Mikiesboy

He was creepy.. but he got what he deserved..LOL

it is ... i came home and read about it.. and now sort of see what they were trying to say, but there was not enough structure in the film. Not enough info so we could see what was meant and happening. It was a good night though and we are enjoying this Flashback series.. they are doing all of the LOTR films in December. And a couple more we may want to go and see.

Your comments are taken with much love and benevolence .. each and every one of them xoxxoxo

Well last night was interesting. We went to see a film, neither of us had ever seen. We stopped to share a sub because we also wanted to get popcorn. All that went well. We got to the theatre, got popcorn.. found great seats. Others came in maybe there were 10 of us in all. Oddly, a bunch of people took off their shoes and put their feet up. That's a first. Michael plays the onscreen games and won a few Scene points. Scene is a points program. You collect them and get free films etc. Great .. finally the film starts 2001 a space odyssey. I expected it to be a bit odd. So it starts.. we watch. The guy down one row and a few seats over grunts.. puts on his shoes and walks out. Walks in about 5 minutes later. Screen goes blank. Very cute, well spoken guy appears .. Hi i'm one of the managers here ... seems your film started 1/2 way through.. we are going to restart it for you. Oh, okay.. weird. Film restarts. .. and does the same thing. They restart it. Film restarts ... does the same thing. Our new pal, William says I'll be here till 1:30am ... not going home.. we are going to try again and please see me once the film is finished. After another false start ... it finally plays. An hour in, the lights come on in the theatre. A worker comes in walks over and writes something on a clip board and leaves. A few minutes later the lights go down. This very weird movie finally ends. The lights do not come back on ... William appears while the credits roll ... a few minutes later the emergency lights come on. No one is upset or freaked out .. Michael and i were the youngest people in there soo everyone was cool. We walk down... William greets us and hands us each a free pass for another film. Apologizes. We tell him it's all fine. I said.. i think this place is haunted. He said, funny you say that. I've been told that booth 3 (our theatre) is supposedly haunted. LOL.. wow. I want to go back there! And the weirdness did not end there. We decided to go shop at walmart... at least five guys... two stinking of weed, one seriously drunk and singing god bless canada and two sober ones stopped us to ask Michael how tall he is. Months have gone by and no one has asked... they were all out last night. Michael's cop experience shows when dealing with high and drunk people. They love Him. That was my night ... and while i was impressed with a lot of the special effects in the film ... i had NO idea what it was about. Fecking weird. I wonder if the book is easier to understand.

Thank you for gulping it down! i love the way you put that. There were some light-hearted moments along the way .. like there are in life. I hope you will read the rest to see how the story ends. I feel grateful to you and every person who chooses to read my work. It is amazing to me, each and every time. Thank you. xoxoo

I write an outline .. honestly what happened in this chapter was not in it. It was very organic and 'of the moment' this chapter. I have a hard time reading this, it is sad and Keter's courage truly comes to the fore. Thanks very much for reading this and for your wonderful comments. Much appreciated.

Indeed what happens to him? Will the god still want him? Will he want to go on? I'll tell you and hope the rest of this story answers questions. Thanks very much Jeffrey.

Interesting ... what does Fathril do? Thanks for your comments, Drought. I appreciate your support, my friend.

i cannot read this either without tears .. there is more to come thanks for your support rick. It means a lot to me. xo

Stravor was a fixer for his god. He was kind of mindless ... but Keter found a way to melt that heart ... along with Shade as well. Stravor slowly began to see that life could be more ... and that life was worth the chance. But Keter's dreams showed him more... thanks Wayne for reading and for your input and support. xoxo

Stravor was torn since he was told what was expected of him. They had moments of love, peace and anger, frustration as they travelled and managed to forget the end game for awhile. Meanwhile...we will see what comes. Thanks, A xo

Thanks very much, Chris. I appreciate your support.. means a lot to me. xo

Thanks for reading and for your comments. i hope you will continue to read to find out what comes next. Thanks very much, Parker. xoxo

i don't know why but i hope you read to find out what comes next. Thanks for your comments, Kitt.

me too ... i cannot read this one easily. Thanks for your comments and support.

Thanks Michael. I'm glad the chapter worked well. Thanks for reading it xo

Okay.. Michael is taking me for a bite to eat and a movie.. then we'll go shopping at wally world so we do not need to shop tomorrow. See you all later..

you too, my friend. have a good day.

Keter awoke early. Bird song had barely begun and the sun’s kiss had just reached the lowest horizon, when he opened his eyes. He slipped out of Stravor’s embrace; the other man turning over with a groan. The lad sat frozen until his lover settled back down to sleep. Then from under his corner of the blanket he pulled his few supplies. They had been hidden the night before. He was on his feet then and he ran with the lightness of a spring hopper. He made his way through the woods, far eno

longer birthdays are a good thing ... several days i think should be a thing

Thank you very much, Dodger. I really enjoyed writing this story. There are lots of little hints scattered around ... I glad you are enjoying this.

Thanks very much, Thorn. Thanks for sharing all of that.. god.. i think i'd hope a film was made of it.. not spend my time trying to film it on ... well.. anything. I went for the experience... that's sad. But thank you for sharing it. xo

Thanks very much A ... it's true .. i see things.. i look around and no one else does... like the rabbit who lives near our work.. or the pink pony.. i like my phone and tech, but i am happy enough without it , too.

Thank you, Michael. xo