, I wonder about my life. Maybe I’m a floater, not a flyer. Maybe I was actually meant to drift by, like the dinghy, the bow

God... I absolutely love Hunter and Grant... Awesome personalities

H F Christ... That has to be the hardest chapter ive ever had to read in my entire life. the fear, the pain. It was very easy to sympathize with the caracters on both an readers emotional level as well as on a personal level at some points. I really hope this story have a very very very happy ending, cause I am basically being pulled through hell here. And no I can't just stop... You have me totally captivated by your work with words....

*Scream* when did this turn into a freaking horror movie? Seriously, this is creeping me out! But... But... It's so good, can't stop now. Fuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuck...... Dammit You sure do know how to paint a realistic picture

So... Since last review their 'everyday' seems to have returned, I kind of have the feeling that something is comming... Is will really stalking him? Is he really there... good ode thing that Ben is finally getting some help... Hope it will finally give everyone some answers so things can move forward. things seems to have slowed down a bit for the two of them, sadly, and turned to the worse, but hopefully soon Ben will break through this bubble he's entered and things will change for the better.

Oh, I am so relieved. Thank god thing turned out right eventually. However, I loved the chapter but found it a bit confusing. Up until now Ben has been a nerve wrack, jumping and panicking over the tiniest things, ptsd and panic attacks. Now suddenly he travels on his own by bus for days, decides to stay with total strangers, he almost seems to be back to his usual self. I get resolution can be a strong guide, but... And thank god for fate. What if Rick hadn't showed up at the club on that particular night... I dare not think how it would've turned out. love the chapter, loved to see some backbone left in ben

Oh my... I cried... I did. i was surprised to see that James had actually loved Ben... But why leave him then? i love this story so much

*GASP - holding my breath* Noooooooo this is not happening!!!!!! reading on...

Omg... that was so scary. Never really knew PTSD was so frightening... I mean, sure there is a reason soldiers get all fucked up, but shit. I even wheezed along with Ben, there at the end.

I am so happy things turned out so well in the end. i have to agree with Rick, I like Ben on drugs hehe... But God his family sucks... I can never seem to understand those families who react like this. I wouldve told my mom/dad to just fuck off and mind their own business, but then again, the Danish mentallyty is nothing like the Amarican, so maybe that's the reason. never the less, I loved these last three? I think it's three... Chapters, not because Ben was hurt God, that was awful, but the simple detail of all the feelings, the insight in Bens wild youth (priceless), and their bonding, however awekward it's comming along. It's one of the things about this story that I love so much, they are actually bonding and falling in love, but the string holding them together is just to twisted and crooked, so your not really 100% sure about their feelings for each other - until now of cause, that is. A little sad way to tell your loved one about you feelings but... I'm still a little confused about why exactly it is that Ben insist Rick doesn't leave his side. I get he's afraid and all, but Rick never got a straight answer in the end when he asked, i get the bottom line of it but the top line... I hope it will come out later on